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    An increase in production of consumer goods results in damage of the natural environment. What are the causes and possible solutions?
    首先理解consumer goods. 結(jié)合柯林斯Consumer goods are items bought by people for their own use, rather than by businesses
    此題為環(huán)境問題類別,并且采用報(bào)告結(jié)構(gòu)??梢詤⒖?2年06年考過的題目:
    Many people believe that the human society has developed into a throw-away society, which is filled with plastic bags and rubbish. What are the causes and solutions?
    解題思路:日用消費(fèi)品生產(chǎn)增加導(dǎo)致了環(huán)境污染?東西生產(chǎn)出來了而且造成污染,我覺得主要還是在于到了消費(fèi)者的手里之后發(fā)生的變化。
     1. 第一點(diǎn)原因:lower awareness of waste issues--- tend to dispose wastes whenever and wherever they consider convenient--- aggravate the pollution
    人們環(huán)保意識(shí)不高,隨意扔垃圾,會(huì)造成污染。
    如何論證:舉例子口香糖隨地亂扔
    To be more specific, throwing chewing gum arbitrarily may cause eternal pollution.
    Detail: Sidewalk pollution
    Seeing a piece of chewing gum, few people will pick that up. A majority of people just step on it, causing it to stick to the sidewalk or someone’s shoe, eventually leading to a sidewalk of pollution right under your own feet
    How to handle this problem?
    Follow the example of Singapore that enforced stricter rules regulating the discharging of refuse.
    2) 第二點(diǎn)原因 Lack qualified staff who can cope with the processing of certain poisonous materials in consumer goods, which may eventually cause natural contamination.
    缺乏可以處理污染源的專業(yè)人士。
    如何論證:舉例子
    For example, to gut a fridge one needs to remove the foam first and capture ozone-depleting gases for which old fridges are notorious. However, the problem is that most people in the recycling business, except those in developed countries, don’t know how to tackle it.
    How to handle this problem
    背景:There are proper automated processes for further recycling in Europe.
    所以可以建議歐洲國家做如下兩件事
     1. assist people in developing countries get familiar with the processing procedure/ provide more applicable devices
     2. Stop exporting their own waste problems to disadvantaged countries because of the lack of equivalent treatment standards there.
    以上第二點(diǎn)原因和解決方法筆者參考了Beijing Review 第52期中的文章Waste Not。筆者建議大家可以在課后多多關(guān)注一些時(shí)事雜志,里面有很多相關(guān)問題的原因探討和解決方法。
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