下面是出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)GMAT頻道整理的2015年7月GMAT寫作機(jī)經(jīng)(一)：公司軟件，歡迎閱讀。
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公司軟件
【1】Bycolline
回來發(fā)現(xiàn)作文就是5月JJ里面第11篇Accounting software，我看5月總結(jié)的已經(jīng)很充實(shí)了……好像沒有變。
From GMAT AWA 最新題庫(kù) - 2010
The following appeared in a memorandum to a team developing accounting software for SmartPro Software, Inc.:
“Currently, more professional accountants use SmartPro accounting software than any other brand. However, in the market for personal accounting software for non-professionals to use in preparing their income tax returns, many of our competitors are outselling us. In surveys, our professional customers repeatedly say that they have chosen SmartPro Software because our most sophisticated software products include more advanced special features than competing brands. Therefore, the most effective way for us to increase sales of our personal accounting software for home users would clearly be to add the advanced special features that our professional software products currently offer.”
1. 錯(cuò)誤比較：他家的產(chǎn)品收專業(yè)人士歡迎是因?yàn)榉嫌脩粜枨?，the fact that competitor’s product is more popular with homeuser may contribute to the good user experience, integrated function, or beautiful user interface.
2. 無根據(jù)假設(shè)：把專業(yè)產(chǎn)品加到homeuser的軟件中去一定能提高銷量嗎?用戶可能因?yàn)楣δ芴?，操作不便捷等原因不使用Smartpro的專業(yè)產(chǎn)品。
3. 因果關(guān)系：提高銷量的辦法不止是擴(kuò)大使用群體，還可能是降價(jià)增加競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力，研發(fā)多元化的產(chǎn)品等。