在準(zhǔn)備托?？荚嚨臅r(shí)候，首先了解托?？荚嚳际裁磧?nèi)容，大家在備考的過(guò)程中可以找找托?？荚嚨恼骖}來(lái)訓(xùn)練，下面是出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)分享的2021年4月24日托福寫作考試真題及范文。
2021年4月24日托福寫作考試真題及范文
綜合寫作：
美國(guó)Erie canal建造時(shí)的困難和解決方法。
閱讀中提出了三個(gè)困難：
1. 自然環(huán)境。
2. 人手不夠。
3. 花錢太多。
聽(tīng)力一一給出了解決方法：
1. 用動(dòng)物幫忙+冬天開(kāi)工。
2. 歐洲有移民。
3. 這個(gè)運(yùn)河省錢省力人們用的更多了。
獨(dú)立寫作：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？ Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends your same age.
獨(dú)立寫作思路：
1. 家長(zhǎng)會(huì)給我們提一些建議，他們教我們?nèi)绾芜x擇朋友，發(fā)現(xiàn)我們潛在的能力；
2. 老師會(huì)給我們提一些建議，幫助我們解決學(xué)習(xí)上的問(wèn)題，指導(dǎo)我們進(jìn)行職業(yè)規(guī)劃；
3. 導(dǎo)師會(huì)給我們提一些建議，幫助我們培養(yǎng)工作技能，管理人際關(guān)系。
獨(dú)立寫作范文
A close friend is what every individual longs after. After all， a day without friendship is like a day without sunshine. A true friend should be one from who we can resort to for help or get valuable suggestions when we are in time of adversity. People differ greatly in their views as to whether or not guidance and advice from older friends is superior to the counterparts from peers. As I see it， advice from elderly friends deserves more praises， although suggestions from our peers are never without their merits.
For a start，rich life experience could be seen as a sort of precious wealth， including those bitter or frustrating experiences. Every individual grows up via experiencing failure or dilemma， one might，at times，feel puzzled，thereby，he or she needs advice and guidance from friends.
Under such circumstances， older friends could be our best teachers because they have accumulated a pool of life wisdom， thus， their advice could be precious life guidance. A survey is persuasive enough to justify my stand， the survey conducted by Vista， after consulting many people have found that most respondents claimed that compared with communicating with peers， they prefer to get advice from elderly friends， for their suggestions could help to diminish the likelihood of failure and avoid detours.
This debate reminds me of my Uncle Paul， who is a successful business leader. My uncle had studied in New Zealand for more than five years， so， he strongly recommended me to study abroad when facing with the option of studying at home or furthering my study in a foreign country. His suggestion was that a young man could become mature， tenacious and confident by personal struggle in an unfamiliar environment.
After listening to my uncle’s advice， I studied even harder during the process of self-improvement， I happily found that I can be more attentive and have more self-discipline. More importantly， I had a clear goal to fight for. It was the suggestion form my uncle that helps me to hardened my heart to study overseas. I had deliberately chosen to lead the life I desire， for the life wisdom learning from my uncle could be considered as a shortcut to success.
Indeed， I have to concede that suggestions from peers might still their merits to some extent. An argument hold by some people is that people of the similar age have a lot in common such as growth environment or educational background， in this sense， their communication could be more convincing.
Furthermore， some people might argue that the experiences of past bear little relevance to today’s life. What I want to rebut，however，is that youngster’s understanding about life is far from mature compared with those from older friends， after all， older friends are more far-sighted and wise.
In closing， I re-affirm my conviction that guidance and suggestions from mature friends expert a far more profound and beneficial effect on one’s action.
