2021年6月26日雅思寫作真題及范文

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    雅思寫作部分是很多考生的一大難點(diǎn),在備考雅思寫作的過(guò)程中,大家可以找找雅思考試的真題來(lái)訓(xùn)練,下面是出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)分享的2021年6月26日雅思寫作真題及范文。
    2021年6月26日雅思寫作真題及范文
    Task 1
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    Task 2
    大作文題目:
    Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, while other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the Internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
    范文
    We live in a multifaceted society that. has its own cultural and traditional values. Traditions that vary from place to place are unique in their own form. These norms and distinctive cultural values attract people to visit different places in order to learn more which is laudable, but others believe that we live in a digital world know where all the information is available through paper and print media then there is no point to visit those places physiclly. This essay will analyze both viewpoints to understand their merits before presenting an opinion.
    People believe that culture can be best understood when one physically visits that place. Proponents of this viewpoint argue that films and books do not cover all the aspects and often show only positive attributes and customs of a place. Cultural values and traditions are best analyzed when we live: with them and participate in their festivals, religious gatherings, weddings, and other events. Moreover, they say that books and the Internet give us limited information and physical presence in instruments to observe and understand their emotion, feelings, sentiments, and so on showcased during different occasions. For instance, Malay culture is rich in folk music, artworks, poetry, festivals, and so on, which we usually see in different videos, but there are some hidden traits like their disliking for non-Malay, which is not mentioned in any book or shown in  the contrary, others believe that one can easily learn the traditions and cultural norms through different documentary movies, historical books, or digital content available over the Internet. They say that books written over different cultures were written by authors that visited those places or heard about them from others.
    Moreover, the Internet is a massive repository of digital content in the form of textual and visual information, instrumental in learning various cultures without the need to travel. For instance, Indian culture became popular in western countries due to different Bollywood movies revealing the customs and way of living of people residing in different cities like Gujarat, Rajhi stan, Kashmir, etc.
    Furthermore, documentary videos and movies are a good source of information as they cover different aspects of culture in visual form, and one gets absorbed in it while  recapitulate, the aforementioned provides plausible arguments over both viewpoints. However, I believe that one should travel to explore different cultures as a physical presence cannot match the virtual information.
    雅思小作文提高方法
    我們以A類雅思小作文為例,為大家講解雅思小作文的提高方法。雅思小作文一般是圖表類題目,需要根據(jù)圖表寫出一篇文章,雖然要求字?jǐn)?shù)不高(150字),但卻并不容易拿高分。
    1.熟悉題型
    我們?cè)谏衔闹刑岬竭^(guò),雅思小作文一般是圖表類的題目,這類題目要在備考階段熟悉題型,了解各類圖表的寫作方法。雅思小作文要求大家有敏銳的觀察力,能夠發(fā)現(xiàn)圖表的走勢(shì),并用語(yǔ)言完整表述出來(lái)。
    2.分步驟寫作
    雖然寫作時(shí)間短暫,但還是要按部就班地去寫作??吹筋}目以后先構(gòu)思寫作框架,然后再按照定下的框架去寫具體的內(nèi)容,注意句子和段落的銜接。寫完以后要養(yǎng)成檢查的好習(xí)慣,檢查語(yǔ)法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。
    3.寫作速度提升
    一般情況下,雅思小作文只有20分鐘的寫作時(shí)間,所以提升寫作速度非常重要。建議構(gòu)思框架時(shí)間限定在1-2分鐘,寫作時(shí)間13-15分鐘,然后留下3-5分鐘的檢查時(shí)間。
     雅思大作文提高方法
    雅思大作文所占分值要高于小作文,是雅思寫作的重點(diǎn)和難點(diǎn),建議留出40分鐘進(jìn)行寫作。那么,雅思大作文如何提高呢?
