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句子也是如此，我們提倡簡煉，但不是說都用簡單句。有人認(rèn)為在寫作考試中，采用簡單句、短句、容易掌握，不在會出錯(cuò)，因而也最保險(xiǎn)。這話沒有錯(cuò)，但簡單句用得太多，造成簡單句的堆徹實(shí)際上是語言技巧不成熟、不老練，甚至語言水平低下的表現(xiàn)。在閱卷人員看來，同樣的意思內(nèi)容，一個(gè)考生能夠運(yùn)用比較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)來表達(dá)，其語言水平當(dāng)然要比只會用簡單句來表達(dá)的考生的語言水平高出一截，就是有點(diǎn)錯(cuò)也不妨礙他比后者取得較高的分?jǐn)?shù)，因?yàn)樗碾y度系數(shù)要高。在某種意義上來說，在詞數(shù)相同的作文中，語言水平越高，語言技巧越熟練，句子的數(shù)目也就越少。這就意味著句子長了，句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜了。
當(dāng)然，我們反對過多地使用簡單句并不是鼓勵學(xué)生去刻意追求長句、復(fù)雜句。我們追求的是句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多變。一篇文章能根據(jù)表達(dá)的內(nèi)容使用不同的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，會產(chǎn)生較好的藝術(shù)效果。
例子1
TheCareerIPursue的主體段：
Avarietyofreasonshaveledmetochoosethisoccupationoverothermorelucrativeones.First,
teachingislearning.Tomakemylecturesmoreinteresting,Ihavetoreadmorebooks,explore
newknowledgeandgainabetterunderstandingoftheworld—theverythingIliketodoinmy
life.Second,teachingmeansfreedom.Asateacher,Icanfreelyexpressmyopinionsandexplain
theminmyownwaysincenobodywillinterferewithme.Finally,Iliketeachingbecauseit
offersacertainpeaceofmind.Nomorerushingtocatchingamorningbus,nomoreanxietyto
pleaseaboss,andnomoreworriesaboutbeinglaidoffbecauseyouaregettingold.
文中有4個(gè)詞的短句First,teachingislearning.也有27個(gè)詞的長句Tomakemylecturesmoreinteresting,I
havetoreadmorebooks,explorenewknowledgeandgainabetterunderstandingoftheworld—the
verythingIliketodoinmylife.有簡單句,也有復(fù)雜句Asateacher,Icanfreelyexpressmy
opinionsandexplaintheminmyownwaysincenobodywillinterferewithme;還有
同位語句，斷裂句，排比句，比較句等,因而文章讀起來節(jié)奏感強(qiáng)。所謂句子變化，主要是指句子的開頭要有變化，句子的結(jié)構(gòu)要有變化，句子的長度要有變化。不要連續(xù)使用幾個(gè)簡單句（如例9中的a）），要學(xué)會使用復(fù)雜句（如例9中的b））。
例2
a)Teenagersarepressuredbyschoolwork.Theyarealsoencouragedbytheirpeers.Under
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suchcircumstances,theyresorttosmoking.Butsometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.
b)Pressuredbyschoolworkandencouragedbytheirpeers,teenagersoftenresorttosmoking,
toughtheyfeelalittleguiltysometimes.
a)Collegestudentsnowareprimarilyinterestedingradesandeconomicsuccess.Theyare
expectedtocheatonexamsmorefrequently.Thisisnotlikethosewhograduated10years
ago.Theyareonlyconcernedwiththeirownpersonalfuture.Theyconsiderlittleproblems
ofsociety.Allthesearereportedbyarecentstudy.
b)Arecentstudyreportsthatcollegestudentsnowareprimarilyinterestedingradesand
economicsuccess,thattheyareexpectedtocheatonexamsmorefrequentlythanthosewho
graduated10yearsago,andthattheyaremoreconcernedwiththeirownpersonalfuture
thanwithproblemsofsociety.