托福寫作提分技巧
綜合寫作
1、不主張不寫閱讀部分，即使你無(wú)話可說(shuō)就把閱讀內(nèi)容第一句話同義改寫。Reading，lecture，argue，refute這類詞盡量不重復(fù)使用。
2、聽(tīng)力的內(nèi)容越詳細(xì)越好，把自己筆記上一切的細(xì)節(jié)悉數(shù)寫上去，記筆記的時(shí)候一定克服全拼單詞的強(qiáng)迫癥，縮寫即可，信任自己的短時(shí)回憶。
3、剛聽(tīng)完聽(tīng)力內(nèi)容之后不要立刻開(kāi)始寫作，花2～3分鐘復(fù)原筆記，把沒(méi)有拼全的單詞補(bǔ)齊，把筆記上含糊的地方趁還有一些回憶寫完好。
4、假如沒(méi)有聽(tīng)懂某一個(gè)聽(tīng)力細(xì)節(jié)或者整個(gè)觀點(diǎn)都沒(méi)有聽(tīng)清，也不要慌，大膽地猜。綜合寫作聽(tīng)力內(nèi)容大概率情況是反駁閱讀內(nèi)容，反駁情況無(wú)非是兩種，一種是徹底推翻閱讀的支撐論據(jù)，另一種是說(shuō)閱讀內(nèi)容有其他解釋方法。反正就是不要讓段落內(nèi)容空著。
獨(dú)立寫作
1、獨(dú)立寫作首要重點(diǎn)就是能限時(shí)寫完作文，為了能從容寫完作文我們得在考前做大量的構(gòu)思和寫作練習(xí)。
2、托福寫作是可以使用生活中例子支撐觀點(diǎn)的，換句話說(shuō)，大家可以現(xiàn)場(chǎng)編例子。但是不建議大家在缺乏老師專業(yè)指導(dǎo)訓(xùn)練的情況下編調(diào)查報(bào)告和科學(xué)原理，一些常識(shí)性的錯(cuò)誤會(huì)讓考官對(duì)你“刮目相看”，造成不必要的丟分。
3、寫作對(duì)于邏輯的重視程度逐年增加，開(kāi)頭段和主體段要有呼應(yīng)關(guān)系，主體段內(nèi)部各個(gè)句子要前后有聯(lián)系，遞進(jìn)關(guān)系和因果關(guān)系是最常用的，一定要用好。
如何備考托福寫作
托福寫作備考初期 重基礎(chǔ)
從作文備考初期開(kāi)始，就應(yīng)該累積詞匯和短語(yǔ)，這個(gè)自然是不必多說(shuō)了。相信只要是在備考托福的學(xué)生，都應(yīng)該知道詞匯的重要性。而對(duì)于寫作來(lái)說(shuō)，除了詞匯以外，學(xué)會(huì)結(jié)構(gòu)建設(shè)也是基礎(chǔ)中的基礎(chǔ)。
一般在托福作文考題中，會(huì)有觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比型、支持反對(duì)型、觀點(diǎn)選擇型、問(wèn)題分析型等題型。想要在短期內(nèi)適應(yīng)托福的作文，就要針對(duì)這些可能在考試出現(xiàn)的題型進(jìn)行結(jié)構(gòu)模式化的寫作訓(xùn)練。
托福寫作備考中期 練寫作
在熟悉了托福寫作的結(jié)構(gòu)化訓(xùn)練后，學(xué)生應(yīng)該在每次拿到題目時(shí)，會(huì)在短時(shí)間內(nèi)構(gòu)建出文件的架構(gòu)，并列出文章的分論點(diǎn)。那么，這時(shí)我們就應(yīng)該把中心集中在內(nèi)容的建設(shè)中，因?yàn)榫实恼Z(yǔ)言描述，可以讓托福作文有得分更高的機(jī)會(huì)。
托福寫作備考后期 沖刺高分
臨近備考的時(shí)候，練習(xí)的重點(diǎn)應(yīng)該是“宜精不宜多”。大家拿起之前寫過(guò)的文章再次回顧一下。同時(shí)，也推薦大家可以在網(wǎng)上找些范文，和自己的文章做些對(duì)比，找找差異，反復(fù)修改，在最短的時(shí)間內(nèi)吸收經(jīng)典范文的精華。