Many studies have shown that children harbour(英語的意思是keep nagtive thought in mind,所以呢，如果說錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)的話我們可以用這個(gè)詞) misconceptions about ‘pure’, curriculum science.
例子：Others harbour misconceptions that assessment on teachers’ behaviour will result in lack of respect.
Despite(用一個(gè)讓步的詞引出作者觀點(diǎn)) the extensive coverage(媒體類的話題必定會(huì)用到的詞匯) in the popular media of the destruction of rainforests, little formal information is available(這個(gè)詞中文很難解說，英語的話就是able to be used or obtained/somebody is not occupied) about children’s ideas in this area.
例子Despite the extensive coverage in the popular media of the violence, little case is available to show the tendency of children being violent.
Such(代詞是英語中重要的連接詞，這里一個(gè)such就已經(jīng)把上文的內(nèi)容總結(jié)了，所以不需要加任何連詞或副詞)variation can no doubt be explained with reference to(其實(shí)就是關(guān)于的意思，還可以用with respect to, in terms of等)the habitats in which individual species have developed.
例子 Such criminal cases can no doubt be explained with reference to the breakdown of family.
Navajo is far from alone(就是說本非個(gè)案).
例子 The argument against tobacco giant is far from alone
Isolation breeds(孕育的意思，這里可以直接等于lead to) linguistic diversity.
例子 the breakdown of family breeds the seed of potential crime.
Language is also(also等于in addition,但卻是最常用的過度詞) intimately bound up with(就是關(guān)系密切的意思，就等于connect) culture.
例子 Pollution is also intimately bound up with economic
Disenchantment(失去魔力的意思，這里是指傳統(tǒng)醫(yī)療每況愈下的意思，其實(shí)這句用在小作文中極其合適) with orthodox medicine has seen(見證，也可以用witness，或者last 20 years witnesses)the popularity of alternative therapies in Australia climb steadily during the past 20 years.
例子 Disenchantment with beef consumption has seen the popularity of consuming pork in Australia climb steadily during the past 20 years.
Rather than(不是而是，也是個(gè)不錯(cuò)的過渡句) resisting or criticising this(代詞的魔力我就不強(qiáng)調(diào))trend, increasing number of(其實(shí)就是more and more，你可以發(fā)掘外國幾乎是不用more and more的)Australian doctors, particularly younger ones, are forming group practices.
例子 Rather than resisting this trend, increasing number of teachers are concluding the assessment from students for the self-improvement purpose.
Typically, children do not end up on the streets due to a single cause, but to a combination of factors: a dearth of adequately funded schools, the demand for income at home, family breakdown and violence.( 經(jīng)典的中心論點(diǎn)句，我就不多說了)
例子 Children do not end up in the prison due to a single cause, but to a combination of factors: unfortunate breakdown of family, absent attention from parents, severe addiction to violent media.
Nutrition is another area(和also一樣，是外國很喜歡用的連接詞) that sports trainers have failed to address adequately.
例子Severe healthy damage is another area that tobacco enterprises have failed to mention adequately
Revolutionary ideas still(還是起到also的作用) come from the athletes themselves.(這句是直接把要寫的點(diǎn)給提出來，沒有任何拖拉，這種direct的方式，中國學(xué)生很多時(shí)候很難做到)
例子 Astronomical tax revenue still comes from the tobacco giant.
以后有空還會(huì)繼續(xù)更劍橋5，6，7，8系列，當(dāng)然內(nèi)容可能不止于分論點(diǎn)句，還會(huì)涉及到寫作的其他部分