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摘自本人最新研究課程:AIE組合作文法第2部分第1節(jié)
? Internet:
? Advertisement?
? Private income-tax?
1. Brainstorming的方法
(1)“科目歸類法” 按固定角度,特征或條件思考相關(guān)內(nèi)容細(xì)節(jié)。
①. “找一個(gè)英國人?”è Beckham,Tony Blair;
②. “找一個(gè)傳統(tǒng)建筑典型?”è Chinese,Russiaè the Forbidden city, the Kremlin;
③. “找一個(gè)偉人但不一定不富裕” è Martin Luther King, Mother Teresa
(2) “細(xì)節(jié)總結(jié)法
④. 廣告advertisement
腦海中浮現(xiàn):具體事物與之聯(lián)系 “KFC hamburgers” è tasty chickenègo to try oneè attractive, sale-profits, providing information è economic benefits, informative, artistic creation,
2. 多觀點(diǎn),多角度的思考問題
中心句的總公式:
In what aspect/principal/angle, what kind of effect does the subject exert on the specific object?
主語(施動(dòng)者)給賓語(受動(dòng)者)在哪個(gè)角度產(chǎn)生什么效果?
寫作格式:建議/判斷+理由
…………………. because………………..
構(gòu)建中心句原因內(nèi)容的步驟:
1. who/whom will be involved in ……….?Advertisement?
答案: ___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
如何找到who/whom?
? Groups群體分類法:
?
? Governmentsèofficials, countries, authorities…….
? Publicècitizens, residence,
? Individualè sex, age, poor/rich, minority/people, smart/slow,
表達(dá)建議,贊成,選擇……
? Suggest= advise, propose, recommend, advocate;
Be encourage. Promoted(發(fā)揚(yáng))
? Discourage
? Support, agree,
? Prefer=choose, would like, favor
? Disagree= despite, object, oppose to
? Abandon, discard, be restricted, supervised,
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? I support AAA .
? AAA should be supported.
? It is supported for sb. to do …….
? Doing AAA should be supported/discouraged
? I prefer AAA to BBB …..
? I would rather choose AAA than BBB
中心句的理由句
? AAA/It/this practice/ this policy/ this choice /doing (applying, implementing, executing, conducting, committing (crime, suicide) ) AAA.
? + produces/offers/brings/creates
? / involves/incurs/poses
? + for…./to…..
? + EFFECT/IMPACT
課堂練習(xí)1:將下列中心句的素材改寫成標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的中心句句型:
【考題】Are cars doing more harm than good?
? 例題:
1. Cars are evils resulting from modernization, for they make people suffer rather than enjoy life.
è Cars should be discouraged because they are evils resulting from modernization which make people suffer rather than enjoy life.
2. Motor cars enable people to become more mobile.
è We should promote the usage of cars for the reason that Motor cars enable people to become more mobile.
Arguments FOR
Traffic accidents caused by cars not only bring death and injury, but also make people suffer mentally and psychologically.
Every year car owners have to pay vast sums to the exchequer: road tax, purchase tax, oil tax, etc. This is a big drain on their resources.
The roads are so often jammed with cars that ambulances and fire engines find it difficult to fulfill their duties. (提示:Cars should be done away with because……
Cars often produce air pollution and fill the cities with unbearable noise.
Cars are the cause of traffic accidents. All over the world thousands upon thousands of people are killed or injured every year.
Counter-arguments Against
Possessing a car gives one a much greater degree of mobility, enabling him to move around freely.
The owner of a car is not forced to rely on public transport and is, therefore, not compelled to work locally.
Buses are often crowded and slow, especially during rush-hour. If there are more cars, people can get around more easily.
With the popularization of cars, the suburbs will become more developed, and the downtown area will be less crowded.
思維公式:目標(biāo)對象 Sè被作用對象 Oè產(chǎn)生的效果
雅思寫作頻道編輯感謝您閱讀《中心句的構(gòu)建》一文.本文來自雅思作文網(wǎng)liuxue86.com《中心句的構(gòu)建》。
思路一:S和O都是非生命的抽象對象(culture,artistic project,national pride);O產(chǎn)生非常positive 或negative的后果,主要體現(xiàn)在動(dòng)詞上
基本句型一: S+V+O (或者被動(dòng) O+ be+ V-ed+ S)
帶有褒義的動(dòng)詞組合有:
l produces/offers/brings/creates+ 優(yōu)點(diǎn)
l involves/incurs/poses+ 壞處
①. Arts illustrate a country’s civilization.
②. Government money inevitably produces mediocre or even hockey art.
③. Beautiful paintings, fair-sounding operas and other works of art enhance the quality of life.
