對于很多準(zhǔn)備考托福的同學(xué)來說，托福寫作很讓人頭疼，那么今天就和出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)的小編一起來看看托福寫作哪些錯誤讓你與高分無緣？
1.托福寫作中拼寫錯誤
這里的拼寫錯誤不是指在考試時候的誤打，而是本身對詞匯拼寫記憶的錯誤。
In conclusion， issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one， requiring subjective judgement， consequently， there are no easy or certain answers.
——judgement應(yīng)改為judgment
2.托福寫作中用詞不當(dāng)
學(xué)生們寫的作文里或多或少都會有一些用詞不當(dāng)?shù)膯栴}，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯誤是不能犯的。
In the show， if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly， they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.
——problems應(yīng)改為questions
3.托福寫作中表達(dá)中式
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion， it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people， teachers are a kind of vocation.
句子中劃線部分的表達(dá)過于中式化。
4.托福寫作中亂用大詞
First of all， children can earn money from their jobs， although there isn’t too much， but they will keep their salary gingerliness.
這里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。該句子還有以下問題：
1）該作文題目是講學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該做兼職，因此children的出現(xiàn)就顯得很莫名其妙；
2）although和but是不能連用的；
3）指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么；
5.托福寫作中表意重復(fù)
They shocked their friends， devastated their families， crushed their best friends.
前面已經(jīng)提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。
The show is so compelling but attractive.
compelling和attractive是同義詞，所以這里這么寫就讓人不明白。
6.托福寫作中例證夸張
For example， when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer， the doctor cannot tell the truth， for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.
雖然善意的謊言是必要的，但是其功效顯然沒有這么大。
7.托福寫作中固定用法錯誤
To some extends， I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.
——To some extends應(yīng)改為To some extent