對(duì)于很多準(zhǔn)備考雅思的同學(xué)來說，不知道準(zhǔn)備得怎么樣了呢？今天就和出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)的小編一起來了解一下2018年3月15日雅思寫作機(jī)經(jīng)整理。
雅思寫作范文解析：本題題目有2個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，注意采用雙邊討論結(jié)構(gòu)后陳述自己觀點(diǎn)。觀點(diǎn)1：投資體育投資體育賽事的運(yùn)動(dòng)員，觀點(diǎn)2：投資孩子的體育鍛煉。注意很多學(xué)生容易忽略掉第一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)忘記討論或者某個(gè)觀點(diǎn)沒有論點(diǎn)放棄討論這都將導(dǎo)致任務(wù)完成直接扣分至四分以下。
開頭：背景描寫+題目觀點(diǎn)
Body first：
首先，投資體育賽事的運(yùn)動(dòng)員可以為國家贏得更多的體育上的成就，進(jìn)而提升國際聲望.
其次，國際運(yùn)動(dòng)賽事的成功也能激發(fā)人們的愛國的熱情，我們經(jīng)常在體育賽事勝利時(shí)熱血沸騰的吶喊因身為國人而感到自豪
最后，體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的投資可以創(chuàng)造更多的獲獎(jiǎng)的機(jī)會(huì)，樹立一個(gè)體育強(qiáng)國的形象，這也為青少年創(chuàng)造了一個(gè)環(huán)境讓他們更加愛體育鍛煉
Body second：
有人反對(duì)投資運(yùn)動(dòng)育賽事的運(yùn)動(dòng)員。
理由一：商業(yè)贊助完全可以滿足他們的運(yùn)動(dòng)訓(xùn)練上的財(cái)務(wù)需求，這些政府的錢更應(yīng)該花在孩子的體育鍛煉身上。
理由二，貧困地區(qū)孩子很刻苦學(xué)習(xí)但由于缺乏鍛煉身體狀況往往不好，投資孩子體育設(shè)施建設(shè)更合理。
理由三，修建更好的體育設(shè)施更能激發(fā)孩子對(duì)體育鍛煉的興趣
結(jié)尾段：
總結(jié)文章主題段內(nèi)容，陳述自己觀點(diǎn)。
雅思寫作大作文范文
An increasing number of nations have spent so generously on sports events like Olympic Game，with a view to growing their international stature，while some people argue that most of the adolescents are more in need of the money to promote all-around physical fitness.
越來越多的國家在奧運(yùn)會(huì)這樣的體育賽事上花費(fèi)如此之多，以提高他們的國際地位，而有些人則認(rèn)為，大多數(shù)青少年更需要錢來促進(jìn)全面的身體健康。
Undeniably，achievements in international sports competitions can improve the prestige of a nation significantly.Therefore，it is widely accepted that some of the tax revenue should go on purchasing pricey but professional equipment to train gymnastics players. More importantly，not only do more triumphs of sporting events reflect the nation＇s comprehensive strength but also summon up the great patriotism among the public.If without the financial assurance from governments，hardly can those athletes achieve success against other competitive contestants in a range of stiff competition no matter how talented they are，let alone win the opportunity for the general public to be proud of being the citizens of the nation.Finally，investing in a country＇s sports undertakings undoubtedly contributes to a sports power image exerting unintended effects on teenagers，which is more likely to motivate the next generation to be more physically active in turn.
