寫作:六級四十天突破—講義與筆記(13)

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一、語法錯誤
    二、詞匯錯誤
    三、邏輯錯誤
    四、多詞少詞
    Example:Television is rapidly becoming the literature
    of our periods. Many of the arguments 1.time/times/age
    having used for the study for literature as a 2. /
    school subject are valid for ∧ study of television. 3. the
    綜 合 改 錯(Errors Correction):
     一、 語法錯誤
    1、平行結(jié)構(gòu)(not only...but also\both...and\either...or\and)
     1) A professor’s salary is higher than a secretary.[secretary’s]
     2) One of these is informative, interesting, and is easy to understand.[去掉]
    3) Defining a problem is easier than to provide a solution.[providing]
    2、連詞錯誤
    1) Candle will later be replaced by lamp, that could burn longer and lighter. [which]
    2) The children attended a small elementary school (often of just one room) to that they had to walk every day, possibly for a few miles. [which,that前只能有except和in。except that除此以外;in that因為,體現(xiàn)在]
    3) It will be interesting to discover how many young people go to universities without any idea of that they are going to do afterward. [what,what相當(dāng)于the thing that]
    4) It appears that we all find company in sound, if we demand a little quiet from time to time. [but或yet]
    5) They are likely to travel more and to want more education. Nevertheless, many more jobs are available in these services. [Therefore或So]
    3、分詞錯誤
    1) Police’s records show a surprised link between changes in the seasons and crime patterns. [surprising]
     2) Deciding how much discomfort and risk we are preparing to put up with in the name of better health is a high personal matter, not a decision we should remain to doctors alone.
    3) Even the quiet of our careful protected wilderness areas can be invaded at any moment by a passed jet. [passing]
    4) So a sportsman’s individual way of walking with raised shoulders is imitated by an admired fan. [admiring]
    4、指代錯誤
     1) A break in their employment, or a decision to work part time, will slow its raises and promotions-because it would for men. [their]
     2) Clearly some risks worth taking, especially when the rewards are high: a man surrounded by flames and smoke generally considers that jumping out of a second-floor window is an acceptable risk to save its life. [his]
     3) The modern light-house also identifies it in a code known to all ships. [itself]
    5、形容詞、副詞(略)
    6、謂語錯誤(主謂一致、時態(tài)、語態(tài))
    1) Business today whether it is running a little gas-station or a big factory take good management.[takes]
    2) Advances in technology has also changed people’s lives.
    3) But if 98 percent of us doesn’t need to work, what are we going to do with ourselves? [don’t]
    4) Whether women who have started a career will attain pay equality with men rest on at least two factors. [rests]
     5) In some places all the trees have cut down. [have been]
    二、詞匯錯誤(搭配錯誤、用詞錯誤)
    三、邏輯錯誤(肯定否定亂用)
    1) Blood pressure drugs definitely help some people live after a heart attack, but these same drugs may be both necessary and harmful for those with only mild blood pressure problems. [unnecessary]
    2) In every case, the influential person may consciously notice the imitation but he will feel comfortable in its presence. [unconsciously]
    四、多詞少詞(介詞、冠詞、形式賓語)
    1) When two Americans meet for first time, it is normal for them to call each other by their given name immediately. [the first]
     2)In fact, until recently seawater has almost be considered to be useless and no value. [of no]