托福寫作病句修改要點(diǎn)

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    1. The artist’s work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
    改進(jìn):Artists’ work upgrades our civilization.
    2. For example, you work in a big factory.
    改進(jìn): Suppose you work in a big factory.
    3. You’ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
    改進(jìn):You’ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
    4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
    改進(jìn): We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
    5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
    改進(jìn): He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
    6. Their brain is still very young.
    改進(jìn): They are still immature.
    7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
    改進(jìn): Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
    8. They can’t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
    改進(jìn): They cannot tell right from wrong.
    9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
    改進(jìn): It will help children learn to make good use of time.
    10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
    改進(jìn): Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
    11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
    改進(jìn): Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
    12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
    改進(jìn): The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
    13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
    改進(jìn): They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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