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題目：
The following was written as a part of an application for a small-business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe.
"A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently， the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away； thus， the proposed new jazz club in Monroe， the C-Note， would have the local market all to itself. Plus， jazz is extremely popular in Monroe： over 100，000 people attended Monroe's annual jazz festival last summer； several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe； and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly，' which airs every weeknight at 7 P.M. Finally， a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1，000 per year on jazz entertainment."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
中文翻譯：
在Monroe 建立爵士樂(lè)俱樂(lè)部將會(huì)是非常盈利的產(chǎn)業(yè)。當(dāng)前，最近的爵士俱樂(lè)部也在65 英里以外；因此，我們籌建的俱樂(lè)部C Note 將會(huì)占有全部的本地市場(chǎng)。而且，爵士樂(lè)在Monroe 非常流行：去年夏天10 萬(wàn)多人參加了Monroe 的爵士音樂(lè)節(jié)，若干知名爵士音樂(lè)家居住在Monroe，Monroe 獲評(píng)價(jià)最高的廣播節(jié)目是平時(shí)每天播出的Jazz Nightly.最后，一項(xiàng)全國(guó)性研究表明典型的爵士愛(ài)好者每年花費(fèi)近1000 元用于爵士娛樂(lè)。
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題目：
The following was written as a part of an application for a small-business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe.
"A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently， the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away； thus， the proposed new jazz club in Monroe， the C-Note， would have the local market all to itself. Plus， jazz is extremely popular in Monroe： over 100，000 people attended Monroe's annual jazz festival last summer； several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe； and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly，' which airs every weeknight at 7 P.M. Finally， a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1，000 per year on jazz entertainment."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
中文翻譯：
在Monroe 建立爵士樂(lè)俱樂(lè)部將會(huì)是非常盈利的產(chǎn)業(yè)。當(dāng)前，最近的爵士俱樂(lè)部也在65 英里以外；因此，我們籌建的俱樂(lè)部C Note 將會(huì)占有全部的本地市場(chǎng)。而且，爵士樂(lè)在Monroe 非常流行：去年夏天10 萬(wàn)多人參加了Monroe 的爵士音樂(lè)節(jié)，若干知名爵士音樂(lè)家居住在Monroe，Monroe 獲評(píng)價(jià)最高的廣播節(jié)目是平時(shí)每天播出的Jazz Nightly.最后，一項(xiàng)全國(guó)性研究表明典型的爵士愛(ài)好者每年花費(fèi)近1000 元用于爵士娛樂(lè)。
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