雅思寫作的高分技巧

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    雅思大作文首段的第一句話就是要復(fù)述題目,很多同學(xué)在這里往會(huì)絞盡腦汁想同義替換詞,但有的題目中關(guān)鍵詞似乎并沒有那么好替換,硬套的synonym一些情況下并不適合語境,在母語考官讀來顯得很不自然。如何才能自然的對題意進(jìn)行改寫呢?下面liuxue86雅思老師專門為大家講解一下如何替換才能讓你的作文獲得高分。
    # 方法1 同義詞替換
    alltheir working life – throughout their working life (修飾詞同義替換)
    solar energy -- solar power(同義名詞替換)
    arts subjects – art courses (同義名詞替換)
    universityfees -- money on tertiary study (同義名詞替換)
    chancesof employment --job opportunities (同義名詞替換)
    to monitor people -- to keep the public under surveillance (動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)名詞詞組同義替換)
    # 方法2 換語序
    Solar energyis becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy
    -- Solar power as a source of domestic household energy is becoming more desirable
    # 方法3 換詞性
    globalised world – globalization (形容詞—名詞)
    # 方法4 換語法
    1) 主被動(dòng)轉(zhuǎn)換
    …to monitor people -- the people being monitored…
    security cameras is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing
    -- security cameras are recording the movements of ordinary citizens
    2) 其它語法形式轉(zhuǎn)變
    peopleare living longer -- people have become used to the idea that they willprobably live longer (時(shí)態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)變)
    an increasing number of people are suffering from health problemsas a result ofeating too much fast food
    -- The growth of the fast food industry has, without doubt,impacted on the eating habits and thehealth(因果關(guān)系轉(zhuǎn)變)
    # 方法5 同意轉(zhuǎn)換或意義拓展
    work forthe same organization -- remain in the same organization (同義轉(zhuǎn)換)
    over the past thirty years--in recent years (同義轉(zhuǎn)換)
    Nowadays-- In recent years -- In the 21st century (同義轉(zhuǎn)換)
    In some countries-- of many societies around the world (同義轉(zhuǎn)換)
    have more opportunity to study abroad -- have many more options regarding how and where to find that knowledge. (同義轉(zhuǎn)換)
    practical degree courses-- science, engineering or media (意義具體化拓展)
    philosophy and history-- arts subjects文科(意義概括化拓展)
    以下是紅、藍(lán)兩本OG中的范文,看一看結(jié)合具體題目如何綜合運(yùn)用以上方法吧。
    Some people work for the same organization alltheir working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.