托福寫作成功話題詳細(xì)介紹

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    成功類的話題也是托福寫作的高頻考點(diǎn)之一。面對這樣的寫作題目,同學(xué)們?nèi)绾文軌騽e出心裁,寫出新穎的作文來呢?下面出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)小編就來對這種寫作題目進(jìn)行詳細(xì)的解析。來看看托福寫作成功話題詳細(xì)介紹。
    成功的定義:第一種是通過努力,實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)的人是成功的人。另一種從一個(gè)人的身份,地位來判斷一個(gè)人是否成功。從以上兩種可以看出,一個(gè)人是否成功可以從內(nèi)部原因和外部原因兩種條件來判斷。內(nèi)部原因包括:一個(gè)人是否的熱情,是否誠實(shí),是否堅(jiān)持不懈,是否努力奮斗。外部原因包括:一個(gè)人的運(yùn)氣,人脈。
    在托福獨(dú)立寫作中,個(gè)人成功內(nèi)因思路分析,個(gè)人成功內(nèi)因包括他的智商和情商。智商包括智力,技能和能力。在托福獨(dú)立寫作中,能力ability強(qiáng)調(diào)先天擁有的,而skill技能是從后天獲得的。因此一個(gè)人成功跟一個(gè)人的記憶力,想象力,觀察力,適應(yīng)力,分析能力和思考能力是息息相關(guān)的。情商包括堅(jiān)持、人際關(guān)系和幽默感。
    在托福獨(dú)立寫作中,個(gè)人成功的外因思路分析,成功的外因主要包括,運(yùn)氣和來自別人的幫助。
    關(guān)于成功的話題:
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed, we should be more like others than be different from others.(翻譯:為了獲得成功,我們是和別人不一樣還是和別人一樣。)
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People holding different views cannot achieve success as a team.(翻譯:持有不同觀點(diǎn)的人作為一組不能獲得成功。)
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It’s impossible to succeed if one cannot accept criticism in teamwork.(翻譯:如果一個(gè)人在團(tuán)隊(duì)中不能接受別人的批評(píng)就不可能成功。)
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed in doing a new job, the ability to adapt oneself to the new environment is more important than the excellent knowledge of this job.(翻譯:在新工作崗位上的成功來源于適應(yīng)新環(huán)境還是擁有更好的知識(shí)。)
    從這幾道題目就可以看出,老外對于成功看重的點(diǎn)包括:與眾不同(也可以理解為創(chuàng)新),團(tuán)隊(duì)的重要性,有更多的技能,勇于承認(rèn)問題錯(cuò)誤,有無家長的幫助,懂得溝通交流,適應(yīng)環(huán)境,知識(shí)儲(chǔ)備等。并且提出的問題基本上是針對如何成功,成功需要具備的素質(zhì),品質(zhì)(成功的方法論)展開的,下面我們看看老外用了怎樣地道的語言對于成功總結(jié)出了哪些方法論:
    You are the sum of the five people you spend the most time with. My mom always used say, “Tell me who your friends are and I’ll tell you who you are.” And she was right on—because millionaires surround themselves with other millionaires.
    If we really are the sum of the people we surround ourselves with, it’s so important to surround yourself with the right ones. Successful people are always networking with each other at events, conferences and mastermind groups.
    這個(gè)點(diǎn)論證了我們托福寫作成功的第一個(gè)要素:團(tuán)隊(duì)對于成功的重要性,聰明的人不是一個(gè)人聰明,而是周圍一個(gè)團(tuán)隊(duì)都聰明最終成果才會(huì)更遠(yuǎn)大,這樣他們才能分享更好的資源,人脈,思想和創(chuàng)新,一個(gè)人的力量是遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不及眾人合起來的力量的。此外這一段中還使用了一些非常好用的短語和句子,如:You are the sum of the five people you spend the most time with. 這個(gè)句子傳達(dá)的意思是the outcome of team work is far more reaching than the outcome of personal efforts. 但是顯然這個(gè)句子要地道很多。because millionaires surround themselves with other millionaires這個(gè)句子告訴我們重復(fù)并不算是一種累贅,而是起著一種更好的強(qiáng)調(diào)作用。Successful people are always networking with each other at events, conferences and mastermind groups. “network”這個(gè)詞名轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)更加出彩。
    Every entrepreneur and successful person I’ve met is a lifelong learner. They understand the importance of constantly improving, constantly growing.
    Driven people self-educate through books, audiotapes, online courses, seminars…. They’re determined to always learn new skills, to keep developing as a person—to never become stagnant. They never stop.
    You have a desire to everyone has a lot of ambition. They might be held back by fears that they can’t effectively deal with; they might not be creative enough or they might be lazy and used to settling for less if it means they don’t have to work too hard.
    Then there are those that have a burning desire to constantly improve, learn new things, pick up new skills and sacrifice some fun and enjoyment now, so that they can be happier in the latter group is the one that keeps improving year after year, getting things done one step at a time.
    這一小段回答了托福寫作成功話題的第二個(gè)問題,需要更多的技能野心和夢想。作為一個(gè)優(yōu)秀的創(chuàng)業(yè)者,不斷學(xué)習(xí)新的技能提升自己,才不會(huì)被淘汰,大部分的學(xué)習(xí)必須靠自己完成,可以通過書本,有聲讀物影像,在線課程,以及研討會(huì),這里面許多詞使用得也是非常漂亮的,比如說“entrepreneur(企業(yè)家)”, “l(fā)ifelong(終生)”, “audiotapes, online courses, seminars(有聲書,在線課程,研討會(huì))”, “stagnant(停滯不前)”, “hold back(阻擋)”, “settle for less(追求少)”, “burning desire(強(qiáng)烈追求)”。