托福獨(dú)立寫作對(duì)于很多同學(xué)來說,但是很大的考驗(yàn),因?yàn)橥懈*?dú)立寫作會(huì)考驗(yàn)同學(xué)們對(duì)于事情的邏輯性,而這是很多中國考生缺乏的,那么下面就和出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)來看看托福獨(dú)立寫作如何開展主體段寫作?
題目:Students can use their mobile phones to surf on the Internet or listen to the music while doing their homework.
立場(chǎng):不同意
理由:做作業(yè)的時(shí)候干別的很難集中精力,必定會(huì)影響效率
【段落示例】
[1] Firstly, it is impossible for students to concentrate on their homework while doing something else at the same time. [2] This is because homework usually demands a relatively quiet place and full concentration from the student. [3] Conversely, if a student is doing homework and listening to music or surfing online as well, his or her attention will be torn apart, and the efficiency of finishing homework will be inevitably affected. [4] A good case in point is my own experience. [5] When I am working on a mission such as preparing a presentation, I have to devote all my attention to it and cannot afford any slight disturbance. [6] If I randomly refresh my Weibo or Wechat on cell phone, my job would be bound to last for a longer time.
[1] 主題句:It is + adj. + for sb. to do A.
[2] 正面說理:This is because….
[3] 反面說理:Conversely….
[4] 引出例子:A good case in point is X’s experience.
[5-6] 闡述例子: Content of the example
【模板總結(jié)】
It is important or beneficial for sb. to do A in order to X. This is because A 對(duì)于 X 的重要性或者好處。Conversely, 如果不做 A 對(duì)于 X 的壞處。A good case in point is Eg1’s experience. 2-3 句闡述例子。The story of Eg1 perfectly illustrates the importance of A.
這里把 impossible 變成了 important or beneficial 因?yàn)榇蟛糠诸}目我們都是支持的。既然支持,原因自然是 A 很好或者 A 很重要,自然這兩個(gè)詞就變得非常通用。最后又加了一個(gè)對(duì)于例子的總結(jié),我們需要做的就是寫清楚 A 對(duì)于 X 的好處是啥,不做 A 的壞處是啥,以及補(bǔ)充例子的具體內(nèi)容。當(dāng)然了,這只是一個(gè)非常理想的情況,如果由于某些原因不能保證正反說理和例子同時(shí)存在,可以酌情去掉。比如沒有例子可以只有正反說理,只不過各說 2-3 句即可。類似的,如果沒有反面說理,可以例子或者正面的說理多說一句。極端情況下,主題句和說理都不會(huì)寫,那直接上例子唄。

