本文來(lái)自雅思作文網(wǎng)liuxue86.com《使句子多樣化的技巧》。
一篇好文章的條件很多。除了內(nèi)容豐富和組織緊密之外, 詞匯的運(yùn)用和句子的處理,也起著決定性作用。
句子可長(zhǎng)可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表達(dá)。如果句子清一色是簡(jiǎn)單句,文章必定很單調(diào)乏味。如果全篇充滿了冗長(zhǎng)的復(fù)雜句,讀起來(lái)也很費(fèi)力。最好的方法是以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ),配合適當(dāng)?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)雜句。簡(jiǎn)單句可長(zhǎng)可短,通常要加些附屬成分,如分詞短語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)、副詞短語(yǔ)、不定式動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ),以及節(jié)縮成分。
總之,作者可根據(jù)情況,使句子多樣化,使文章靈活多姿。例如下列五個(gè)句子的基本概念一樣,但是句式不同,內(nèi)容重點(diǎn)也有些差別:
(1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句(1)+2)
(2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (現(xiàn)在分語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)+簡(jiǎn)單句)
(3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副詞短語(yǔ)+并列分句(1)-(2) )
(4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (簡(jiǎn)單句+形容語(yǔ)短語(yǔ))
(5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副詞從句+主句)
(1)和(5)的句式最常見(jiàn);如果加上其他三種互相交替,句子不是更多樣化嗎
雅思作文要想更進(jìn)一步,請(qǐng)?zhí)焯煸L問(wèn)我們.感謝閱讀《使句子多樣化的技巧》一文.
一篇好文章的條件很多。除了內(nèi)容豐富和組織緊密之外, 詞匯的運(yùn)用和句子的處理,也起著決定性作用。
句子可長(zhǎng)可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表達(dá)。如果句子清一色是簡(jiǎn)單句,文章必定很單調(diào)乏味。如果全篇充滿了冗長(zhǎng)的復(fù)雜句,讀起來(lái)也很費(fèi)力。最好的方法是以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ),配合適當(dāng)?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷?fù)雜句。簡(jiǎn)單句可長(zhǎng)可短,通常要加些附屬成分,如分詞短語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)、副詞短語(yǔ)、不定式動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ),以及節(jié)縮成分。
總之,作者可根據(jù)情況,使句子多樣化,使文章靈活多姿。例如下列五個(gè)句子的基本概念一樣,但是句式不同,內(nèi)容重點(diǎn)也有些差別:
(1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句(1)+2)
(2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (現(xiàn)在分語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)+簡(jiǎn)單句)
(3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副詞短語(yǔ)+并列分句(1)-(2) )
(4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (簡(jiǎn)單句+形容語(yǔ)短語(yǔ))
(5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副詞從句+主句)
(1)和(5)的句式最常見(jiàn);如果加上其他三種互相交替,句子不是更多樣化嗎
雅思作文要想更進(jìn)一步,請(qǐng)?zhí)焯煸L問(wèn)我們.感謝閱讀《使句子多樣化的技巧》一文.

