解禁新托福寫作加分的三大亮點

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一、句式變化
    1. 變換句子的開頭結(jié)構(gòu)
    名詞做主語
    介詞短語作狀語
    副詞作狀語
    狀語從句
    分詞短語作狀語
    形容詞短語作狀語
    主語從句
    不定式短語做主語或狀語
    動名詞做主語
    To begin with, even in such areas as computer science, where it is estimated that much of what a student learns today will be obsolete in just five years, an advanced degree and the education it represents will continue to be of benefit. Unlike undergraduate education, which is divided into a number of small educational units every term, post-baccalaureate education is concentrated on deeper learning in fewer areas. Moreover, most graduate education requires extended, critical focus on complex issues or research projects. And even if the technical information relevant to completing a graduate-level project becomes outmoded, the learned critical methods and problem-solving approaches will not.
    2. 使用不同的句型結(jié)構(gòu)
    三、巧用修辭
    1. 排比對稱結(jié)構(gòu)
    Despite all the evidence, experts continue to debate weather global warming exists, how extensive the problem is, what the likely effects will be and whether any remedy is possible.
    Despite all the evidence, experts continue to debate the existence of global warming, the extent of the problem, its likely effects and any possible remedy.
    2. 比喻
    (1)明喻:比喻詞出現(xiàn):as, like, as if…
    In many ways, no doubt, our world grows more and more complex, sputniks cannot be simple; yet how many of our complexities remain futile, how many of our artificialities false. Simplicity too can be subtle-as the straight lines of a Greek temple, like the Parthenon at Athens, are delicately curved in order to look straighter still.
    (2)暗喻:比喻詞不出現(xiàn)。
    America has given the Negro people a bad check, which has come back marked insufficient funds.
    3. 對照:加深印象
    Extremism in defense of liberty is no vice; moderation is the pursuit of justice is no virtue.
    4. 類比
    The Negro has a callus growing on his soul and it is getting harder and harder to hurt him here. That is a simple law of nature. Like a callus on the foot in a shoe that is too tight. The foot is nature’s and that shoe was put on by man. The tight shoe will pinch your foot and make you holler and scream. But sooner or later, if you do not take the shoe off, a callus will form on the foot and begin to wear out the shoe.
    It is the same with the Negro in America. That shoe-the white man’s system—has pinched and rubbed and squeezed his soul until it has almost destroyed him. But it did not. And how a callus has formed on his soul, and unless that system is adjusted to fit him, too, that callus is going to wear our that system.
    5. 擬人
    Dawn was beginning to prowl about the sky and put out the starts.
    6. 夸張
    For she was beautiful—her beauty made the bright world dim, and everything beside seemed like the fleeting image of a shade.
    Today’s education system places too much emphasis on students’ desires rather than their needs. Accordingly, students are searching for the easy way out, and educators are willingly conspiring with them. As opposed to this trend, I would argue that students should study what is presented to them rather than what is desired by them. Not only should educators determine the curriculum, but also they should strive to insure that each individual student truly gains from his/her education, rather than just breezes through it.
    二、承上啟下
    1. 表示結(jié)論
    in conclusion
    in sum
    to conclude
    to sum up
    2. 表示肯定程度
    certainly
    clearly
    obviously
    plainly
    apparently
    surely
    undoubtedly
    naturally
    for certain
    for sure
    of course
    never
    always
    possibly
    perhaps
    likely
    probably
    potentially
    presumably
    to some extend
    in a large sense
    generally speaking
    in a sense
    generally
    in some sense
    normally
    ideally
    3. 引出新觀點
    first
    second
    third
    finally
    in the first place
    in the second place
    last but not least
    first of all
    next
    another
    In addition
    additionally
    further
    furthermore
    moreover
    also
    likewise
    similarly
    more importantly
    imagine
    suppose
    most importantly
    for one thing
    for another
    4. 引出詳細解釋
    specifically
    particularly
    for example
    for instance
    in this case
    in that case
    as well as
    in that
    such as
    in addition to
    5. 表示對照或其他觀點
    otherwise
    however
    nevertheless
    though
    although
    yet
    meanwhile
    while
    But
    instead
    still
    anyway
    unlike
    on the contrary
    by contrast
    by comparison
    in any case
    at any rate
    in spite of
    rather than
    on the one hand
    on the other hand
    even if
    apart from
    instead of
    even so
    6. 表示證據(jù)出現(xiàn)
    since
    because
    actually
    in fact
    as a matter of fact
    as a result
    due to
    owing to
    7. 表示推理
    as a result
    accordingly
    consequently
    hence
    thus
    ultimately
    thereby
    therefore
    as a consequence
    if so
    if not
    according to
    8. 表示反復(fù)說明
    in other words
    briefly
    that is