雅思作文題之典型錯誤(上)

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    對于大多數(shù)國內(nèi)雅思考生而言,5-6分是比較容易取得的分?jǐn)?shù)。但是有部分同學(xué)連續(xù)考兩次雅思,作文均得5分。他們百思不得其解:他們掌握了寫作的技巧,也有充分的論點論據(jù),為什么6分這么難?其實他們的癥結(jié)在于語言基礎(chǔ)太不扎實,出現(xiàn)大量語言錯誤,通篇充斥著句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞錯誤,甚至于第一段就出現(xiàn)“低級”語言錯誤十幾處,讓考官目不忍睹。在過去六年里,筆者批改了培訓(xùn)學(xué)員的近十萬篇習(xí)作,對考生常見問題進(jìn)行了歸納整理,及時指出他們的錯誤,并從中英語言差異的角度,詳細(xì)分析問題出現(xiàn)的深層次成因,從而達(dá)到治標(biāo)兼治本的效果。
    下面的改錯練習(xí),希望考生認(rèn)真分析其錯誤之處并找出其成因,不要停留在改錯的表層水平,應(yīng)該挖掘其深層次的成因,以避免屢次犯同樣的“低級”錯誤。
    1. The invention of computers makes people live more comfortable and convenient.
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    2. Don’t put hand in pocket.
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    3. Many traffic accidents occurred is the result of careless.
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    4. Last night was too cold.
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    5. By comparison, nuclear energy has some distinctive advantages, such as it is very clean and cheap.
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    6. Some people claim that fast food will instead of traditional food.
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    7. Despite he is very diligent at study, he stills cannot pass the IELTS test.
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    8. I finished homework and went out of dormitory for a drink.
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    9. Though the Internet has many benefits, but it also has some drawbacks.
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    10. If you are convenient, please give me a hand.
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    11. In the past, the price of milk was so expensive that few people could hardly afford it.
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    12. I forgot my watch at home.
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    13. Smoking is harmful to your body.
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    14. Under his help, we past the IELTS test.
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    15. The two types of designs exist difference.
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    16. The true fact is he never offers help to others.
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    17. There are many people plan to study abroad.
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    18. Keep pets are very popular among people live in big city.
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    19. If let alone at home, many old people are very dangerous.
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    20. The society should pay more attention to the problems of education, poverty and disease, however, they seldom do so.
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    21. Today is very hot, I stay home.
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    22. When talking to the interviewer, my heart was beating very fast.
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    23. He gave the rose to the lovely lady that he had bought for his wife.
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    24. Comparing with the performance of Linda, Kent’s performance is far from perfect.
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    25. The big noise makes me can’t sleep well.
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    26. My suggestion is more attention should be attached to the issue of youth drug abuse.
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    27. The price of milk is more expensive than rice.
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    28. The amount of bikes will decline in ten years.
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    29. Smoking is harmful to one’s body. On the one hand, it can cause lung cancer. On the other hand, it can increase the chances of having a miscarriage if a woman is pregnant.
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    30. The reason why people choose to live in cities is because the city life is more convenient and colorful.
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    31. People think develop space research will spend a huge number of money.
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    32. Now people go abroad becomes very easy.
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    33. Computer is a useful tool for student learn English.
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    34. Raising pets are good for old people and child.
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    35. Pet like dog and cat accompany them.
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    36. Keep pet in big city is not allowed.
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    37. There are many medical reports reveal that keeping pet can prevent heart disease and help patient to feel comfortably.
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    38. Discuss about/complain about/enter into the room/contact with/
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    39. Keep a pet would affect familial relationship.
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    40. It arises a public debate as to whether we humans should carry out experiments on animals.
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    41. Pursuit of fashion spends much money and waste much time.
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    42. However, others people suggest that college students do the part-time job is quite beneficial.
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    43. Young people live and study by themselves is of great significance to their future career.
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    44. On the whole, computer games have both advantages and disadvantages. But fairly speaking, everyone has to admit that it’s disadvantages far overweight it’s advantages.
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    45. I find myself difficult to work and study there due to my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.
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    46. I am very difficult to write essays in English.
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    47. When one is over 70 years old, he is very dangerous if left alone at home.
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    48. I hope this letter would draw your attention and look into the case.
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    49. Last year saw a rapidly raise in the volume of output.
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    50. A small thief entered into my room and my room was stolen last night.
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    51. I would like a single room to live and study.
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    52. I am sorry for my abrupt departure that day, for I received a telephone that day asking me to return back home immediately.
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    53. I and my sister like pets very much. Therefore we strongly against the ban on pet-raising.
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    54. They maybe very busy so that they can not spare some time for their aged parents.
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    55. The curve rose upward sharply in the past few days.
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    56. After three days’ meeting, we drew a final conclusion that Tom is a dishonest man.
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