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Topic：
the reason of collapse of Akkadine Empire討論曾經(jīng)很繁榮的Akkad Kingdom覆滅原因。
閱讀：給出帝國覆滅的三個原因。
1. 征服地區(qū)人民頻繁反抗、起義，傷了帝國根基。
2. 閱讀分論點2-降水少導(dǎo)致農(nóng)耕受影響，沒有充足食物供給(enough food supply)。
3. 閱讀分論點3-帝國很霸道，總是企圖控制貿(mào)易(聽力中稱為unfair trade)，并且把自己的條件強加給其他國家，引起周邊國家不滿甚至導(dǎo)致了幾十個外國國王對其宣戰(zhàn)。舉例海戰(zhàn)。
聽力：閱讀三個原因都沒有說服力。
1. 征服地區(qū)的城墻被征服拆了，起義軍沒有城墻保護很容易會被政府軍鎮(zhèn)壓。
2. 糧食并不短缺，農(nóng)耕技術(shù)很先進，甚至掌握灌溉技術(shù)(irrigation)，北方缺水能從別的地區(qū)引水。并且知道存儲糧食(store grain)
3.聽力分論點3-海戰(zhàn)是真實的，雖然和一些國家會有摩擦，但戰(zhàn)后新的機會和資源都會變多，彌補(make up)損失。
范文：
Regarding the collapse of Akkad Kingdom which once experienced prosperity, the reading puts forward three reasons. Yet, all of them are contradicted by the listening with the following illustrations.
Frist, in the author’s point of view, the frequent revolt from the conquered areas damaged the kingdom. The listening, on the other hand, argues that in the conquered areas, the rampart was torn down, which makes it easy for the government army to suppress them because they were under no protection.
When it comes to insufficient food supply being attributed to the damage on farming caused by less precipitation, the listening is totally in disagreement with this point in the reading. The listening states that actually they did not suffer food shortage. Their cultivation skills were quite advanced and they even mastered irrigation skills. If the northern area encountered the lack of water, it could take water from other areas. What’s more, they had the insight of storing grain.
The last point raised by the reading material is that the unfair trade imposed by Akkad Kingdom on other countries stirred wars such as naval battle. This is also refuted by the listening which mentions that it is true that naval battle did happen. But despite of the conflict with other countries, Akkad Kingdom was exposed to more chances and resources after the battle, which could compensate for the losses.
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