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【題目】210 The following is a letter to the editor of a news magazine.
Clearly， the successful use of robots on missions to explore outer space in the past 20 years demonstrates that robots could be increasingly used to perform factory work more effectively， efficiently， and profitably than human factory workers. The use of robots in factories would offer several advantages. First， robots never get sick， so absenteeism would be reduced. Second， robots do not make mistakes， so factories would increase their output. Finally， the use of robots would also improve the morale of factory workers， since factory work can be so boring that many workers would be glad to shift to more interesting kinds of tasks.
【翻譯】顯然，過去20年中機(jī)器人在探索外層空間任務(wù)中的成功使用證明，機(jī)器人可以比人類工作人員更有效、更有益地用于進(jìn)行很多工作。工廠中機(jī)器人的使用將帶來若干好處。首先，機(jī)器人從不生病，從而曠工將會(huì)減少。其次，機(jī)器人不會(huì)出錯(cuò)，因此工廠產(chǎn)量將會(huì)增加。最后，使用機(jī)器人同樣也會(huì)提高工廠工人的精神狀態(tài)，因?yàn)楣S工作有時(shí)如此枯燥以至于很多工人將會(huì)樂于轉(zhuǎn)換到更有趣的任務(wù)。
【找關(guān)鍵詞，梳理邏輯層次】
Clearly， the successful use of robots on missions to explore outer space in the past 20 years demonstrates that robots could be increasingly used to perform factory work more effectively， efficiently， and profitably than human factory workers. The use of robots in factories would offer several advantages. First， robots never get sick， so absenteeism would be reduced. Second， robots do not make mistakes， so factories would increase their output. Finally， the use of robots would also improve the morale of factory workers， since factory work can be so boring that many workers would be glad to shift to more interesting kinds of tasks.
【題目拆析】
論點(diǎn)： Clearly， the successful use of robots on missions to explore outer space in the past 20 years demonstrates that robots could be increasingly used to perform factory work more effectively， efficiently， and profitably than human factory workers. The use of robots in factories would offer several advantages.
論據(jù)：
1、First， robots never get sick， so absenteeism would be reduced. 首先，機(jī)器人從不生病，從而曠工將會(huì)減少。
2、Second， robots do not make mistakes， so factories would increase their output. 其次，機(jī)器人不會(huì)出錯(cuò)，因此工廠產(chǎn)量將會(huì)增加。
3、Finally， the use of robots would also improve the morale of factory workers， since factory work can so boring that many workers would be glad to shift to more interesting kinds of tasks. 最后，使用機(jī)器人同樣也會(huì)提高工廠工人的精神狀態(tài)，因?yàn)楣S工作有時(shí)如此枯燥以至于很多工人將會(huì)樂于轉(zhuǎn)換到更有趣的任務(wù)。
【攻擊分析】
論據(jù)1:雖然機(jī)器人不會(huì)生病，但是它也會(huì)產(chǎn)生機(jī)械故障，停止工作，阻礙生產(chǎn)。錯(cuò)誤類比
論據(jù)2:
A.機(jī)器人也會(huì)出錯(cuò)，因?yàn)樗怯杏芍苯踊蛘唛g接控制的。EG.控制機(jī)器人的程序出現(xiàn)問題，“千年蟲”
B.機(jī)器人出錯(cuò)與否和產(chǎn)量增加沒有必然聯(lián)系。產(chǎn)量的提升是由諸多因素構(gòu)成的。
論據(jù)3:機(jī)器人的大量使用必然代替了工人的勞動(dòng)崗位，致使工人焦慮，大量的事業(yè)肯定不會(huì)讓工人們有很高的精神狀態(tài)。
對于論據(jù)1、2、3、而言：只提機(jī)器人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)而對其缺點(diǎn)閉口不談一面之詞
結(jié)論: 機(jī)器人在外層空間里的成功并不能說明它能在實(shí)際的工廠生產(chǎn)中起到它相應(yīng)的作用。
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【題目】210 The following is a letter to the editor of a news magazine.
