2013年新gre考試:gre作文寫(xiě)作Active模板的用法

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    語(yǔ)言質(zhì)量的提高是一個(gè)漫長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程,這需要我們及早做好規(guī)劃,按部就班地來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)和提高。對(duì)于GRE寫(xiě)作,我們可以掌握一些GRE寫(xiě)作模板,這樣能夠更有針對(duì)性地進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作練習(xí)。
    Active模板:
    GRE寫(xiě)作模板使用策略:
    1. 確定文章主體框架結(jié)構(gòu),包括引出觀點(diǎn)和總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)的詞匯,句式,這個(gè)可能是大多數(shù)模板的水平;
    2. 確定論證過(guò)程的框架,每個(gè)支持段落都有各自的論證模式,舉例,因果,對(duì)比等,確定到論證的邏輯引導(dǎo)詞上;
    3. 通過(guò)改寫(xiě)句子,采用合適的詞匯代替以上兩步的成果;
    4. 改變句式,將各類(lèi)語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)加入其中:倒裝,獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu),虛擬語(yǔ)氣等。
    2. 中間各段:<提出分論點(diǎn)><解釋分論點(diǎn)><總結(jié)分論點(diǎn)/聯(lián)系主觀點(diǎn)>
    即在每個(gè)分段的最后總結(jié)一下分論點(diǎn)和主觀點(diǎn)之間的聯(lián)系。
    3. 注意句式變換,盡量不要簡(jiǎn)單句并列使用
    4. 能夠用which、where等連詞連起來(lái)的句子就盡量連起來(lái),減少零碎句子
    注意:可以在不同句子中重復(fù)同一意思,但不要在同一句話中重復(fù)相同意思
    開(kāi)頭:
    Perhaps no issue in this world is as significant to people as (名詞大類(lèi)). 或 It is not uncommon that 背景描述或 Undoubtedly, … plays a significant role in modern people’s life.
    Although people argue for whether 題目重述, bias is detrimental to our learning for that agreements and disagreements form an organic entity.
    But in spite of various controversies, I, if given the chance, prefer to endorse that 我的觀點(diǎn).
    主體段1:
    Indeed, 觀點(diǎn)1
    The fact that ...... , apparently, is indisputable.
    ……
    短例子
    However, cogent as it is, clearly can we identify the weakness of this viewpoint in that it is too arbitrary.
    主體段2:
    Among the most convincing reasons for 論述(A好過(guò)B), one that should be emphasized is 觀點(diǎn)2
    It is universally acknowledged that + 客觀事實(shí)
    ……
    There is an example that could aptly illustrate this point. 例子2
    Hence, I assert that 觀點(diǎn)2
    主體段3:
    Aside from 觀點(diǎn)2,no one could neglect the fact that + 觀點(diǎn)3.
    An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that 觀點(diǎn)3的好處
    Only when … does someone learn that …
    ……
    According to a recent survey of (United Nations Educational Scientific and Cultural Organization) / (Global Daily), about / over 數(shù)據(jù) of 特定身份 + 陳述事實(shí).
    As reasonable as it is, the necessity/validity of 觀點(diǎn)3 is conspicuous。
    結(jié)尾:
    In sum, admittedly, it would appear that(反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn))may have certain merits at first glance. But as we think further, we will find that this assertion is fatally flawed due to a lack of overall consideration for ignoring that (正方觀點(diǎn)歸納). Taking all factors into account, I deem that(支持的觀點(diǎn)).
    Recommend:
    Conducive
    形容詞:
    Important : essential, significant, crucial, fundamental
    Big : tremendous, immense, massive
    Good : spectacular, outstanding, remarkable, magnificent
    Many: numerous, myriad, infinite, countless, enormous
    Beautiful: charming, charismatic, sweet
    Clever: brilliant, knowledgeable, intellectual, intelligent
    Happy: delightful, overjoyed, pleased
    Fast: swift, quick, rapid, speedy
    Difficult: hard, tricky, complicated, complex, intricate
    Dangerous: hazardous, insecure, risky, unsafe, vulnerable
    Real: authentic
    same time: simultaneously
    動(dòng)詞:
    Think (that): hold the (opinion/ belief/ position/stand point/idea) that, assume, believe, argue, maintain, suppose, conceive, insist(堅(jiān)定認(rèn)為)★★★★★
    Show: convey★★★★★, reveal, imply, demonstrate, denote★★★★★, indicate
    Know: realize, identify, notice, perceive, recognize
    Get: acquire, attain, achieve(本詞其實(shí)很棒,但是只限于艱苦努力后的獲得), gain
    Suggest: have a proposal in,
    Increase: magnify, expand, enhance, advance★★★★★
    Affect: Impress★★★★★, influence★★★★★, impact★★★★★
    Stop: cease to be(不再是)★★★★★, put an end to★★★★★, terminate★★
    Make: create★★★★★, construct★★★★★, form★★★★★
    Give: present, donate★★★★★, provide, supply
    Break:separate, crack★★★★★, destroy, disintegrate
    Destroy: ruin★★★★★, crush★★★★★, devastate★★★★★
    Happen: occur, come about★★★★★, develop, result, take place
    名詞:
    Young people : youngster (可數(shù))
    Fact: reality
    寫(xiě)作注意:
    1. 雙謂語(yǔ)問(wèn)題
    2. 病態(tài)用法:a man 改為:one
    3. 少用thing
    4. 病態(tài)用法:
    since … so …
    nature’s應(yīng)該寫(xiě)作 natural
    few actions can be taken 不用done
    aside from no acting 應(yīng)改為 aside from lacking of action
    5. 避免使用不正式用法,比如it’s
    6. 表示“非常”pretty比較口語(yǔ)化 extremely relatively
    7. Graduates in different majors不地道,應(yīng)改為graduates major in different fields
    8. Social recognition 對(duì)社會(huì)的認(rèn)識(shí),不要用realization of society / working experience而非 the experience of working
    9. 用on one hand … on the other hand… 不用on the one hand…on the other
    10. Immaturity Not inmaturity
    11. Dilemma Not dillema
    以上就是一些GRE寫(xiě)作模板及寫(xiě)作策略,希望能幫助到大家。各位考生在新GRE寫(xiě)作中要格外重視邏輯思維,寫(xiě)的文章不要太大眾化,也不要太偏激,一定要讓ETS讀懂。