新gre作文2012:GRE作文范文大全(105)

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    simply cannot convince me that CCC must abandon its plans in order that such damage be
    prevented.
    Secondly, even assuming CCC's planned mining activities in West Fredonia will cause
    pollution and will endanger several animal species, it is nevertheless impossible to assess the
    author's broader contention that CCC's activities will result in "environmental disaster,'' at least
    without an agreed-upon definition of that term. If by "environmental disaster" the author simply
    means some pollution and the extinction of several animal species, then the claim would have
    merit; otherwise, it would not. Absent either a clear definition of the term or dear evidence that
    CCC's activities would carry grave environmental consequences by any reasonable definition,
    the author's contention that CCC's activities will result in environmental disaster is simply
    unjustified.
    Thirdly, the author's position that environmental disaster is "inevitable" absent the prescribed
    boycott precludes the possibility that other measures can be taken to prevent CCC from
    carrying out its plans, or to offset any harm that CCC causes should it carry out its plans. Yet
    the author fails to provide assurances that no other means of preventing the predicted disaster
    are available. Lacking such evidence the author cannot reasonably conclude that the
    proposed boycott is needed to prevent that disaster.
    Finally, even if the prescribed boycott is needed to prevent pollution and environmental
    disaster in West Fredonia, the author assumes too hastily that the boycott will suffice for these
    purposes. Perhaps additional measures would be required as well. For instance, perhaps
    consumers would also need to boycott other companies that pollute West Fredonia's
    environment. In short, without any evidence that the recommended course of action will be
    enough to prevent the predicted problems, the author's conclusion remains dubious at best.
    In sum, as it stands the argument is wholly unpersuasive. To bolster it the author must show
    that CCC's planned mining activities on its newly acquired land will pollute and will threaten
    endangered animal species. The author must also define "environmental disaster'' and show
    that the inevitable results of CCC's activities, absent the proposed boycott, would meet that
    definition. To better assess the argument it would be useful to know what other means are
    available for preventing CCC from mining in West Fredonia or, in the alternative, for mitigating
    the environmental impact of those mining activities. A/so useful would be any information
    about the likelihood that the boycott would be effective in accomplishing its intended
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