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句子也是如此，我們提倡簡煉，但不是說都用簡單句。有人認為在寫作考試中，采用簡單句、短句、容易掌握，不在會出錯，因而也最保險。這話沒有錯，但簡單句用得太多，造成簡單句的堆徹實際上是語言技巧不成熟、不老練，甚至語言水平低下的表現(xiàn)。在閱卷人員看來，同樣的意思內容，一個考生能夠運用比較復雜的句子結構來表達，其語言水平當然要比只會用簡單句來表達的考生的語言水平高出一截，就是有點錯也不妨礙他比后者取得較高的分數，因為他的難度系數要高。在某種意義上來說，在詞數相同的作文中，語言水平越高，語言技巧越熟練，句子的數目也就越少。這就意味著句子長了，句子結構復雜了。
當然，我們反對過多地使用簡單句并不是鼓勵學生去刻意追求長句、復雜句。我們追求的是句子結構的多變。一篇文章能根據表達的內容使用不同的句子結構，會產生較好的藝術效果。
例子1
TheCareerIPursue的主體段：
Avarietyofreasonshaveledmetochoosethisoccupationoverothermorelucrativeones.First,
teachingislearning.Tomakemylecturesmoreinteresting,Ihavetoreadmorebooks,explore
newknowledgeandgainabetterunderstandingoftheworld—theverythingIliketodoinmy
life.Second,teachingmeansfreedom.Asateacher,Icanfreelyexpressmyopinionsandexplain
theminmyownwaysincenobodywillinterferewithme.Finally,Iliketeachingbecauseit
offersacertainpeaceofmind.Nomorerushingtocatchingamorningbus,nomoreanxietyto
pleaseaboss,andnomoreworriesaboutbeinglaidoffbecauseyouaregettingold.
文中有4個詞的短句First,teachingislearning.也有27個詞的長句Tomakemylecturesmoreinteresting,I
havetoreadmorebooks,explorenewknowledgeandgainabetterunderstandingoftheworld—the
verythingIliketodoinmylife.有簡單句,也有復雜句Asateacher,Icanfreelyexpressmy
opinionsandexplaintheminmyownwaysincenobodywillinterferewithme;還有
同位語句，斷裂句，排比句，比較句等,因而文章讀起來節(jié)奏感強。所謂句子變化，主要是指句子的開頭要有變化，句子的結構要有變化，句子的長度要有變化。不要連續(xù)使用幾個簡單句（如例9中的a）），要學會使用復雜句（如例9中的b））。
例2
a)Teenagersarepressuredbyschoolwork.Theyarealsoencouragedbytheirpeers.Under
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suchcircumstances,theyresorttosmoking.Butsometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.
b)Pressuredbyschoolworkandencouragedbytheirpeers,teenagersoftenresorttosmoking,
toughtheyfeelalittleguiltysometimes.
a)Collegestudentsnowareprimarilyinterestedingradesandeconomicsuccess.Theyare
expectedtocheatonexamsmorefrequently.Thisisnotlikethosewhograduated10years
ago.Theyareonlyconcernedwiththeirownpersonalfuture.Theyconsiderlittleproblems
ofsociety.Allthesearereportedbyarecentstudy.
b)Arecentstudyreportsthatcollegestudentsnowareprimarilyinterestedingradesand
economicsuccess,thattheyareexpectedtocheatonexamsmorefrequentlythanthosewho
graduated10yearsago,andthattheyaremoreconcernedwiththeirownpersonalfuture
thanwithproblemsofsociety.
不要總是以有生命的名詞和人稱代詞開頭(受漢語表達習慣的影響,不少考生部喜歡以I，People，We等開頭)，如例10中的a）。
例3
a)ManypeoplethinkbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.
b)Itiswidely(commonly)thought/believed/held/accepted)thatbirthcontrolisquite
necessaryinChina.
a)Moreandmorepeopleagree(realize/areaware)thatwomenshouldenjoyfull
equalitywithmen.
b)Thereisagrowingagreement(realization/awareness)thatwomenshouldenjoyfull
equalitywithmen.
a)ManyChinesepeoplehavegonetotheUnitedStatesinthepast15years.
b)Thepast15yearshavebroughtmanyChinesepeopletotheUnitedStates.
a)Wealmostforgetthisevent.
b)Thiseventisnowalmostfadingfromourmemory.
a)Studentsshouldcertainlymakecontinuousefforts.
b)Continuouseffortsonthepartofstudentsarecertainlyrequired.
a)Weeasilydrewtheconclusionthroughtheinvestigation.
b)Theinvestigationeasilyledustotheconclusion.
不要千篇一律地使用主動態(tài)(英語中被動結構的使用頻率遠高于漢語),如例11中的a）。
例4
a)WearemakinggreateffortstoimproveourEnglish.
b)GreateffortsarebeingmadetoimproveourEnglish.
a)Weknowverylittleaboutthenatureofhumanbeings.
b)Littleisknownaboutthenatureofhumanbeings.
a)Becauseofsocialdemands,thereappearmanyeveningschools.
