下面為大家整理的是關(guān)于雅思寫(xiě)作方法中最先吸引考官眼睛的開(kāi)頭部分,重要內(nèi)容落在了如何在開(kāi)頭部分加入相關(guān)的背景知識(shí)。在雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭中介紹背景知識(shí)可以增加字?jǐn)?shù)也可以給后面的正文一個(gè)鋪墊,我們一起來(lái)看看詳細(xì)內(nèi)容吧。
雅思寫(xiě)作的開(kāi)頭部分主要包括了三個(gè)重點(diǎn):
Background information
Issue under discussion
Personal idea (這也是我們常說(shuō)的thesis statement)
Prediction (對(duì)文章總體內(nèi)容的預(yù)測(cè),不強(qiáng)求考生在考試時(shí)候?qū)?
在這個(gè)必寫(xiě)的前三點(diǎn)中,background information一般都應(yīng)該是最先出現(xiàn)的,也是最容易讓人接受的。下面我們來(lái)看看幾個(gè)雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭的例子吧。
Example 1:Some say that building more roads will help reduce the traffic congestion in big cities. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Do you support or oppose this statement?
Example 2:In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
例1:
這句話“Some say that building more roads will help reduce the traffic congestion in big cities.”是一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。其中say告訴我們,這個(gè)是個(gè)人持有的想法,而且是可以提出反對(duì)意見(jiàn)并對(duì)其進(jìn)行批駁的,因此也被稱(chēng)為debatable statement。
表示提出觀點(diǎn)的同義詞有:think, believe, hold, maintain, state, claim, present, support, be in favor of, be for, be opposite to, object to, be against…
在開(kāi)頭段中要求給出的background information應(yīng)該是一個(gè)事實(shí)信息,因此,在例1中,我們不可以通過(guò)照抄題目,當(dāng)作background information。所謂的背景信息,你只要問(wèn)自己一個(gè)問(wèn)題,即:“在一個(gè)怎么樣的社會(huì)環(huán)境下產(chǎn)生了一個(gè)有爭(zhēng)議的話題”?;卮鹆诉@個(gè)問(wèn)題,background information就出來(lái)了。
例1 中給出“有些人認(rèn)為建更多的道路能減緩大城市交通擁堵?tīng)顩r。”提出這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的前提是存在交通擁堵情況,并且很?chē)?yán)重,需要解決。交通擁堵情況的產(chǎn)生的根源是大量使用汽車(chē)、或者是道路規(guī)劃存在問(wèn)題等,因此這些就是這個(gè)話題的前提,也就是在這個(gè)背景下,產(chǎn)生了這個(gè)話題,因此background information就應(yīng)運(yùn)而生了。比如我們可以寫(xiě)成:
Sample 1:With the popularity of automobile in big cities, an increasing number of problems have arisen, one of which is the traffic congestion.
在內(nèi)容有了之后,我們就要開(kāi)始追求詞匯和句型了,paraphrase是重要技巧之一。全篇文章中要做paraphrase 的地方很多,比如如何闡述要討論的話題,body部分的concluding sentence,結(jié)尾段的restatement of the thesis statement; summarize the topic sentences. 包括在小作文中也很重要。 我們也會(huì)在之后的博文中重點(diǎn)討論如何paraphrase。
以上這個(gè)句子,我們也可以擴(kuò)展成以下語(yǔ)義更復(fù)雜的句子:
Sample 2:When technology accelerates, an inevitable consequence brought with it is the unprecedented problems arising from it. Similarly, the enjoyment of automobile in modern cities also leaves people an ever intricate problem---the traffic congestion.
例2:
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
題目給出“在一些國(guó)家,年輕人被鼓勵(lì)在高中畢業(yè)和大學(xué)之間,花一年的時(shí)間來(lái)工作或旅游。”這個(gè)就被稱(chēng)為了non-debatable statement,因?yàn)檫@個(gè)做法已經(jīng)存在,也沒(méi)法去反駁,因此是個(gè)事實(shí)信息。我們就可以直接把它拿來(lái)做背景了。完全照抄是不得不到高分的,paraphrase和sentence variety的功力就要體現(xiàn)在這里了,參考Sample:
Sample1:Instead of directly attending university after the graduation from high school, youngsters in some countries are encouraged to spend one year working or travelling around first.
Sample 2:There is a tendency that high school graduates are urged to work or travel for one year before their receiving higher education.
