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教了一年多的雅思寫作，學生總是問我要如何去使文章的句型多樣化起來，至少能做到滿足6分的寫作標準。其實一篇好文章的條件很多。除了內(nèi)容豐富和組織緊密之外，詞匯的運用和句子的處理，也起著決定性作用。但是目前很多雅思考生的問題就是句子過于口語化，普通化，句式僅僅是在主謂式運轉，沒有強調(diào)句，被動句和there be句型等。論證部分的內(nèi)容更是用非常平鋪直敘記流水帳式的方式寫，毫無生動性。這個現(xiàn)象也是歸因于考生的思維局限沒有得到擴展，寫作習慣和平時的閱讀積累句型等方面原因?，F(xiàn)在隨著手機短信，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的廣泛應用，寫作這個東西變得越來越不正式。習慣問題往往會給雅思寫作帶來致命的傷害。所以，我個人覺得養(yǎng)成一個寫作的習慣不管是對考試還是將來的工作都會是大有幫助的。
在雅思寫作中，大家也都可以了解到這個最簡單的道理：雅思句子可長可短，同一件事，可以用不同的句式表達。如果句子清一色是簡單句，文章必定很單調(diào)乏味。如果全篇充滿了冗長的復雜句，讀起來也很費力。那什么才是最合適的呢？最好的方法是以簡單句為基礎，配合適當?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷碗s句。簡單句可長可短，通常要加些附屬成分，如分詞短語、介詞短語、副詞短語、不定式動詞短語，以及節(jié)縮成分。
總之，作者可根據(jù)情況，使句子多樣化，使文章靈活多姿。例如下列五個句子的基本概念一樣，但是句式不同，內(nèi)容重點也有些差別：
(1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句(1)+2)
(2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (現(xiàn)在分語短語+簡單句)
(3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副詞短語+并列分句(1)-(2) )
(4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (簡單句+形容語短語)
(5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副詞從句+主句)
(1)和(5)的句式最常見；如果加上其他三種互相交替，句子不是更多樣化嗎？
最后，看看這兩個句子要如何多樣化呢？
(6) The young pilot was on his first overseas training.
(7) He felt very uneasy.
我們可以將它們變成一下這幾種：
(a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy.
(b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training.
(c) The young pilot's first overseas training made him feel very uneasy.
(d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.
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(e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy.
(f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.
(g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.
(h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy.
(i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy.
(j) When the young pilot was on his/first overseas trainging, he felt very uneasy.
(k) As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.
(l) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy.
在上述12個句子中，(a)-(g)是簡單句；(h)是并列句；(i)-(l)是復雜句。簡單句除(b)和(g)之外，其他五樣，用的人并不多。人們最喜歡采用復雜句，尤其是(j)和(k)這兩款；接著便是并列句(h)。如果大多數(shù)人的句子只限于(b),(g), (h), (j)和(k)這五種，而其他的則棄如敝屣，不是很可惜嗎？
預祝您雅思作文更上一層樓,感謝您閱讀《句子多樣化》一文.
教了一年多的雅思寫作，學生總是問我要如何去使文章的句型多樣化起來，至少能做到滿足6分的寫作標準。其實一篇好文章的條件很多。除了內(nèi)容豐富和組織緊密之外，詞匯的運用和句子的處理，也起著決定性作用。但是目前很多雅思考生的問題就是句子過于口語化，普通化，句式僅僅是在主謂式運轉，沒有強調(diào)句，被動句和there be句型等。論證部分的內(nèi)容更是用非常平鋪直敘記流水帳式的方式寫，毫無生動性。這個現(xiàn)象也是歸因于考生的思維局限沒有得到擴展，寫作習慣和平時的閱讀積累句型等方面原因?，F(xiàn)在隨著手機短信，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的廣泛應用，寫作這個東西變得越來越不正式。習慣問題往往會給雅思寫作帶來致命的傷害。所以，我個人覺得養(yǎng)成一個寫作的習慣不管是對考試還是將來的工作都會是大有幫助的。
在雅思寫作中，大家也都可以了解到這個最簡單的道理：雅思句子可長可短，同一件事，可以用不同的句式表達。如果句子清一色是簡單句，文章必定很單調(diào)乏味。如果全篇充滿了冗長的復雜句，讀起來也很費力。那什么才是最合適的呢？最好的方法是以簡單句為基礎，配合適當?shù)牟⒘芯浜蛷碗s句。簡單句可長可短，通常要加些附屬成分，如分詞短語、介詞短語、副詞短語、不定式動詞短語，以及節(jié)縮成分。
總之，作者可根據(jù)情況，使句子多樣化，使文章靈活多姿。例如下列五個句子的基本概念一樣，但是句式不同，內(nèi)容重點也有些差別：
(1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句(1)+2)
(2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (現(xiàn)在分語短語+簡單句)
(3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副詞短語+并列分句(1)-(2) )
(4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (簡單句+形容語短語)
(5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副詞從句+主句)
(1)和(5)的句式最常見；如果加上其他三種互相交替，句子不是更多樣化嗎？
最后，看看這兩個句子要如何多樣化呢？
(6) The young pilot was on his first overseas training.
(7) He felt very uneasy.
我們可以將它們變成一下這幾種：
(a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy.
(b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training.
(c) The young pilot's first overseas training made him feel very uneasy.
(d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.
預祝您雅思作文更上一層樓,感謝您閱讀《句子多樣化》一文.本文來自雅思作文網(wǎng)liuxue86.com《句子多樣化》。
(e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy.
(f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.
(g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.
(h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy.
(i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy.
(j) When the young pilot was on his/first overseas trainging, he felt very uneasy.
(k) As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.
(l) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy.
在上述12個句子中，(a)-(g)是簡單句；(h)是并列句；(i)-(l)是復雜句。簡單句除(b)和(g)之外，其他五樣，用的人并不多。人們最喜歡采用復雜句，尤其是(j)和(k)這兩款；接著便是并列句(h)。如果大多數(shù)人的句子只限于(b),(g), (h), (j)和(k)這五種，而其他的則棄如敝屣，不是很可惜嗎？
預祝您雅思作文更上一層樓,感謝您閱讀《句子多樣化》一文.