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2014年9月4日雅思寫作解析以及原創(chuàng)范文
2014年9月4日雅思寫作題目：
Now people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose with improved communication technology and transport. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 很多國(guó)家的人可以工作生活在任何地方，因?yàn)橛辛私煌ê徒涣骷夹g(shù)的便利，是否認(rèn)為利大于弊?(2009年雅思寫作舊題重現(xiàn))
題目解析：主題論證的是候鳥生活和異地工作的利弊，前題條件是交流交通技術(shù)的提高(網(wǎng)絡(luò)和飛機(jī))
主題觀點(diǎn)：候鳥生活以及異地工作的利大于弊。
相關(guān)提問(wèn)：
1. Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think advantages of the development outweigh its disadvantages? 很多父母現(xiàn)在在異國(guó)他鄉(xiāng)工作，會(huì)帶上自己的家庭(聯(lián)想老人和孩子);是否利大于弊?(2013年10月19日雅思考試寫作題目)
二段：利好的展開(kāi)
Granted, with the availability of new technology, people may get a reasonable career in any favorite cities without concerning about regional limits. No matter where one dwells in, he or she can keep contact with their family members via the Internet or airplane timely. Seen from positive aspects, a number of benefits can be acquired. The most glaring merit is that multiple career choice and constant change of residence means a broad range of working experience and constant refreshment. Meanwhile, one can become more versatile and well-informed by embarking on manifold jobs or living in different cities. Also, regular change of jobs makes one excel professionally and living in different cities greatly enriches one’s experience of the world. Hence, one can embrace brighter career and enjoy precious memory in the future. Last，to take up jobs in diverse cities enables one to enlarge his or her circle of friends so that one could establish well-connected interpersonal network. A better personal resource, to some extent, means more golden chances of job-promotion, comfortable salary and even the room for career achievement.(180)
分析點(diǎn)評(píng)：
寫作利好時(shí)，以科技的便利引出才會(huì)緊扣主題。
自由職業(yè)選擇的利好是：
第一：豐富的人生經(jīng)驗(yàn)和持續(xù)的新鮮感，工作者會(huì)變得多才多藝和見(jiàn)聞廣博。
第二：一個(gè)人會(huì)在專業(yè)上成長(zhǎng)，閱歷上豐富。
第三：一個(gè)人會(huì)結(jié)實(shí)更多的朋友，建立良好的人脈資源，人脈就機(jī)會(huì)，一個(gè)人可能會(huì)升職，加薪，擁抱更加輝煌的事業(yè)。
詳細(xì)解析：
1. …… means a broad range of working experience and constant refreshment. ……意味著豐富的工作經(jīng)歷和持久的新鮮感
2. One can become more versatile and well-informed 一個(gè)人可以變得多才多藝以及見(jiàn)聞廣博
3. makes one excel professionally 使人專業(yè)上更加精通
4. enrich one’s experience of the world. 豐富一個(gè)人的人生閱歷
5. establish well-connected interpersonal network 建立良好的人脈資源
2. An amount of people today change their career and place of residence several times during their lives. Is this positive or negative to development?很多人在一生中不斷改變自己的居住地以及工作，是好還是不好?(2011年11月19日雅思寫作題目)
3. An increasing number people are changing careers during the working life what do you think the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? 很多人一生中不斷地改變他們的職業(yè)，原因何在?你認(rèn)為是消極的還是積極的? (2014年6月21日雅思寫作題目)
原創(chuàng)范文：
首段：背景介紹+爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn)+作家立場(chǎng)
One of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their dream jobs and places of residence. Thanks to the improvement of modern public transport and communication technology, many young adults are usually magnetized by splendid job opportunities and modernized lifestyle in new cities. People have been pondering for years the pros and cons of migrant lifestyle bought about by the high-tech without reaching any definite consensus. Personally, the merits of free job selection prevail over its possible downsides(86)
點(diǎn)評(píng)：首段個(gè)性開(kāi)篇，明確作家立場(chǎng)
解析：
1. One of the traits of modern way of working and lifestyle is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their dream jobs and places of residence.現(xiàn)代工作方式的重要特征之一就是人們?cè)谶x擇他們心儀的事業(yè)和夢(mèng)想的住地的時(shí)候更加自由。
2. People have been pondering for years the pros and cons of migrant lifestyle bought about by the high-tech without reaching any definite consensus. 高科技的便利使人們可以像候鳥一樣地生活，人們多年來(lái)在思考其利弊，未能達(dá)成共識(shí)。
3. The merits of free job selection prevail over its possible downsides 自由工作選擇的利大于弊
三點(diǎn)：弊端的展開(kāi)
Nonetheless, some problems might ensue. Initially, the decomposition of family bonds is an inevitable risk due to the spatial separation. Imaginably, the face-to-face opportunities of communicating with family and friends will be diminished if people live too far. Besides, every individual should assume the obligation of getting married and startting his career, it is might be hard for people to obtain the sense of happiness and secure stable life if they change place of working too quickly. (77)
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本段寫作候鳥生活和異地工作的兩個(gè)弊端
第一：家庭紐帶的分解，面對(duì)面交流的機(jī)會(huì)的減少
第二：人人要成家立業(yè)，頻繁地改變工作地，人很難獲得幸福感和保證生活的穩(wěn)定
點(diǎn)評(píng)：(亮點(diǎn)詞匯適合口語(yǔ))
1. Nonetheless, some problems might ensue. 然而，一些問(wèn)題也許跟著發(fā)生
2. the decomposition of family bonds 家庭紐帶的分解
3. assume the obligation of getting married and startting his career 擔(dān)負(fù)成家立業(yè)的責(zé)任
尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn)
Overall, my stand is that young people are supposed to expand their minds. That is the best approach for them to deepen their insight into what they are hoping to do with their lives. Landing jobs and exploring life in diverse cities exert many positive impacts on many people, especially for those who dare to challenge themselves. (57)
點(diǎn)評(píng)：年輕人應(yīng)該被鼓勵(lì)去拓寬視野，這是最好方式讓他們加深對(duì)于自我的洞察，在不同的城市擇業(yè)和生活對(duì)于很多人有積極的影響，尤其是那些敢于挑戰(zhàn)自己的人。
解析：
1. Overall, my stand is that …… 我的立場(chǎng)是 ……
2. that is the best approach for sb to do sth 對(duì)于某人來(lái)說(shuō)，這是最佳的方式去……
3. landing jobs and exploring life in diverse cities 在不同的城市擇業(yè)以及體驗(yàn)人生
全文點(diǎn)評(píng)：全文大約360字，論證飽滿。本文個(gè)性開(kāi)篇;句型引導(dǎo)爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn);清晰表達(dá)作家立場(chǎng);邏輯詞匯銜接清晰;論證具體，細(xì)節(jié)展開(kāi)，尾段再次亮明觀點(diǎn)。
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