2007年12月英語六級短文改錯(十五)

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本期重點:句子結構不完整
    比較復雜的復合句最容易出現此類錯誤,因為句子較長,缺少了某個成分,如主語、謂語、賓語、連詞等等。
    考點例析:
    例1: If his aim is inaccurate and he scores a goal, enjoys S3.____
    the hunter’s triumph of killing his prey.
    解析:這是由一個條件狀語從句引導的復合句。但主句只有謂語動詞enjoys,缺少主語,因此要步上主語。根據從句的his aim可推斷應該加上主語he。
    例2:Nuclear physicists who interested in the structure of 5._________
    atoms cannot observe protons, electrons and neutrons
    directly.
    解析:如果將who后面的部分作定語從句,那么它絕少謂語,故將who去掉,此時分詞短語interested in直接作定語修飾前面的physicists?;蛟趙ho后加are,補全定語從句。
    例3:This alliance guarantees that all leprosy patients, even they S6.______
    are poor, have a right to the most modern treatment.
    解析:even是副詞,后面不能直接跟句子,根據句子的意思,應該在even后加if或though。
    鞏固與拓展
    1. A student of music needs as long and as arduous a training
    to become a performer a medical student needs to become __________
    a doctor.
    2. This trip can be found in a booklet, Passport to the Pub:
    The Tourists’ Guide to Pub Etiquette, a customers’ code of
    conduct for those want to sample "a central part of British ________
    life and culture.
    3. When a new robot is introduced to a small suburban
    factory, a Shinto priest is invited to inaugurate. _________
    4. Since the law made easier to get a divorce, the number of __________
    divorces has increased.
    5. Another changehas been caused by the fact people are _______
    living longer nowadays, and many old people live alone
    following the death of their partners
    綜合訓練
    Many peolpe than ever are drinking coffee these days -- but in small 1.____
    quantities than they used to. Some manufacturers of coffee makers are
    trying to make advantage of this trend by developing diminutive machines 2.___
    that brew(煮)smaller amounts of coffee. Two U.S appliance companies
    ---Black&Decker, basing in Twson, Maryland, and Toastmaster Inc. 3.___
    of Columbia, Missouri ---has recently introduce "drip" Coffee makers that 4.____
    brew one or two cup servings of coffee. Neither of the products brew the 5._____
    coffee directly into a cup or mug, eliminating the need for a separate
    carafe. Since many people make a pot of coffee in the morning and drink 6.____
    only a single cup, the new cofee makers should reduce the wasted coffee.
    Black&Decker’s Cup-at-a-Time spends $27, while Toastmaster’s Coffee 7.___
    Break retails for $20.
    Black&Decker also makes a coffee maker drips coffee directly into a 8.____
    carry-around thermal carafe. The carafe, a glass vacuum bottle, is supposed
    to keep the coffee fresh for hours. The product, called the Thermal Carafe
    coffee-maker, comes with a built-in lid that opens during the brewing
    process, closes when it is completed. There are several models, including 9.____
    one that firs under the counter, ranging from $60 to $110 at price. 10._____