2012gre寫作寶典:歷年GRE考試Issue主題范文及評析21

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    Theneedforgeneralistsisundeniablebutonecannotunderestimatetheneedandimportanceofspecialists.Themedicalprofessionisagoodexampleofanareathatrequiresbothgeneralistsandspecialists.Iftherewerenogeneralistsintheprofessiontherewouldbenoonetohelppatientsdeterminewhenaspecialistwasneeded.Therearecertainproblemsthatageneralpractitionercantakecareofandthereareotherproblemsthatareoutofhisorherleague.Thegeneralpractitioneristheanappropriateplacetostartwhenapatientdevelopsaproblem.Manytimesthegeneralpractitionerismorethancapableofhandlingproblemsthatariseandothertimesheorsheisunabletofullytakecontrolofthepatient’scare.Itisn’tafaultwiththegeneralpractitioners.Thereisjusttoomuchtoknowforanyonepersontobeanexpertonalltopics.Ittakespeopleyearstobecomeexpertsonasingletopic,nevermindbeinganexpertoneverythinginthemedicalprofession.
    Iamcurrentlyworkinginalargeteachinghospitalwheretheneedforbothgeneralpractitionersandspecialistsisobvious.Whenapatientisadmittedtoageneralmedicinefloor,thegeneralmedicinephysiciansarenotalwaysabletodealwitheveryproblemthepatienthaswithoutsomehelpfromthespecialists.Itwouldbeunrealistic,nottomentionunfairtothegeneralpractitioners,toexpectthegeneralpractitionerstoknoweverythingabouteverything.Thekeyistoknowwhereeveryone’sknowledgeandareaofexpertiselieandusetheirstrengthstooptimizepatientcare.
    OnthegeneralmedicineteaminwhichIworked,theteamwouldconstantlyberequestingconsultsfromspecialists.Whetheritbearenal,psychiatric,orthopedic,rehabilitation,speech,gastroenterologist,oranyotherspecialist,theirinputwasconstantlyneededandusedtogetthepatientwellasquicklyaspossible.Thelistofspecialistscangoonlongerthanonewouldthinkanditisjustimpossibleforonepersontoknoweverythingabouteachoneofthem.
    Althoughtheneedforgeneralistsisapparent,itwouldbehardtosurvivewithoutspecialists,also.Whenapersonactsasageneralist,theyknowlittlebitabouteverything,butcertainlynotatotallyinclusiveknowledgeofeverything.Thespecialististheretohelpaddtheexpertiseandinclusiveknowledgethatthegeneralistmaybelacking.Themostimportantthingtorememberwithspecialistsandgeneralistsistorecognizeboth’sstrengthsandweaknessesandcapitalizeonthestrengthstoachievewhatevergoalmaybedesired. 外語學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)
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    Overall,thisisacompetentresponsetothetopic.Thewriterdisputestheclaimthat"specialistsareover-rated"andarguesfromthepositionthatbothspecialistsandgeneralistsareneeded.Thesingleextendedexampleclearlysupportsthepremiseoftheargumentasthewritercomparestherolesandresponsibilitiesofgeneralistsandspecialistsinthemedicalprofession.Byparagraph3,however,thediscussionfalters,andtheconcludingparagraphdoeslittlemorethanrepeatideaspresentedinthefirsttwoparagraphs.
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