從上面的介紹中我們就可以看到,想要在雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭中準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)相關(guān)的背景知識(shí),大家需要認(rèn)證審題,分清fact和opinion,這樣才能在下筆的時(shí)候,有更多的選擇和更好的表達(dá)方式進(jìn)行敘述。
雅思寫(xiě)作的開(kāi)頭部分主要包括了三個(gè)重點(diǎn):
Background information
Issue under discussion
Personal idea (這也是我們常說(shuō)的thesis statement)
Prediction (對(duì)文章總體內(nèi)容的預(yù)測(cè),不強(qiáng)求考生在考試時(shí)候?qū)?
在這個(gè)必寫(xiě)的前三點(diǎn)中,background information一般都應(yīng)該是最先出現(xiàn)的,也是最容易讓人接受的。下面我們來(lái)看看幾個(gè)雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭的例子吧。
Example 1:Some say that building more roads will help reduce the traffic congestion in big cities. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Do you support or oppose this statement?
Example 2:In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
例1:
這句話“Some say that building more roads will help reduce the traffic congestion in big cities.”是一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。其中say告訴我們,這個(gè)是個(gè)人持有的想法,而且是可以提出反對(duì)意見(jiàn)并對(duì)其進(jìn)行批駁的,因此也被稱(chēng)為debatable statement。
表示提出觀點(diǎn)的同義詞有:think, believe, hold, maintain, state, claim, present, support, be in favor of, be for, be opposite to, object to, be against…
在開(kāi)頭段中要求給出的background information應(yīng)該是一個(gè)事實(shí)信息,因此,在例1中,我們不可以通過(guò)照抄題目,當(dāng)作background information。所謂的背景信息,你只要問(wèn)自己一個(gè)問(wèn)題,即:“在一個(gè)怎么樣的社會(huì)環(huán)境下產(chǎn)生了一個(gè)有爭(zhēng)議的話題”?;卮鹆诉@個(gè)問(wèn)題,background information就出來(lái)了。
例1 中給出“有些人認(rèn)為建更多的道路能減緩大城市交通擁堵?tīng)顩r。”提出這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的前提是存在交通擁堵情況,并且很?chē)?yán)重,需要解決。交通擁堵情況的產(chǎn)生的根源是大量使用汽車(chē)、或者是道路規(guī)劃存在問(wèn)題等,因此這些就是這個(gè)話題的前提,也就是在這個(gè)背景下,產(chǎn)生了這個(gè)話題,因此background information就應(yīng)運(yùn)而生了。比如我們可以寫(xiě)成:
Sample 1:With the popularity of automobile in big cities, an increasing number of problems have arisen, one of which is the traffic congestion.
在內(nèi)容有了之后,我們就要開(kāi)始追求詞匯和句型了,paraphrase是重要技巧之一。全篇文章中要做paraphrase 的地方很多,比如如何闡述要討論的話題,body部分的concluding sentence,結(jié)尾段的restatement of the thesis statement; summarize the topic sentences. 包括在小作文中也很重要。 我們也會(huì)在之后的博文中重點(diǎn)討論如何paraphrase。
以上這個(gè)句子,我們也可以擴(kuò)展成以下語(yǔ)義更復(fù)雜的句子:
Sample 2:When technology accelerates, an inevitable consequence brought with it is the unprecedented problems arising from it. Similarly, the enjoyment of automobile in modern cities also leaves people an ever intricate problem---the traffic congestion.
例2:
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
題目給出“在一些國(guó)家,年輕人被鼓勵(lì)在高中畢業(yè)和大學(xué)之間,花一年的時(shí)間來(lái)工作或旅游。”這個(gè)就被稱(chēng)為了non-debatable statement,因?yàn)檫@個(gè)做法已經(jīng)存在,也沒(méi)法去反駁,因此是個(gè)事實(shí)信息。我們就可以直接把它拿來(lái)做背景了。完全照抄是不得不到高分的,paraphrase和sentence variety的功力就要體現(xiàn)在這里了,參考Sample:
Sample1:Instead of directly attending university after the graduation from high school, youngsters in some countries are encouraged to spend one year working or travelling around first.
Sample 2:There is a tendency that high school graduates are urged to work or travel for one year before their receiving higher education.
從上面的介紹中我們就可以看到,想要在雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭中準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)相關(guān)的背景知識(shí),大家需要認(rèn)證審題,分清fact和opinion,這樣才能在下筆的時(shí)候,有更多的選擇和更好的表達(dá)方式進(jìn)行敘述。