對(duì)于雅思寫(xiě)作，如果根據(jù)中文寫(xiě)作那樣寫(xiě)的話(huà)，同學(xué)們難免會(huì)進(jìn)入一些誤區(qū)，那么下面就和出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)的小編一起來(lái)看看雅思作文誤區(qū)：觀點(diǎn)含蓄。
請(qǐng)看雅思寫(xiě)作誤區(qū)實(shí)例：
①it seems arbitrary to assume that older generation’s traditional ideas are not the right way in the present age.
②First of all， international travel requires more than just money， People generate prejudice to（against） a place for their lack of knowledge about it
再跟筆者提供的表達(dá)進(jìn)行比較
①older generations＇ ideas so often still have their place in a modern world。
②people may build prejudice against a place on their ignorance of it during an international travel.
雅思寫(xiě)作的觀點(diǎn)句要求清晰明了，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山是最基本的要義，不要玩任何拐彎抹角的文字游戲。一位考官指出中國(guó)考生的作文，最致命的問(wèn)題就是在導(dǎo)入段開(kāi)始，一是表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)不清不楚；二是話(huà)題都沒(méi)有讀懂，一動(dòng)筆已偏題。這樣的作文，開(kāi)頭寥寥幾句讀完，考官就給你定好了分?jǐn)?shù)段了。
開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山的表達(dá)如何實(shí)現(xiàn)，其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單，用主動(dòng)句，用主謂賓句型就可以了。
附雅思考官寫(xiě)作的導(dǎo)入段欣賞：開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山最佳范例
①People have different views about how much choice students should have with regard to what they can study at university. While some argue that it would be better for students to be forced into certain key subject areas， I believe that everyone should be able to study the course of their choice.
②It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films. There could be several reasons why this is the case， and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidizing the industry.