④. The image of a country as a modern, civilized and dynamic society can be enhanced by booming cultural development
思路二:O=生物,尤其是人類;O= 個(gè)體(individual),公民(citizens),公眾(public),居民(local residence/dwellers),消費(fèi)者(consumers)
基本句型二: S+V+O (或者被動(dòng) O+ be+ V-ed+ S)
(1) S正面作用于/或負(fù)面作用于個(gè)人,主要體現(xiàn)在特殊動(dòng)詞上
S+V.+sb. 或者 sb+V.+S 或者被動(dòng) S+be+ V-ed+sb.
⑤. Artistic interests are just shared by a small proportion of people.
(2) S正面作用于/或負(fù)面作用于個(gè)人,并同時(shí)引發(fā)(直接邏輯順承)被作用人O作出反應(yīng)
S+V+sb.+to do
⑥. Artistic education offers young generation opportunities to develop their cognitive skills.
⑦. Subsidies for musicians, artists, actors and drama companies will shift their focus on creating arts to pleasing that provides such subsidies.
范例:
①. Advertisements should be discouraged because too much commercials pose the threat/risks of over-consumption on consumers.
②. Advertisements should be opposed to because some of them contain misleading and damaging information which is inappropriate for children to watch.
③. English spreading is bad è culturally disadvantageous/damaging/
English spreading should be restricted because teenagers will be lead to neglect their native language.
④. English spreading is financially beneficial
Spreading English should be advocated because this practice brings more profits to companies.
⑤. English spreading is culturally favorable
English should be promoted all over the world because it enables people from different cultures to communicate with each other easily.
雅思寫作頻道編輯感謝您閱讀《中心句的構(gòu)建》一文.本文來自雅思作文網(wǎng)liuxue86.com《中心句的構(gòu)建》。
重點(diǎn)詞匯補(bǔ)充:
形容“正確和錯(cuò)誤,優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)'的詞群
POSITIVE:
Beneficial advantageous favorable rewarding appropriate desirable wise logical practical rational sound justifiable
NEGATIVE:
damaging= destructive detrimental harmful malignant evil ferocious
雅思寫作頻道編輯感謝您閱讀《中心句的構(gòu)建》一文.
摘自本人最新研究課程:AIE組合作文法第2部分第1節(jié)
? Internet:
? Advertisement?
? Private income-tax?
1. Brainstorming的方法
(1)“科目歸類法” 按固定角度,特征或條件思考相關(guān)內(nèi)容細(xì)節(jié)。
①. “找一個(gè)英國人?”è Beckham,Tony Blair;
②. “找一個(gè)傳統(tǒng)建筑典型?”è Chinese,Russiaè the Forbidden city, the Kremlin;
③. “找一個(gè)偉人但不一定不富裕” è Martin Luther King, Mother Teresa
(2) “細(xì)節(jié)總結(jié)法
④. 廣告advertisement
腦海中浮現(xiàn):具體事物與之聯(lián)系 “KFC hamburgers” è tasty chickenègo to try oneè attractive, sale-profits, providing information è economic benefits, informative, artistic creation,
2. 多觀點(diǎn),多角度的思考問題
中心句的總公式:
In what aspect/principal/angle, what kind of effect does the subject exert on the specific object?
主語(施動(dòng)者)給賓語(受動(dòng)者)在哪個(gè)角度產(chǎn)生什么效果?
寫作格式:建議/判斷+理由
…………………. because………………..
構(gòu)建中心句原因內(nèi)容的步驟:
1. who/whom will be involved in ……….?Advertisement?
答案: ___________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
如何找到who/whom?
? Groups群體分類法:
?
? Governmentsèofficials, countries, authorities…….
? Publicècitizens, residence,
? Individualè sex, age, poor/rich, minority/people, smart/slow,
表達(dá)建議,贊成,選擇……
? Suggest= advise, propose, recommend, advocate;
Be encourage. Promoted(發(fā)揚(yáng))
? Discourage
? Support, agree,
? Prefer=choose, would like, favor
? Disagree= despite, object, oppose to
? Abandon, discard, be restricted, supervised,
雅思寫作頻道編輯感謝您閱讀《中心句的構(gòu)建》一文.本文來自雅思作文網(wǎng)liuxue86.com《中心句的構(gòu)建》。
? I support AAA .
? AAA should be supported.
? It is supported for sb. to do …….
? Doing AAA should be supported/discouraged
? I prefer AAA to BBB …..
? I would rather choose AAA than BBB
中心句的理由句
? AAA/It/this practice/ this policy/ this choice /doing (applying, implementing, executing, conducting, committing (crime, suicide) ) AAA.
