Eye behavior can give subtle messages which people pick up intheir daily life. It tells more than words can. Meeting or failing tomeet another person’s eyes produce a particular effect.Whentwo Americans __1__
look searchingly at each other’s eye, emotions are __2__heightened and the relationship becomes closer.
However, Americans are careful about where and when to __3__ meet other’s eye. In our normalconversation, each eye-contract lasts only a few seconds before one or both individuals look away,because the longer meeting of the eyes is rare, and, after it happens, can generate __4__ a specialkind of human-to-human awareness.
For instance, by simple using his eyes, a man can make a woman aware of him comfortably oruncomfortably; a long and steady gaze from a policeman or judge intimidates accused. __5__
In the U.S., proper street behavior requires a nice balance of attention and inattention. You aresupposed to look at a passer-by just enough to show that you are being aware of his presence. Ifyou look too little, __6__you appear haughty; too much, inquisitive.
Much eye behavior is such subtle that our reaction to it is __7__ largely instinctive.
Besides, the codes of eye behavior vary dramatically from one culture to other. In the __8__
Middle East, it is impolite to look at the other person all the time during a conversation; in England,the polite listener fixes the speaker with an inattentive __9__ stare and blinks eye occasionally as asign of interest and attention.
In America, eye behavior functions as a kind of conversational traffic signal control the __10__talking pace and time, and to indicate a change of topic.
參考答案及解析:
1.把produce改為produces
本句中兩個主語meeting和failing to meet another person’s eye用or連接，這時謂語動詞應(yīng)該采取就近原則，與最相鄰的主語一致。
2.把a(bǔ)t改為into
此處的動作應(yīng)該是look into(注視)，而不是一般的“看”(look at)。
3.把where改為how
上下文介紹的是目光交流的方式方法。
4.把a(bǔ)fter改為when/if
5.在accused前面加上the
intimidate(脅迫)是一個及物動詞，后面不能只接形容詞，此處應(yīng)該加上定冠詞，與accused構(gòu)成名詞短語，表示一類人，即“被告”。本句的意思是：
例如，只要運(yùn)用目光，男人就可以讓女人很自在或者不舒服地感覺到他的存在;而警察或法官的長時間的注視可以威嚇被告。
6.刪除being
7.把such改為so
8.把other改為another
表示不定指代的“一個或者另一個”應(yīng)該用one and/or another。
9.把inattentive改為attentive
10.在control前面加上to
control the talking pace and time 應(yīng)該和to indicate a change of topic并列，作為conversationaltraffic signal 的定語，也要用動詞不定式。