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b)Manyeveningschoolsarecalledintoexistencebysocialdemands.
a)Wemaythinkmoreoftheelderlywholiveapartfromtheirchildren.
b)Morethoughtmaybegiventotheelderlywholiveapartfromtheirchildren.
不要總是用(如果),(因為),(當)等口語意味較重的句子,如例12中的a);要注意使用書面語體的句子,如例12中的b).
例5
a)ifyoucomparebicycleswithcarscarefully,youwillfindbicyclesaresuperiorto
cars
b)carefulcomparisonofbicycleswithcarswillcarswillshowthesuperiorityofthe
formeroverthelatter.
a)Ifweonlyapplybookknowledge,wewillnotgetgoodresults.
b)Theapplicationofbookknowledgealonewon’tbringyougoodresults.
a)Ifwecanbetterunderstandthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowth,wewillhave
acorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.
b)Abetterunderstandingofthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowthisessentialto
acorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.
a)Whenawomanseesthatsheisgoingtobelaidoff,shebeginstoworryall
dayandnight.
b)Themereprospectoflay-offwouldsetawomentoworryalldayandnight.
a)Whenourteacherhadleft,theheateddiscussionthenended.
b)Thedepartureofourteacherbroughttheheateddiscussiontoanend.
a)Onlywhenwemakecontinuousefforts,canweseizeanopportunitywhenitoccurs.
b)Continuouseffortsmustbemadebeforeitispossibleforustoseizeanopportunity
whenitoccurs.
a)Becausewecannotapplybookknowledgetopractice,wecannothandlerealproblems
insociety.
b)Theinabilitytoapplybookknowledgetopracticepreventsusfromhandingreal
problemsinsociety.
a)Becausethedecisionrecognizestherightsofstudents,sotheyallwelcomeit.
b)Studentsallwelcomethedecisionwhichrecognizestheirrights.
不要對動詞過分依賴,如例13的a);要學會用名詞結構來表達意思,如例13的b)
例6
a)Thestyleoflivinghasbecomemoreandmorepopularandacceptedbymoreand
moreyoungpeople.
b)Thestyleoflivinghasfounditsgrowingpopularityandacceptanceamongyoungpeople.
a)Itistimeforustoreviseeducationalsystemandthenprovideittooursociety.
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b)Itistimeforustoprovideoursocietyarevisededucationalsystem.
a)IfwearewatchingtoomuchTV,ourreadingabilitywillbeseriouslyaffected.
b)HeavyexposuretoTVwillexertannegativeeffectonourreadingability.
a)Ifwedon’trecognizetheseriousproblemofgrowingpopulation,wewillmakea
bigmistake.
b)Failuretorecognizetheseriousnessofgrowingpopulationw
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句子也是如此，我們提倡簡煉，但不是說都用簡單句。有人認為在寫作考試中，采用簡單句、短句、容易掌握，不在會出錯，因而也最保險。這話沒有錯，但簡單句用得太多，造成簡單句的堆徹實際上是語言技巧不成熟、不老練，甚至語言水平低下的表現(xiàn)。在閱卷人員看來，同樣的意思內容，一個考生能夠運用比較復雜的句子結構來表達，其語言水平當然要比只會用簡單句來表達的考生的語言水平高出一截，就是有點錯也不妨礙他比后者取得較高的分數，因為他的難度系數要高。在某種意義上來說，在詞數相同的作文中，語言水平越高，語言技巧越熟練，句子的數目也就越少。這就意味著句子長了，句子結構復雜了。
當然，我們反對過多地使用簡單句并不是鼓勵學生去刻意追求長句、復雜句。我們追求的是句子結構的多變。一篇文章能根據表達的內容使用不同的句子結構，會產生較好的藝術效果。
例子1
TheCareerIPursue的主體段：
Avarietyofreasonshaveledmetochoosethisoccupationoverothermorelucrativeones.First,
teachingislearning.Tomakemylecturesmoreinteresting,Ihavetoreadmorebooks,explore
newknowledgeandgainabetterunderstandingoftheworld—theverythingIliketodoinmy
life.Second,teachingmeansfreedom.Asateacher,Icanfreelyexpressmyopinionsandexplain
theminmyownwaysincenobodywillinterferewithme.Finally,Iliketeachingbecauseit
offersacertainpeaceofmind.Nomorerushingtocatchingamorningbus,nomoreanxietyto
pleaseaboss,andnomoreworriesaboutbeinglaidoffbecauseyouaregettingold.