? + produces/offers/brings/creates
? / involves/incurs/poses
? + for…./to…..
? + EFFECT/IMPACT
課堂練習(xí)1:將下列中心句的素材改寫成標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的中心句句型:
【考題】Are cars doing more harm than good?
? 例題:
1. Cars are evils resulting from modernization, for they make people suffer rather than enjoy life.
è Cars should be discouraged because they are evils resulting from modernization which make people suffer rather than enjoy life.
2. Motor cars enable people to become more mobile.
è We should promote the usage of cars for the reason that Motor cars enable people to become more mobile.
Arguments FOR
Traffic accidents caused by cars not only bring death and injury, but also make people suffer mentally and psychologically.
Every year car owners have to pay vast sums to the exchequer: road tax, purchase tax, oil tax, etc. This is a big drain on their resources.
The roads are so often jammed with cars that ambulances and fire engines find it difficult to fulfill their duties. (提示:Cars should be done away with because……
Cars often produce air pollution and fill the cities with unbearable noise.
Cars are the cause of traffic accidents. All over the world thousands upon thousands of people are killed or injured every year.
Counter-arguments Against
Possessing a car gives one a much greater degree of mobility, enabling him to move around freely.
The owner of a car is not forced to rely on public transport and is, therefore, not compelled to work locally.
Buses are often crowded and slow, especially during rush-hour. If there are more cars, people can get around more easily.
With the popularization of cars, the suburbs will become more developed, and the downtown area will be less crowded.
思維公式:目標(biāo)對象 Sè被作用對象 Oè產(chǎn)生的效果
雅思寫作頻道編輯感謝您閱讀《中心句的構(gòu)建》一文.本文來自雅思作文網(wǎng)liuxue86.com《中心句的構(gòu)建》。
思路一:S和O都是非生命的抽象對象(culture,artistic project,national pride);O產(chǎn)生非常positive 或negative的后果,主要體現(xiàn)在動(dòng)詞上
基本句型一: S+V+O (或者被動(dòng) O+ be+ V-ed+ S)
帶有褒義的動(dòng)詞組合有:
l produces/offers/brings/creates+ 優(yōu)點(diǎn)
l involves/incurs/poses+ 壞處
①. Arts illustrate a country’s civilization.
②. Government money inevitably produces mediocre or even hockey art.
③. Beautiful paintings, fair-sounding operas and other works of art enhance the quality of life.
④. The image of a country as a modern, civilized and dynamic society can be enhanced by booming cultural development
思路二:O=生物,尤其是人類;O= 個(gè)體(individual),公民(citizens),公眾(public),居民(local residence/dwellers),消費(fèi)者(consumers)
基本句型二: S+V+O (或者被動(dòng) O+ be+ V-ed+ S)
(1) S正面作用于/或負(fù)面作用于個(gè)人,主要體現(xiàn)在特殊動(dòng)詞上
S+V.+sb. 或者 sb+V.+S 或者被動(dòng) S+be+ V-ed+sb.
⑤. Artistic interests are just shared by a small proportion of people.
(2) S正面作用于/或負(fù)面作用于個(gè)人,并同時(shí)引發(fā)(直接邏輯順承)被作用人O作出反應(yīng)
S+V+sb.+to do
⑥. Artistic education offers young generation opportunities to develop their cognitive skills.
⑦. Subsidies for musicians, artists, actors and drama companies will shift their focus on creating arts to pleasing that provides such subsidies.
范例:
①. Advertisements should be discouraged because too much commercials pose the threat/risks of over-consumption on consumers.
②. Advertisements should be opposed to because some of them contain misleading and damaging information which is inappropriate for children to watch.
③. English spreading is bad è culturally disadvantageous/damaging/
English spreading should be restricted because teenagers will be lead to neglect their native language.
④. English spreading is financially beneficial
Spreading English should be advocated because this practice brings more profits to companies.
⑤. English spreading is culturally favorable
English should be promoted all over the world because it enables people from different cultures to communicate with each other easily.
雅思寫作頻道編輯感謝您閱讀《中心句的構(gòu)建》一文.本文來自雅思作文網(wǎng)liuxue86.com《中心句的構(gòu)建》。
重點(diǎn)詞匯補(bǔ)充:
形容“正確和錯(cuò)誤,優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)'的詞群
POSITIVE:
Beneficial advantageous favorable rewarding appropriate desirable wise logical practical rational sound justifiable
NEGATIVE:
damaging= destructive detrimental harmful malignant evil ferocious
雅思寫作頻道編輯感謝您閱讀《中心句的構(gòu)建》一文.

