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第一類(lèi)：線圖
model answer
1.The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.
2.In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams).
3.However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.
4.The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.
5.Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.
分析：
第一段
1 The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.
The graph illustrates changes 描述變化的常用句式。in the amounts of在---數(shù)量上。Consumed是過(guò)去分詞作后置定語(yǔ)，表示“被消費(fèi)”。相當(dāng)于which were consumed的定語(yǔ)從句。
第二段：
1 In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week.
By far是在那時(shí)，是常用的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ);the most popular 最高級(jí)，of后面加“總體”，最高級(jí)的整體。With后面加數(shù)字;consumed是過(guò)去分詞做后置定語(yǔ)，相當(dāng)于which were consumed。
2 Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams).
In similar quantities是“相似的數(shù)量”的意思，括弧里面加入具體的數(shù)字，是常用的數(shù)據(jù)引出方式。Much less是“更少”，much修飾比較級(jí)less;(just over 50 grams)同樣也是用括號(hào)引出數(shù)據(jù)。
第三段：
1 However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively.
However 連接前后兩個(gè)段落，兩個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)。第二段屬于靜止描述起始點(diǎn)的數(shù)值，接下來(lái)描述以后的數(shù)據(jù)變化，就可以用however來(lái)連接。During this 25-year period 在這25年的階段里。Respectively是副詞“分別地”的意思，通常用于修飾兩個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)，分別是某兩個(gè)數(shù)字。
2 The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams
Also--- but，描述相同的趨勢(shì)但不同的變化程度。Less significantly是與之前的變化相比較得出的結(jié)論，前面也是“巨大”，但這個(gè)變化速度不如之前“巨大”。
第四段：
1 The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989.
On the other hand另一方面。Show an upward trend，“展示了一個(gè)上升的趨勢(shì)”，屬于固定表達(dá)。Overtaking 是doing現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)的用法，它是定語(yǔ)從句變化而來(lái)，相當(dāng)于which overtakes，如果動(dòng)詞和關(guān)系代詞的關(guān)系是主動(dòng)，則把動(dòng)詞改成doing即可。That of beef的that相當(dāng)于consumption，因?yàn)榕c前面短語(yǔ)格式一模一樣，所以為避免重復(fù)，用that代替。
第五段：
1 Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.
Overall是“總體來(lái)說(shuō)”的意思，通常是小作文的最后總階段用詞。the graph shows how 改圖展示了如何---，while連接兩個(gè)趨勢(shì)。這個(gè)重復(fù)描述圖形的整體變化趨勢(shì)的句子是常用的總階段寫(xiě)法。
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