雅思考試:2011.12.3雅思大作文范文

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 以下是小編為大家所搜整理的有關(guān)雅思寫作謝老師原創(chuàng)的大作文范文,雅思考試首先是一個語言能力的考試,因此,在雅思大作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)里面,語言永遠(yuǎn)都是最重要的一項(xiàng)。以下是雅思大作文部分優(yōu)秀寫作實(shí)例,通過這些優(yōu)秀范文或是習(xí)作,考生可以借鑒里面的短語、句子或思路,給自己的寫作找一些思路和靈感。
    Today foods travel thousands of miles from farms to consumers. Why? Is it a positive or negative trend?
    2011年12月3日雅思大作文范文
    Food From Far Away
    Created by Jeenn Lee Hsieh
    謝振禮老師海外原創(chuàng)12月3日又接到急報(bào)雅思寫作考試真題,又是搞不清楚完整的英文原文。記憶中明白雙層題意:1. 何故千里食物運(yùn)輸?2. 這種趨勢有何得失利弊?謝振禮老師就針對真題寫【起承轉(zhuǎn)合】,希望網(wǎng)友分享與評論。
    結(jié)構(gòu)定位四段3-6-6-3,共裝配18句話自圓其說。中文思維不損英文寫作。漢文心圖大綱小筆記,吹牛要打簡單的草稿,以防跑題。
    起》食物遠(yuǎn)途運(yùn)輸,對經(jīng)濟(jì)有利,對環(huán)保有害。
    承》市場經(jīng)濟(jì)而言,好處多多,皆大歡喜。
    轉(zhuǎn)》自然環(huán)保而言,壞在燃料污染,地球升溫。
    合》好壞難以定論,消費(fèi)者來決定支持土產(chǎn)食物。
    The food travel debate is inevitably intertwined between economic interests and environmental concerns. While food is traveling because transport has become so cheap in a world of globalization, the manner by which food is being carried is not doing the natural environment any favors. The question is whether to meet human food demand or to reduce pollution?
    Linking food with transportation is big business. The ability to transport food cheaply has given rise to booming business regarding freight by land, sea and air. As the population continues to grow, so does the demand for food. Nowadays, all kinds of food may be carried long distances from producing regions to consumer markets in a matter of weeks, days or even hours. Such is a win-win trade practice, benefitting both sellers who can help create more valuable jobs and buyers who can help supply consumers with more food varieties at more affordable prices. At this point, commercial globalization seems to be positive at its best, justifying in part why foods need to travel thousands of miles.
    Of course, the negative side is about pollution. Despite the fact that buying and selling foods beyond borders may bolster economic relationships, the environmental impact of transportation is just too great to ignore. Big trucks, huge ships and giant airplanes that are used to carry foods use fossil fuels. Fuel burning has become so excessive that environmentalists behind a green cloak are calling on policy makers to effectively reduce pollution, or else. The warning is certainly not groundless, considering that pollution from transportation accounts for no small a part of those emissions which are believed to generate greenhouse effects that eventually cause the Earth's climate to change. Obviously, the longer the distance food travels, the fuel consumption of the transportation vessels will also be greater, and no doubt the more serious the global warming.
    In view of both the positive side and negative side about long-distance food transportation, there seems no easy answer to the question. Nevertheless, it is up to consumers to make choices, knowing where food comes from. Buying local produce not only supports local farmers but also provides dinner tables with the freshest and most nutrient-packed options.
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