如何寫出地道的托福作文?

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    托福寫作有時(shí)很容易:20分鐘可以學(xué)會(huì)三種句型的運(yùn)用。托福寫作有時(shí)也很難,難點(diǎn)在于怎樣用地道英文表達(dá)?本文帶你走進(jìn)地道英語的世界,一起來看如何寫出地道的托福英語。
    句子:
    1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
    改進(jìn):Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
    2. For example, you work in a big factory.
    改進(jìn): Suppose you work in a big factory.
    3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
    改進(jìn):You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
    4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
    改進(jìn): We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
    5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
    改進(jìn): He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
    6. Their brain is still very young.
    改進(jìn): They are still immature.
    7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
    改進(jìn): Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
    8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
    改進(jìn): They cannot tell right from wrong.
    9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
    改進(jìn): It will help children learn to make good use of time.
    10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
    改進(jìn): Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
    以上是考生們在托福寫作中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的中國式英語經(jīng)過修改后的地道英語的對比,從中找出不同來知道地道英語到底怎么寫的,從而運(yùn)用到托福寫作中。
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