gre寫作例子:argument提綱(6)

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GRE寫作部分將重點考察考生有針對性地對具體考題做出反應的能力,而非要求考生堆砌泛泛的文字。具體說來,這些重點關注的能力包括:1、 清楚有效地闡明復雜觀點;2、 用貼切的事理和事例支撐觀點;3、考察/驗證他人論點及其相關論證;4、支撐一個有針對性的連貫的討論;5、控制標準書面英語的各個要素。寫作部分將聯(lián)合考察邏輯推理和分析寫作兩種技能,并且將加大力度引進那些需要考生做出有針對性的回應的考題,降低考生依賴事前準備(如背誦)的材料的可能性。
    11.The following appeared in a memo from the mayor of the town of West Egg.
    "Two years ago, our consultants predicted that West Egg's landfill, which is used for garbage disposal, would be completely filled within five years. During the past two years, however, town residents have been recycling twice as much aluminum and paper as they did in previous years. Next month the amount of material recycled should further increase, since charges for garbage pickup will double. Furthermore, over ninety percent of the respondents to a recent survey said that they would do more recycling in the future. Because of our residents' strong commitment to recycling, the available space in our landfill should last for considerably longer than predicted."
    A、提高垃圾收集費用并不一定能夠促進可回收材料使用的增加,如果提高的費用小于人們改用可回收材料所需要支付的費用,顯然很多人由于經(jīng)濟利益的驅使還是會選擇繼續(xù)使用不可回收材料的。
    B、作者沒有交待調查的基數(shù),如果基數(shù)很小的話,例如只有10個人,那么即使有90%的人支持,由于樣本數(shù)量過小,也不能夠說明整體的情況。
    C、即使是全部居民都有提高可回收材料的意愿,但是否能夠落實到實際行動中作者也沒有給予充分說明。即使能夠落實到實際行動中,也不一定能夠延長垃圾填埋坑的使用期限。因為即使人們希望提高可回收垃圾的數(shù)量,但是如果整個城市垃圾的產生速度更快,不可回收垃圾的產生速度更快,那么該垃圾填埋處仍然不能夠得到延期。
    12.The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of Alta Manufacturing.
    "During the past year, Alta Manufacturing had thirty percent more on-the-job accidents than nearby Panoply Industries, where the work shifts are one hour shorter than ours. Experts believe that a significant contributing factor in many on-the-job accidents is fatigue and sleep deprivation among workers. Therefore, to reduce the number of on-the-job accidents at Alta and thereby increase productivity, we should shorten each of our three work shifts by one hour so that our employees will get adequate amounts of sleep."
    A、A公司比P公司多出現(xiàn)30%的工作時事故并不一定是由A公司員工的疲勞所致,A公司和P公司的工作性質可能不同,從而可能導致A公司的工作的危險性要高于P公司。
    B、即使該情況是由于A公司的員工疲勞所致,縮短員工一個小時的工作時間也不一定能夠保證員工充足的睡眠,進而減緩員工的疲勞。因為員工可能會利用多出來的一個小時做其他的事情。
    C、即使縮短一個小時能夠減少員工的疲勞,也不一定能夠提高生產率(productivity)。生產率不但和員工的身體狀況有關,還和員工的技術熟練程度有關,也和工廠的機器設備是否先進,是否穩(wěn)定有關。
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