中考英語動(dòng)態(tài):08高考英語真題 作文點(diǎn)評(píng) 陜西

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    親愛的同學(xué)們,首先祝賀大家順利結(jié)束高考。對(duì)于今年的英語作文,大家應(yīng)該感到異常開心,因?yàn)閷?shí)際就是我在課堂強(qiáng)調(diào)多次的模版都給爛了的現(xiàn)象類的議論文。對(duì)于“周五讀報(bào)活動(dòng)”這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的看法,分析原因,最后提出自己的建議,簡直一模一樣,一點(diǎn)不差。只是需要在前面加一個(gè)稱謂,因?yàn)槭茄葜v稿。我們?cè)谡n堂強(qiáng)調(diào)的句型和詞匯全部可以派上用場,你用了沒有。大家來看看吧,是不是全部是我們課堂強(qiáng)調(diào)過的內(nèi)容。而且,關(guān)于“讀書活動(dòng)周”,我們?cè)趶?qiáng)化班也講過,很類似這次的“讀報(bào)活動(dòng)”,你可以去翻翻講義的第五講。
    某天,你班貼出了一張通知,請(qǐng)根據(jù)通知,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)和要求寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿。
    內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):
    1 你對(duì)“周五讀報(bào)活動(dòng)”的看法。
    2 陳述你的理由(可舉例說明)。
    3 你的具體建議。
    My dear classmates,
    Our monitor suggests that we have "Friday News Hour". As to this activity, I really suppose it is beneficial to us students. The reasons are as follows. ( There are a couple of reasons as follows.)
    To begin with, we can open our horizon and enlarge our konwledge by reading newspaper
    because it contains a lot of information. In addition, reading newspaper enables us to get closer to the world and know what happened at present at home and abroad. For example, we may know more information about the massive earthquake in Sichuan the torch relay of the Olympic Games in deferrent places. Last but not least, students may stay away from netbar due to the attraction of reading newspaper.
    From my perspective As far as I'm concerned, the activity should be held regularly on
    Friday. Apart from this, we can have some heated discussion based on what we have read in newspwper.
    I do believe this activity will be of great benefit to us and attract every single student.
    范文解析:
    1. as to “就什么來說”, as to the climate ( 講西安我的家鄉(xiāng)時(shí)講過)
    2. suppose “我認(rèn)為”,有很多詞來替換think包括 hold the viwe that, consider
    3. be beneficial tobe of great benefit to “對(duì)什么有好處”,我的嘴都說出泡的表達(dá)。
    4. The reasons are as follows. “原因如下”,強(qiáng)調(diào)過N次的模版句。
    5. to begin with in addition apart fromlast but not least 也是說破嘴的邏輯詞
    6.open one's horizen 開闊視野 enlarge one's knowledge 增長知識(shí)
    7.at home and abroad “國內(nèi)外”
    8. enable sb to so sth “使某人做某事”,我們講義上還有
    9. torch relay 這是我在各個(gè)班最后都提到的“火炬?zhèn)鬟f”,高考閱卷下周二在外院開始,老師們看到這個(gè)很新穎的舉例,你的分?jǐn)?shù)自然不會(huì)低
    10. due to “由于”,to是介詞,當(dāng)時(shí)還講了owning to, thanks to ,進(jìn)行了區(qū)別
    11. from my perspective as far as i'm concerned “就我來看”,我講過N+1次的
    12. heated discussion “激烈討論”,正反觀點(diǎn)類模版第一句中講過
    13.do believe 主動(dòng)啟用強(qiáng)調(diào)句(句子多樣性原則)
    很多同學(xué)在考前頭一天給我電話說是不是語文考了地震,英語會(huì)不會(huì)也出現(xiàn),大家是多慮了,陜西考區(qū)全國三卷的水平,話題絕對(duì)都是最簡單,最基本的和學(xué)生生活相關(guān)話題,不管怎么樣,考試結(jié)束了,努力總有回報(bào),是收獲的季節(jié)了。大家可以留言交流一下你的作文和想法。我想,對(duì)于所有上過我作文的同學(xué)可以做到問心無愧了,享受假期,但是也為未來盡早做準(zhǔn)備吧!
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