不可否認(rèn)，在國際體育競(jìng)賽中取得的成績(jī)可以顯著提高一個(gè)國家的聲望。因此，人們普遍認(rèn)為，部分稅收收入應(yīng)該用于購買昂貴但專業(yè)的設(shè)備來訓(xùn)練體操運(yùn)動(dòng)員。更重要的是，體育賽事的更多勝利不僅反映了國家的綜合實(shí)力，而且也喚起了公眾的強(qiáng)烈愛國心。如果沒有政府的財(cái)政保證，這些運(yùn)動(dòng)員很難在激烈的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)中戰(zhàn)勝其他競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手，不管他們有多聰明，更不用說贏得公眾的機(jī)會(huì)，讓他們?yōu)樽约菏菄业墓穸械阶院?。最后，?duì)一個(gè)國家的體育事業(yè)進(jìn)行投資無疑會(huì)使體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的形象對(duì)青少年產(chǎn)生意想不到的影響，而這更有可能激發(fā)下一代更積極的身體活動(dòng)。
However，some insist that it is unnecessary to squander money in better preparing professional athletes for sports activities.As the mass media and commercial sponsorship can fully financially meet the demand for athletes＇ training，governments had better give priority to teenagers’ physical fitness.After all，children are the hope of every country，and the physical fitness is the premise of the future success of every hardworking student.Compared with children living in affluent regions，those especially in impoverished areas are more likely subject to sub-health problems and other health hazards simply for the lack of easy-to-reach sports centers.In addition，providing children with better fitness facilities like the football pitch is highly possible to arouse their interests for physical excise.Accordingly，to spend money in promoting children＇s health condition is much more reasonable and urgent than in other aspects.
然而，一些人堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為，把錢花在更好地為體育活動(dòng)做準(zhǔn)備的職業(yè)運(yùn)動(dòng)員上是不必要的。由于大眾媒體和商業(yè)贊助完全可以滿足運(yùn)動(dòng)員訓(xùn)練的需求，政府最好優(yōu)先考慮青少年的身體健康。畢竟，孩子是每個(gè)國家的希望，而身體健康是每個(gè)努力學(xué)習(xí)的學(xué)生未來成功的前提。與生活在富裕地區(qū)的兒童相比，那些生活在貧困地區(qū)的兒童更容易受到亞健康問題和其他健康危害的影響，因?yàn)樗麄內(nèi)狈θ菀椎竭_(dá)的運(yùn)動(dòng)中心。此外，為孩子們提供更好的健身設(shè)施，比如足球場(chǎng)地，也極有可能激發(fā)他們對(duì)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的興趣。因此，在促進(jìn)兒童健康狀況方面投入資金比在其他方面更加合理和緊迫。
In conclusion，although the expenditure in supporting sports players engaged in top competitions is justified，the national budget，from my perspective， should also take teenagers＇ physical fitness into account.
總而言之，盡管在頂級(jí)賽事中支持體育選手的支出是合理的，但從我的角度來看，國家預(yù)算也應(yīng)該考慮到青少年的身體健康狀況。
字?jǐn)?shù) 330 words
雅思寫作高分詞匯
1. with a view to doing 為了
2. international stature 國際聲望
3. physical fitness身體健康
4. gymnastics players 運(yùn)動(dòng)員
5. nation＇s comprehensive strength國家的綜合實(shí)力
6. summon up the great patriotism喚起偉大的愛國主義
7. stiff competition激烈的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)
8. let alone 更不必說
9. sports undertakings體育事業(yè)
10. a sports power image 體育強(qiáng)國形象
11. squander money揮霍錢
12. had better give priority to 最好優(yōu)先考慮
13. premise 前提
14. are more likely subject to 更可能遭受
15. football pitch足球場(chǎng)
16. health hazards健康危害
arouse interests 激發(fā)興趣
高分句型
with a view to improving their international images ，介詞短語引導(dǎo)目的狀語
it is widely-accepted that ，it 做形式主語
not only do more triumphs of sporting events reflect the nation＇s comprehensive strength but also summon up the great patriotism ，
not only 倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)
no matter how 讓步狀語
let alone ，let alone 做連詞
hardly can，否定詞位于句首，部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)
those especially in impoverished areas ，
介詞短語作后置定語，起限定對(duì)比作用
had better give priority to ，
had better結(jié)構(gòu)，翻譯為最好....
some insist that it is unnecessary to，
賓語從句+it 做形式主語，不定式作真正主語
engaged in 過去分詞作后置定語