GRE作文是中國(guó)學(xué)生比較頭痛的，經(jīng)常準(zhǔn)備很多時(shí)間最后還是只得到3.5。我之所以得到6分，個(gè)人認(rèn)為我的文風(fēng)比較淳樸扎實(shí)，有科學(xué)性，寫(xiě)的思路比較廣(正、反、特)，字?jǐn)?shù)也比較多(I800+、A700+)。
題目：
"Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin， a medicine used to treat headaches. Although many foods are naturally rich in salicylates， for the past several decades， food-processing companies have also been adding salicylates to foods as preservatives. This rise in the commercial use of salicylates has been found to correlate with a steady decline in the average number of headaches reported by participants in our twenty-year study. Recently， food-processing companies have found that salicylates can also be used as flavor additives for foods. With this new use for salicylates， we can expect a continued steady decline in the number of headaches suffered by the average citizen of Mentia."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
中文翻譯：
水楊酸酯和用來(lái)治療頭痛的藥物——阿司匹林是同一類(lèi)化合物。盡管很多食品天然富含水楊酸酯，過(guò)去幾十年中食品加工公司仍然在食品中加入它來(lái)作為防腐劑。這種水楊酸酯在商業(yè)上的使用被發(fā)現(xiàn)與我們?yōu)槠?0年研究的參加者所報(bào)告的頭痛發(fā)病的平均數(shù)量下降是相關(guān)的。最近，食品加工公司發(fā)現(xiàn)水楊酸酯也可以被用作食品香料。根據(jù)這種水楊酸酯的新用途，我們可以預(yù)期Mentia居患頭痛癥的數(shù)量將會(huì)持續(xù)穩(wěn)步下降。
寫(xiě)一篇回應(yīng)，討論還需要何種具體的證據(jù)才能更好的評(píng)估上面的論證，并解釋這個(gè)證據(jù)是如何強(qiáng)化/削弱這篇文章的論證的。
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題目：
"Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin， a medicine used to treat headaches. Although many foods are naturally rich in salicylates， for the past several decades， food-processing companies have also been adding salicylates to foods as preservatives. This rise in the commercial use of salicylates has been found to correlate with a steady decline in the average number of headaches reported by participants in our twenty-year study. Recently， food-processing companies have found that salicylates can also be used as flavor additives for foods. With this new use for salicylates， we can expect a continued steady decline in the number of headaches suffered by the average citizen of Mentia."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
中文翻譯：
水楊酸酯和用來(lái)治療頭痛的藥物——阿司匹林是同一類(lèi)化合物。盡管很多食品天然富含水楊酸酯，過(guò)去幾十年中食品加工公司仍然在食品中加入它來(lái)作為防腐劑。這種水楊酸酯在商業(yè)上的使用被發(fā)現(xiàn)與我們?yōu)槠?0年研究的參加者所報(bào)告的頭痛發(fā)病的平均數(shù)量下降是相關(guān)的。最近，食品加工公司發(fā)現(xiàn)水楊酸酯也可以被用作食品香料。根據(jù)這種水楊酸酯的新用途，我們可以預(yù)期Mentia居患頭痛癥的數(shù)量將會(huì)持續(xù)穩(wěn)步下降。
寫(xiě)一篇回應(yīng)，討論還需要何種具體的證據(jù)才能更好的評(píng)估上面的論證，并解釋這個(gè)證據(jù)是如何強(qiáng)化/削弱這篇文章的論證的。
感謝您閱讀《argument26 》一文，出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)(liuxue86.com)編輯部希望本文能幫助到您。