2021年6月17日雅思寫作考試真題與范文

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    6月份的雅思考試已經(jīng)考完3場了,還沒有考雅思的同學,如果還在備考的話,可以看看雅思最近幾場考試的真題,出國留學網(wǎng)為大家準備了6月17日雅思寫作考試真題與范文。
     一、2021年6月17日雅思寫作考試真題與范文
    真題
    TASK 1 :餅圖
    澳洲不同年齡層的人使用Twitter Facebook YouTube的占比。
    TASK 2 :
    More and more people are becoming overweight. Some people suggest that increasing the price of fattening food is a solution, to what extent do you agree or disagree?
    范文
    There is no doubt that many people are getting too fat these days, whichis the most serious health concern. In order to address this problem, some opine that the prices of unhealthy foods should be increased. While I agree with this point to some extent as this can stop people from eating too much fast food, I would also argue that other measures are necessary to uproot this mammoth problem.
    To begin with, if the price of junk foods that make people corpulent is increased, they will seldom buy these types of items because of the high cost. A recent survey published in Hindustan Times, a well-known Indian newspaper, gives evidence that by imposing an extra tax on high-calorie foods, like burgers, cakes, and pastries, the Delhi government encouraged their residents to cut the consumption of these food items by half. However, this cannot fully overcome the issue of overweight/obesity because it is nearly impossible to stop people from craving fast foods even after increasing their prices.
    Nevertheless, the other method that can play a pivotal role in tackling this conundrum is to motivate people to do more physical activities. The reason for this is that most people, especially in the big cities, do the desk job where they have to sit on a chair for the whole day; that is why the lack of physical movement of the body makes them obese. In this scenario, the best we can do is to create awareness among people about the benefits of body exercise and encourage them to spare some time from the day for their physical well-being. Consequently, adopting these habits might succor people to overcome the isue of heavy bodyweight. To recapitulate, it is undeniable that myriads of people, nowadays, are gaining a lot more weight. Although making fattening food pricey for the general people can reduce this issue to some extent, to fully eradicate this issue, people should get up from their couches and engage in physical activity.
    二、雅思寫作提綱步驟
    1、提筆之前,把作文題目認真看三遍。注意是認真,而不是迅速哦!每一個詞都得認真對待,而不是只劃出關(guān)鍵詞。不是我啰嗦,是真有童鞋把自己認識的詞給看錯的。
    2、如果是agreeor disagree、discuss both views,則先考慮自己的立場,立場不清的沒關(guān)系,先把兩方的利弊寫出來,對比數(shù)量和質(zhì)量再決定就很有把握了。如果是causeand solution,原因和解決辦法對應寫,有些同學寫了原因,解決辦法寫不好,那樣也是不行的。
    3、在整理提綱之前,再次認真讀題目兩遍,有時候你一高興就直接忘了題目,把那些不相干的點寫上去了。記住任何時候你的提綱要向題目看齊。
    4、確定題目理解無誤后,要開始考慮主體段落內(nèi)容,挑你有把握的點,思考理由和對應例子。
    5、寫完提綱以后,再看兩遍題目,這個時候要是跑題還來得及改。
    6、沒問題了,就可以開始寫正文了。
     三、雅思寫作注意事項
    標點
    要合理的利用標點符號,嚴格按照英文書寫格式進行答卷。有些同學一個段落里面全是逗號!英文的句子,每個句子只說一件事情,說完就該打句號了。
    例如(括號里為正確的):People should protect animals,animals are very important to the development of ecosystem,with different kinds of animals, each kind can restrain the other kind, so there is always a balance.
    大小寫
    句首單詞字母大小寫問題,在句號、嘆號、問號后面的單詞需要大寫。寫完后,如果還有時間檢查,一定迅速掃一下是否有大小寫錯誤,不要在不該丟分的地方失分。
    分段
    分段是雅思評分標準之一,有些同學在一個段落里面把正反兩面說了,但是并沒有一個明顯的傾向,導致段落要么很長,要么就是段落中心不明確,即這段到底重點是在哪一方。所以建議每一個段落只寫一方的一個點,段落長度保持在3-5行,說完一個點重啟一段寫下面一個點。
    合理分配考試時間
    雅思寫作考試共1小時,大小作文分別控制為40和20分鐘相對較合理。也可根據(jù)自身情況進行調(diào)整。同時大作文所占分數(shù)比重較高,所以考試的時候如果發(fā)現(xiàn)大作文相對難,那寫小作文的時候就得稍微快點,且不要對小作文精雕細琢,結(jié)果大作文亂寫或者字數(shù)不夠,這樣得不償失。如果發(fā)現(xiàn)大作文很簡單,那建議大家先寫大作文,同時不能因為簡單就急著寫,思考清楚再下筆,這樣才能在簡單題目上大把撈分哦!
    四、雅思大作文高分技巧
    全面了解Task2
    首先要對大作文有一個全面的了解。大作文考什么?題目類型有哪些?寫作內(nèi)容有什么要求?評分規(guī)則如何?這都是我們在備考前期需要充分了解的內(nèi)容。
    建議大家去雅思的官方網(wǎng)站認真學習一下,保證我們得到的信息是最新、最可靠的。
    掌握常見題型
    雅思大作文的四種常見題型:1、觀點類Agree or Disagree;2、利弊類Advantages and Disadvantages;3、問題解決類Problem and Solution;4、討論類Discuss both views。
    學會列提綱
    我們一定要養(yǎng)成列提綱的好習慣。拿到一個寫作題目,在進行認真審題后,不要急于動筆去寫。先思考一下自己大致的寫作思路,并寫在草稿紙上,然后根據(jù)列出的提綱進行寫作。
    這樣做的好處是能使我們的文章始終緊扣主題,不會出現(xiàn)寫著寫著就跑題的情況。同時,一個好的提綱也能使文章的邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰。
    練習、批改+反饋
    寫作屬于輸出項目,空有理論不付諸實踐,是永遠得不到提高的。況且要在一個小時內(nèi)完成大小兩篇作文,平時不練好“手感”,很有可能出現(xiàn)寫不完的情況。尤其是針對那些不熟悉、沒有思路的題目,更是要多加練習。
    另外,寫好的文章一定要記得批改并獲得反饋,這樣才能及時發(fā)現(xiàn)并糾正自己的錯誤。注意,修改不是只改詞匯、語法那么簡單,文章結(jié)構(gòu)、行文邏輯、審題錯誤等等都要顧及,這樣才是有效的批改!