Clearly， the successful use of robots on missions to explore outer space in the past 20 years demonstrates that robots could be increasingly used to perform factory work more effectively， efficiently， and profitably than human factory workers. The use of robots in factories would offer several advantages. First， robots never get sick， so absenteeism would be reduced. Second， robots do not make mistakes， so factories would increase their output. Finally， the use of robots would also improve the morale of factory workers， since factory work can be so boring that many workers would be glad to shift to more interesting kinds of tasks.
【翻譯】顯然，過去20年中機(jī)器人在探索外層空間任務(wù)中的成功使用證明，機(jī)器人可以比人類工作人員更有效、更有益地用于進(jìn)行很多工作。工廠中機(jī)器人的使用將帶來若干好處。首先，機(jī)器人從不生病，從而曠工將會(huì)減少。其次，機(jī)器人不會(huì)出錯(cuò)，因此工廠產(chǎn)量將會(huì)增加。最后，使用機(jī)器人同樣也會(huì)提高工廠工人的精神狀態(tài)，因?yàn)楣S工作有時(shí)如此枯燥以至于很多工人將會(huì)樂于轉(zhuǎn)換到更有趣的任務(wù)。
【找關(guān)鍵詞，梳理邏輯層次】
Clearly， the successful use of robots on missions to explore outer space in the past 20 years demonstrates that robots could be increasingly used to perform factory work more effectively， efficiently， and profitably than human factory workers. The use of robots in factories would offer several advantages. First， robots never get sick， so absenteeism would be reduced. Second， robots do not make mistakes， so factories would increase their output. Finally， the use of robots would also improve the morale of factory workers， since factory work can be so boring that many workers would be glad to shift to more interesting kinds of tasks.
【題目拆析】
論點(diǎn)： Clearly， the successful use of robots on missions to explore outer space in the past 20 years demonstrates that robots could be increasingly used to perform factory work more effectively， efficiently， and profitably than human factory workers. The use of robots in factories would offer several advantages.
論據(jù)：
1、First， robots never get sick， so absenteeism would be reduced. 首先，機(jī)器人從不生病，從而曠工將會(huì)減少。
2、Second， robots do not make mistakes， so factories would increase their output. 其次，機(jī)器人不會(huì)出錯(cuò)，因此工廠產(chǎn)量將會(huì)增加。
3、Finally， the use of robots would also improve the morale of factory workers， since factory work can so boring that many workers would be glad to shift to more interesting kinds of tasks. 最后，使用機(jī)器人同樣也會(huì)提高工廠工人的精神狀態(tài)，因?yàn)楣S工作有時(shí)如此枯燥以至于很多工人將會(huì)樂于轉(zhuǎn)換到更有趣的任務(wù)。
【攻擊分析】
論據(jù)1:雖然機(jī)器人不會(huì)生病，但是它也會(huì)產(chǎn)生機(jī)械故障，停止工作，阻礙生產(chǎn)。錯(cuò)誤類比
論據(jù)2:
A.機(jī)器人也會(huì)出錯(cuò)，因?yàn)樗怯杏芍苯踊蛘唛g接控制的。EG.控制機(jī)器人的程序出現(xiàn)問題，“千年蟲”
B.機(jī)器人出錯(cuò)與否和產(chǎn)量增加沒有必然聯(lián)系。產(chǎn)量的提升是由諸多因素構(gòu)成的。
論據(jù)3:機(jī)器人的大量使用必然代替了工人的勞動(dòng)崗位，致使工人焦慮，大量的事業(yè)肯定不會(huì)讓工人們有很高的精神狀態(tài)。
對于論據(jù)1、2、3、而言：只提機(jī)器人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)而對其缺點(diǎn)閉口不談一面之詞
結(jié)論: 機(jī)器人在外層空間里的成功并不能說明它能在實(shí)際的工廠生產(chǎn)中起到它相應(yīng)的作用。
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