不要總是以有生命的名詞和人稱代詞開頭(受漢語表達(dá)習(xí)慣的影響,不少考生部喜歡以I，People，We等開頭)，如例10中的a）。
例3
a)ManypeoplethinkbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.
b)Itiswidely(commonly)thought/believed/held/accepted)thatbirthcontrolisquite
necessaryinChina.
a)Moreandmorepeopleagree(realize/areaware)thatwomenshouldenjoyfull
equalitywithmen.
b)Thereisagrowingagreement(realization/awareness)thatwomenshouldenjoyfull
equalitywithmen.
a)ManyChinesepeoplehavegonetotheUnitedStatesinthepast15years.
b)Thepast15yearshavebroughtmanyChinesepeopletotheUnitedStates.
a)Wealmostforgetthisevent.
b)Thiseventisnowalmostfadingfromourmemory.
a)Studentsshouldcertainlymakecontinuousefforts.
b)Continuouseffortsonthepartofstudentsarecertainlyrequired.
a)Weeasilydrewtheconclusionthroughtheinvestigation.
b)Theinvestigationeasilyledustotheconclusion.
不要千篇一律地使用主動態(tài)(英語中被動結(jié)構(gòu)的使用頻率遠(yuǎn)高于漢語),如例11中的a）。
例4
a)WearemakinggreateffortstoimproveourEnglish.
b)GreateffortsarebeingmadetoimproveourEnglish.
a)Weknowverylittleaboutthenatureofhumanbeings.
b)Littleisknownaboutthenatureofhumanbeings.
a)Becauseofsocialdemands,thereappearmanyeveningschools.
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b)Manyeveningschoolsarecalledintoexistencebysocialdemands.
a)Wemaythinkmoreoftheelderlywholiveapartfromtheirchildren.
b)Morethoughtmaybegiventotheelderlywholiveapartfromtheirchildren.
不要總是用(如果),(因?yàn)?,(當(dāng))等口語意味較重的句子,如例12中的a);要注意使用書面語體的句子,如例12中的b).
例5
a)ifyoucomparebicycleswithcarscarefully,youwillfindbicyclesaresuperiorto
cars
b)carefulcomparisonofbicycleswithcarswillcarswillshowthesuperiorityofthe
formeroverthelatter.
a)Ifweonlyapplybookknowledge,wewillnotgetgoodresults.
b)Theapplicationofbookknowledgealonewon’tbringyougoodresults.
a)Ifwecanbetterunderstandthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowth,wewillhave
acorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.
b)Abetterunderstandingofthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowthisessentialto
acorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.
a)Whenawomanseesthatsheisgoingtobelaidoff,shebeginstoworryall
dayandnight.
b)Themereprospectoflay-offwouldsetawomentoworryalldayandnight.
a)Whenourteacherhadleft,theheateddiscussionthenended.
b)Thedepartureofourteacherbroughttheheateddiscussiontoanend.
a)Onlywhenwemakecontinuousefforts,canweseizeanopportunitywhenitoccurs.
b)Continuouseffortsmustbemadebeforeitispossibleforustoseizeanopportunity
whenitoccurs.
a)Becausewecannotapplybookknowledgetopractice,wecannothandlerealproblems
insociety.
b)Theinabilitytoapplybookknowledgetopracticepreventsusfromhandingreal
problemsinsociety.
a)Becausethedecisionrecognizestherightsofstudents,sotheyallwelcomeit.
b)Studentsallwelcomethedecisionwhichrecognizestheirrights.
不要對動詞過分依賴,如例13的a);要學(xué)會用名詞結(jié)構(gòu)來表達(dá)意思,如例13的b)
例6
a)Thestyleoflivinghasbecomemoreandmorepopularandacceptedbymoreand
moreyoungpeople.
b)Thestyleoflivinghasfounditsgrowingpopularityandacceptanceamongyoungpeople.
a)Itistimeforustoreviseeducationalsystemandthenprovideittooursociety.
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b)Itistimeforustoprovideoursocietyarevisededucationalsystem.
a)IfwearewatchingtoomuchTV,ourreadingabilitywillbeseriouslyaffected.
b)HeavyexposuretoTVwillexertannegativeeffectonourreadingability.
a)Ifwedon’trecognizetheseriousproblemofgrowingpopulation,wewillmakea
bigmistake.
b)Failuretorecognizetheseriousnessofgrowingpopulationw
預(yù)祝您雅思作文更上一層樓,感謝您閱讀《新東方老師談句型的靈活運(yùn)用》一文.
