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2021年6月12日雅思寫作真題
Task 1: Bar chart (動態(tài)柱圖)2005,2010,2015年某國觀看各種體育活動的人數(shù)變化。
Task 2: Some people believe that university education should focus on the skills of employment for the future. Others think university education should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
參考提綱
Introduction: There are differing views on the focus of university education: on academic study or on employment skills.
Body-1: 討論大學教育應該教育學生學術(shù)性課程
1. 大學的功能之一就是知識的傳遞和創(chuàng)新。教授學術(shù)性課程的過程就是知識傳遞給下一代的過程,在下一代接受了這些教育之后,也能為未來的創(chuàng)新打下堅實的基礎(chǔ)。
2. 學術(shù)性課程的學習也助于學生的發(fā)展。For example, students learn about how things work through the study of physics, and through the study of history, they learn about how societies and countries were formed and how past events shaped them.
但是,我不同意大學教育應該only focus在學術(shù)學習上,因為培養(yǎng)學生的job skills也同樣重要。(注意這里有一個轉(zhuǎn)折,明確否定了only, 自然的引出另一個觀點)
Body-2: 為什么教授skills for employment也很重要
1. 從社會角度來講,大學需要為社會培養(yǎng)合格的工作者。比如大學需要為社會培養(yǎng)醫(yī)生,教師,律師和工程師等等,以滿足社會發(fā)展的需要,這就要求大學教育要有專業(yè)性和應用性,方能滿足需求。
2. 從學生角度來講,大多數(shù)人上大學的目的之一就是在畢業(yè)后獲得好的就業(yè)機會。所以教會學生更好的就業(yè)技能方能滿足學生的需求。如果大學不能幫助學生提升就業(yè)能力并找到更好的工作,可能很多人都不會上大學,尤其是在一些學費昂貴的國家。 In conclusion, 學術(shù)性學習是大學教育的一部分,但我不同意是唯一的一部分,同時大學教育還應該兼顧培養(yǎng)學生的就業(yè)能力。
參考范文:
Some peple beleve that uniersity education shoud focus on the skils of employment of the fure. others think they should focus on academic study only. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In pesent-day soiet, a greater propotion of students are pursing higher eduction and otainin master's degrees and PhDs. Netheles there 1s gret debate over whether universty students ought to concentrate on larning employment or academic sis,s which wil be frter dscuse. It has been argued that the main ojecive of a uivrst education is to obrain a satsjing and wlpaid ocupation that matches the sillet of the aplicant From this point of view, clleges ought to eucate students based on the needs and requrements of companies in the feles that match the majors of hermore, nivrsities also need to have the ailll to predict ptental future trends in the market and atempt to create a cricium that would enable students to have prosperous long- term crees In this way, unverstites play a huge role in ensuing that students are able to meet the crrent and future needs of enterprises.
On he cntry, academic siis are also esesta in improving students alis and filtatt the cucial sil of being able to learn and pick up new adtion academic abilis enble iduals to achieve success in school which is one of the major ndicators of having a poperous cree. Futhermore,honing academic silss alows students to build confidence in the dassomm which enables them to have greater seft eseem when they enter the workplace.
As a resut, students who are well-equipped with advanced academic sills have abetter foundation and are more wll-prepared in their in al employment and academic sils are both crtial to acomomplishing success in school and the workplace. A fair balance betwen the two would ensure that unvrsiteis produce more wlroundd graduates who could tackle any callnges they face in the future.
雅思寫作必備語法知識
大作文
需要備好各種從句:其中5.5分以上必備三大經(jīng)典從句:定語從句、賓語從句、狀語從句。
1.定語從句:
多用who(指人)、which(指物)、that(即可指人也可以指物),還有一個經(jīng)典的容易被忽視的定語從句在大作文中可以表達事件發(fā)生的原因:即由why引導的固定句型 reason(s)why...
E.g:There may be some reasons why entertainment stars earn high salaries but overall Iagree that they are overpaid.
2.賓語從句:
文章中提出觀點的好句型,無論是你自己的觀點還是文章中原來給出的觀點都可以。建議多用that引導的,不容易出錯,如:some people think/agree/suggest/insist that...
E.g:A growing number of parents believe that being overly dependent on social networkingwebsites only makes their children more isolated in the real world.
3.狀語從句:
狀語的種類特別多,所以狀語從句是你最能夠表現(xiàn)句型多樣化的機會。牢記以下幾種狀從的分類,句子的豐富性自然就出來了:
A.時間狀語從句(引導詞:when/as/while/since/the moment...)
E.g:The related sectors should take effective measures the moment the problem appeared.
B.地點狀語從句(引導詞:where/wherever)
E.g:Generally,air will be heavily polluted where there are factories.
C.原因狀語從句(引導詞:because/since/as/seeing that...)
E.g:As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport,it would be very unpopularwith everyone who needs to travel on the roads.
D.條件狀語從句(引導詞:if/as long as/providing that/provided that...)
E.g:The government will increase its support for public education,provided that such funds canbe put to good use.
E.讓步狀語從句(就是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,引導詞:though/although/while/no matterwho/where/which/how...)
E.g:*While(表示二者對比)some people link happiness to wealth and material success,othersthink it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships.*Even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work,I think it is notunrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job.
雅思寫作要點
1、雅思寫作要關(guān)注思路和框架。
雅思寫作明確寫作思路和框架是動筆的要素。所以在平時的練習中考生必須明確寫作的思路和框架才能夠進行深入的寫作練習。其實所謂的思路和框架就是列出大概的提綱,然后按照提綱進行撰寫。而列提綱是任何一種寫作都需要的,但是很多考生都會忽視這一點,拿著話題就開始進行寫作,絲毫不管后續(xù)內(nèi)容該如何構(gòu)思,想到哪寫到哪。這樣很容易造成跑題或者偏題,難以得高分。而提前構(gòu)思好思路和框架有助于提高寫作的效率和質(zhì)量。
2、雅思寫作要關(guān)注論據(jù)的說服力。
雅思寫作小作文是比較容易完成的,只要考生對圖表分析清楚,陳述完整,用詞貼切即可得到不錯的分數(shù)。但是大作文往往是以議論文的體裁進行寫作,沒有充足的論據(jù)是無法取得滿意的雅思寫作成績的。因為想要把一個論點陳述的清楚明白就必須有強有力的證據(jù)來證明,論據(jù)來支撐。所以切忌使用身邊的例子、或者自己杜撰出來的東西來支撐論點,也不可過分使用沒有來源的數(shù)據(jù),這樣也是難以讓人信服的。