    1.了解評(píng)分準(zhǔn)則
    雅思大作文無(wú)論是字?jǐn)?shù)和文章內(nèi)容要求都比小作文高出許多,所以想要提高大作文水平必須先了解評(píng)分準(zhǔn)則,并盡量滿足所要求的內(nèi)容。雅思寫作評(píng)分規(guī)則有四項(xiàng):完成任務(wù)情況、連貫與銜接、詞匯資源和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的范圍和準(zhǔn)確性。所以大家在寫作的時(shí)候一定要保證作文切題,詞匯使用寬泛,行文結(jié)構(gòu)連貫,減少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。
    2.優(yōu)化文章邏輯
    除了評(píng)分規(guī)則外,雅思大作文的邏輯優(yōu)化對(duì)于寫作提升也有很大幫助。邏輯的好壞會(huì)影響到整篇文章的結(jié)構(gòu),比如你所論述的論據(jù)是否能支撐得住你的論點(diǎn),你的推理是否合情合理等等。文章邏輯性的優(yōu)化需要平時(shí)多練習(xí),多學(xué)習(xí)范文。
    4.不套用模板
    運(yùn)用套路寫出的大作文是很難拿到高分的,所以在雅思大作文備考中不建議大家背模板,套用模板寫作。一方面,模板可能也被其他人用過(guò),沒(méi)有新意;另一方面,模板寫作容易陷入思維定式,導(dǎo)致文章太過(guò)死板。如果想要使用模板,就根據(jù)自己的寫作思路去總結(jié)各類寫作話題的模板。
     雅思寫作評(píng)分細(xì)則
    寫作任務(wù)完成情況(TA)/任務(wù)回應(yīng)情況(TR)
    首先,雅思寫作Task1,考生都需要按照要求完成寫作任務(wù),要求是根據(jù)作文的要求找出所有關(guān)鍵信息,進(jìn)行解釋說(shuō)明,必要時(shí)需要提供細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容,如出現(xiàn)重要數(shù)據(jù),要確保其準(zhǔn)確性。
    雅思寫作Task2,要求考生回答題目中的要求,表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn),并用相關(guān)論據(jù)解釋自己的觀點(diǎn)。
    連貫與銜接(CC)
    關(guān)于連貫性和銜接,主要考察的是考生的文章主旨能力和信息觀點(diǎn)的連接能力。連貫性具體指的是文章的流暢度、文章觀點(diǎn)的邏輯是否清晰,段落結(jié)構(gòu)是否恰當(dāng)。
    銜接性指的是考生對(duì)于連接詞的使用是否能夠幫助考生整合觀點(diǎn),將段落、句子和句子成分之間的關(guān)系闡明清楚。
    詞匯多樣性(LR)
    首先多注意積累同義詞,減少重復(fù)用詞;注意描述和表達(dá)方式的多樣化,在轉(zhuǎn)述題目時(shí),盡量使用同義詞或其他表達(dá)方式,避免重復(fù)題目中的原詞;注意詞匯搭配和詞組的使用,不太需要所謂的高級(jí)詞匯。
    關(guān)于詞匯準(zhǔn)確性,考生要注意詞匯的使用語(yǔ)境、詞匯的拼寫。很多考生喜歡用一些生僻詞匯,卻做不到多樣和準(zhǔn)確,考官對(duì)于詞匯的要求只是準(zhǔn)確,多樣,所以盡管考生備考很努力,但分?jǐn)?shù)依然不高的原因就是搞錯(cuò)了寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中對(duì)詞匯的要求。
    語(yǔ)法多樣性及準(zhǔn)確性(GRA)
    最后再來(lái)說(shuō)說(shuō)寫作語(yǔ)法,雅思寫作對(duì)于語(yǔ)法多樣性的要求主要是在作文中,注意時(shí)態(tài)、比較級(jí)、動(dòng)詞、復(fù)雜句等使用。
    準(zhǔn)確性則是建立在使用的場(chǎng)景正確。最后,小站雅思君友情提示,考生還是要多留出時(shí)間檢查語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,提高語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確性。