句子也是如此，我們提倡簡煉，但不是說都用簡單句。有人認(rèn)為在寫作考試中，采用簡單句、短句、容易掌握，不在會出錯(cuò)，因而也最保險(xiǎn)。這話沒有錯(cuò)，但簡單句用得太多，造成簡單句的堆徹實(shí)際上是語言技巧不成熟、不老練，甚至語言水平低下的表現(xiàn)。在閱卷人員看來，同樣的意思內(nèi)容，一個(gè)考生能夠運(yùn)用比較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)來表達(dá)，其語言水平當(dāng)然要比只會用簡單句來表達(dá)的考生的語言水平高出一截，就是有點(diǎn)錯(cuò)也不妨礙他比后者取得較高的分?jǐn)?shù)，因?yàn)樗碾y度系數(shù)要高。在某種意義上來說，在詞數(shù)相同的作文中，語言水平越高，語言技巧越熟練，句子的數(shù)目也就越少。這就意味著句子長了，句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜了。
當(dāng)然，我們反對過多地使用簡單句并不是鼓勵學(xué)生去刻意追求長句、復(fù)雜句。我們追求的是句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多變。一篇文章能根據(jù)表達(dá)的內(nèi)容使用不同的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，會產(chǎn)生較好的藝術(shù)效果。
例子1
TheCareerIPursue的主體段：
Avarietyofreasonshaveledmetochoosethisoccupationoverothermorelucrativeones.First,
teachingislearning.Tomakemylecturesmoreinteresting,Ihavetoreadmorebooks,explore
newknowledgeandgainabetterunderstandingoftheworld—theverythingIliketodoinmy
life.Second,teachingmeansfreedom.Asateacher,Icanfreelyexpressmyopinionsandexplain
theminmyownwaysincenobodywillinterferewithme.Finally,Iliketeachingbecauseit
offersacertainpeaceofmind.Nomorerushingtocatchingamorningbus,nomoreanxietyto
pleaseaboss,andnomoreworriesaboutbeinglaidoffbecauseyouaregettingold.
文中有4個(gè)詞的短句First,teachingislearning.也有27個(gè)詞的長句Tomakemylecturesmoreinteresting,I
havetoreadmorebooks,explorenewknowledgeandgainabetterunderstandingoftheworld—the
verythingIliketodoinmylife.有簡單句,也有復(fù)雜句Asateacher,Icanfreelyexpressmy
opinionsandexplaintheminmyownwaysincenobodywillinterferewithme;還有
同位語句，斷裂句，排比句，比較句等,因而文章讀起來節(jié)奏感強(qiáng)。所謂句子變化，主要是指句子的開頭要有變化，句子的結(jié)構(gòu)要有變化，句子的長度要有變化。不要連續(xù)使用幾個(gè)簡單句（如例9中的a）），要學(xué)會使用復(fù)雜句（如例9中的b））。
例2
a)Teenagersarepressuredbyschoolwork.Theyarealsoencouragedbytheirpeers.Under
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suchcircumstances,theyresorttosmoking.Butsometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.
b)Pressuredbyschoolworkandencouragedbytheirpeers,teenagersoftenresorttosmoking,
toughtheyfeelalittleguiltysometimes.
a)Collegestudentsnowareprimarilyinterestedingradesandeconomicsuccess.Theyare
expectedtocheatonexamsmorefrequently.Thisisnotlikethosewhograduated10years
ago.Theyareonlyconcernedwiththeirownpersonalfuture.Theyconsiderlittleproblems
ofsociety.Allthesearereportedbyarecentstudy.
b)Arecentstudyreportsthatcollegestudentsnowareprimarilyinterestedingradesand
economicsuccess,thattheyareexpectedtocheatonexamsmorefrequentlythanthosewho
graduated10yearsago,andthattheyaremoreconcernedwiththeirownpersonalfuture
thanwithproblemsofsociety.
不要總是以有生命的名詞和人稱代詞開頭(受漢語表達(dá)習(xí)慣的影響,不少考生部喜歡以I，People，We等開頭)，如例10中的a）。
例3
a)ManypeoplethinkbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.
b)Itiswidely(commonly)thought/believed/held/accepted)thatbirthcontrolisquite
necessaryinChina.
a)Moreandmorepeopleagree(realize/areaware)thatwomenshouldenjoyfull
equalitywithmen.
b)Thereisagrowingagreement(realization/awareness)thatwomenshouldenjoyfull
equalitywithmen.
a)ManyChinesepeoplehavegonetotheUnitedStatesinthepast15years.
b)Thepast15yearshavebroughtmanyChinesepeopletotheUnitedStates.
a)Wealmostforgetthisevent.
b)Thiseventisnowalmostfadingfromourmemory.
a)Studentsshouldcertainlymakecontinuousefforts.
b)Continuouseffortsonthepartofstudentsarecertainlyrequired.
a)Weeasilydrewtheconclusionthroughtheinvestigation.
b)Theinvestigationeasilyledustotheconclusion.
