2012年6月雅思寫作真題解析
Writing Task One
【題目】
表格題(Table)
據(jù)考生回憶，此次考察的題目是1980年、2000年和2030年，在以上三個(gè)年份中，加拿大、英國(guó)和德國(guó)三國(guó)（in Canada, The UK andGermany）65歲及以上（those aged 65 and over）人口所占的比例。(此題是舊題改造，將劍橋雅思5 TEST 2 的線圖改成了桌面圖，遣詞造句可以參考劍橋雅思提供的滿分作文。)
【Tips】
針對(duì)此類題目，需提醒大家注意的是：仔細(xì)觀察表格橫行和縱列各自代表的意義，另外在body paragraph(s)寫作的過(guò)程中，第一縱列內(nèi)所列內(nèi)容一個(gè)不能缺，具體如下：第一、開(kāi)頭introduction釋義題目，變換題目words, phrases and sentencestructure；第二、在寫作body paragraph(s)時(shí)，注意“相似數(shù)據(jù)”描述以及“大小數(shù)據(jù)”比較論述；第三、conclusion段寫作時(shí)，注意對(duì)body paragraph(s)數(shù)據(jù)客觀解析部分進(jìn)行總體趨勢(shì)概述。
【句型】
1-The table shows...
2-The figures for both Canada and Germany were comparatively low.
3-The UK saw an increase in the total number of people aged 65 and over.
4-Canada witnessed a similar trend.
5-It represented an increase of more than 10 per cent, compared to 5 percent in Germany and 3 per cent in the UK.
6-The figures in *** doubled that in ***.
7-Canada had a lower proportion of older people.
8-Overall, it is clear that...
【劍橋雅思5 TEST 2 Task 1】
【滿分范文】
The graph shows the increase in the ageing population in Japan, Sweden and the USA. It indicates that the percentage of elderly people in all three countries is expected to increase to almost 25% of the respective populations by the year 2040.
In 1940 the proportion of people aged 65 or more stood at only 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and 9% in the US. However, while the figures for the Western countries grew to about 15% in around 1990, the figure for Japan dipped to only 2.5% for much of this period, before rising to almost 5% again at the present time.
In spite of some fluctuation in the expected percentages, the proportion of older people will probably continue to increase in the next two decades in the three countries. A more dramatic rise is predicted between 2030 and 2040 in Japan, by which time it is thought that the proportion of elderly people will be similar in the three countries.
Writing Task 2
Some people think news is in no connection with people's lives; therefore, it is a complete waste of time to read the news in the newspaper or watch TV news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
【題目解析】
典型的因果類題目。前因后果類題目應(yīng)該首先分析大前提news is in no connection with people's lives是否成立；即使這個(gè)大前提成立，結(jié)論it is a complete waste of time to read the news in the newspaper or watch TV news也未必成立。
【審題關(guān)鍵詞】
1-news
2-in no connection with
3-a complete waste of time
4-read the news in the newspaper
5-watch TV news
【寫作語(yǔ)匯】
1-inculcate a great habit likereading in someone
2-become a passion forsomeone
3-one’s perseverance of thistrend
4-the mounting pressure ofwork
5-keep someone engrossed
6-introduce someone to the differentcultures around the globe
7-give you a glimpse into othercultures and places of the world
8-reduce boredom
9-break the monotony of a lazy,uncreative and boring life
10-explore a new world filled withinformation and ingenuity
11-make your vision blurry
12-for a wide variety of reasons