2013雅思考試真題:2013.4.6雅思寫作考試機經(jīng)點評1【新東方】

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    2013年4月6日雅思寫作真題點評
    
題目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
     一些人認為人類在各方面已經(jīng)取得了不斷的進步,而另外一些人認為并非如此。人類在哪些領(lǐng)域取得了進步?哪些領(lǐng)域沒有取得發(fā)展?
開頭段  How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中間段1 回答第一問:人類在哪些領(lǐng)域取得了進步? 1. 眾所周知,幾個世紀(jì)以來,人類一直致力于通過發(fā)展科技來改善生存環(huán)境。
     It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
     【論證示范】
     Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次,與過去相比,人類在醫(yī)學(xué)領(lǐng)域取得了許多突破。
     Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中間段2 回答第二問:哪些領(lǐng)域沒有取得發(fā)展? 1. 污染,全球變暖,物種滅絕等環(huán)境問題已經(jīng)成為很多國家頭痛的問題,它們經(jīng)常會陷于經(jīng)濟發(fā)展和生態(tài)平衡的困境中。
     Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development  and ecological balance. 2.各個種族和宗教間的武裝沖突是一個持續(xù)性的問題,這對世界的和平與和諧造成了威脅。
     Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
結(jié)尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
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