不要千篇一律地使用主動態(tài)(英語中被動結(jié)構(gòu)的使用頻率遠(yuǎn)高于漢語),如例11中的a）。
例4
a)WearemakinggreateffortstoimproveourEnglish.
b)GreateffortsarebeingmadetoimproveourEnglish.
a)Weknowverylittleaboutthenatureofhumanbeings.
b)Littleisknownaboutthenatureofhumanbeings.
a)Becauseofsocialdemands,thereappearmanyeveningschools.
預(yù)祝您雅思作文更上一層樓,感謝您閱讀《新東方老師談句型的靈活運(yùn)用》一文.本文來自雅思作文網(wǎng)liuxue86.com《新東方老師談句型的靈活運(yùn)用》。
b)Manyeveningschoolsarecalledintoexistencebysocialdemands.
a)Wemaythinkmoreoftheelderlywholiveapartfromtheirchildren.
b)Morethoughtmaybegiventotheelderlywholiveapartfromtheirchildren.
不要總是用(如果),(因?yàn)?,(當(dāng))等口語意味較重的句子,如例12中的a);要注意使用書面語體的句子,如例12中的b).
例5
a)ifyoucomparebicycleswithcarscarefully,youwillfindbicyclesaresuperiorto
cars
b)carefulcomparisonofbicycleswithcarswillcarswillshowthesuperiorityofthe
formeroverthelatter.
a)Ifweonlyapplybookknowledge,wewillnotgetgoodresults.
b)Theapplicationofbookknowledgealonewon’tbringyougoodresults.
a)Ifwecanbetterunderstandthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowth,wewillhave
acorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.
b)Abetterunderstandingofthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowthisessentialto
acorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.
a)Whenawomanseesthatsheisgoingtobelaidoff,shebeginstoworryall
dayandnight.
b)Themereprospectoflay-offwouldsetawomentoworryalldayandnight.
a)Whenourteacherhadleft,theheateddiscussionthenended.
b)Thedepartureofourteacherbroughttheheateddiscussiontoanend.
a)Onlywhenwemakecontinuousefforts,canweseizeanopportunitywhenitoccurs.
b)Continuouseffortsmustbemadebeforeitispossibleforustoseizeanopportunity
whenitoccurs.
a)Becausewecannotapplybookknowledgetopractice,wecannothandlerealproblems
insociety.
b)Theinabilitytoapplybookknowledgetopracticepreventsusfromhandingreal
problemsinsociety.
a)Becausethedecisionrecognizestherightsofstudents,sotheyallwelcomeit.
b)Studentsallwelcomethedecisionwhichrecognizestheirrights.
不要對動詞過分依賴,如例13的a);要學(xué)會用名詞結(jié)構(gòu)來表達(dá)意思,如例13的b)
例6
a)Thestyleoflivinghasbecomemoreandmorepopularandacceptedbymoreand
moreyoungpeople.
b)Thestyleoflivinghasfounditsgrowingpopularityandacceptanceamongyoungpeople.
a)Itistimeforustoreviseeducationalsystemandthenprovideittooursociety.
預(yù)祝您雅思作文更上一層樓,感謝您閱讀《新東方老師談句型的靈活運(yùn)用》一文.本文來自雅思作文網(wǎng)liuxue86.com《新東方老師談句型的靈活運(yùn)用》。
b)Itistimeforustoprovideoursocietyarevisededucationalsystem.
a)IfwearewatchingtoomuchTV,ourreadingabilitywillbeseriouslyaffected.
b)HeavyexposuretoTVwillexertannegativeeffectonourreadingability.
a)Ifwedon’trecognizetheseriousproblemofgrowingpopulation,wewillmakea
bigmistake.
b)Failuretorecognizetheseriousnessofgrowingpopulationw
預(yù)祝您雅思作文更上一層樓,感謝您閱讀《新東方老師談句型的靈活運(yùn)用》一文.