文中有4個詞的短句First,teachingislearning.也有27個詞的長句Tomakemylecturesmoreinteresting,I
havetoreadmorebooks,explorenewknowledgeandgainabetterunderstandingoftheworld—the
verythingIliketodoinmylife.有簡單句,也有復雜句Asateacher,Icanfreelyexpressmy
opinionsandexplaintheminmyownwaysincenobodywillinterferewithme;還有
同位語句，斷裂句，排比句，比較句等,因而文章讀起來節(jié)奏感強。所謂句子變化，主要是指句子的開頭要有變化，句子的結構要有變化，句子的長度要有變化。不要連續(xù)使用幾個簡單句（如例9中的a）），要學會使用復雜句（如例9中的b））。
例2
a)Teenagersarepressuredbyschoolwork.Theyarealsoencouragedbytheirpeers.Under
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suchcircumstances,theyresorttosmoking.Butsometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.
b)Pressuredbyschoolworkandencouragedbytheirpeers,teenagersoftenresorttosmoking,
toughtheyfeelalittleguiltysometimes.
a)Collegestudentsnowareprimarilyinterestedingradesandeconomicsuccess.Theyare
expectedtocheatonexamsmorefrequently.Thisisnotlikethosewhograduated10years
ago.Theyareonlyconcernedwiththeirownpersonalfuture.Theyconsiderlittleproblems
ofsociety.Allthesearereportedbyarecentstudy.
b)Arecentstudyreportsthatcollegestudentsnowareprimarilyinterestedingradesand
economicsuccess,thattheyareexpectedtocheatonexamsmorefrequentlythanthosewho
graduated10yearsago,andthattheyaremoreconcernedwiththeirownpersonalfuture
thanwithproblemsofsociety.
不要總是以有生命的名詞和人稱代詞開頭(受漢語表達習慣的影響,不少考生部喜歡以I，People，We等開頭)，如例10中的a）。
例3
a)ManypeoplethinkbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.
b)Itiswidely(commonly)thought/believed/held/accepted)thatbirthcontrolisquite
necessaryinChina.
a)Moreandmorepeopleagree(realize/areaware)thatwomenshouldenjoyfull
equalitywithmen.
b)Thereisagrowingagreement(realization/awareness)thatwomenshouldenjoyfull
equalitywithmen.
a)ManyChinesepeoplehavegonetotheUnitedStatesinthepast15years.
b)Thepast15yearshavebroughtmanyChinesepeopletotheUnitedStates.
a)Wealmostforgetthisevent.
b)Thiseventisnowalmostfadingfromourmemory.
a)Studentsshouldcertainlymakecontinuousefforts.
b)Continuouseffortsonthepartofstudentsarecertainlyrequired.
a)Weeasilydrewtheconclusionthroughtheinvestigation.
b)Theinvestigationeasilyledustotheconclusion.
不要千篇一律地使用主動態(tài)(英語中被動結構的使用頻率遠高于漢語),如例11中的a）。
例4
a)WearemakinggreateffortstoimproveourEnglish.
b)GreateffortsarebeingmadetoimproveourEnglish.
a)Weknowverylittleaboutthenatureofhumanbeings.
b)Littleisknownaboutthenatureofhumanbeings.
a)Becauseofsocialdemands,thereappearmanyeveningschools.
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b)Manyeveningschoolsarecalledintoexistencebysocialdemands.
a)Wemaythinkmoreoftheelderlywholiveapartfromtheirchildren.
b)Morethoughtmaybegiventotheelderlywholiveapartfromtheirchildren.
不要總是用(如果),(因為),(當)等口語意味較重的句子,如例12中的a);要注意使用書面語體的句子,如例12中的b).
例5
a)ifyoucomparebicycleswithcarscarefully,youwillfindbicyclesaresuperiorto
cars
b)carefulcomparisonofbicycleswithcarswillcarswillshowthesuperiorityofthe
formeroverthelatter.
a)Ifweonlyapplybookknowledge,wewillnotgetgoodresults.
b)Theapplicationofbookknowledgealonewon’tbringyougoodresults.
a)Ifwecanbetterunderstandthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowth,wewillhave
acorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.
b)Abetterunderstandingofthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowthisessentialto
acorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.
a)Whenawomanseesthatsheisgoingtobelaidoff,shebeginstoworryall
dayandnight.
b)Themereprospectoflay-offwouldsetawomentoworryalldayandnight.
a)Whenourteacherhadleft,theheateddiscussionthenended.
b)Thedepartureofourteacherbroughttheheateddiscussiontoanend.
a)Onlywhenwemakecontinuousefforts,canweseizeanopportunitywhenitoccurs.
b)Continuouseffortsmustbemadebeforeitispossibleforustoseizeanopportunity
whenitoccurs.
a)Becausewecannotapplybookknowledgetopractice,wecannothandlerealproblems
insociety.
b)Theinabilitytoapplybookknowledgetopracticepreventsusfromhandingreal
problemsinsociety.
a)Becausethedecisionrecognizestherightsofstudents,sotheyallwelcomeit.
b)Studentsallwelcomethedecisionwhichrecognizestheirrights.
不要對動詞過分依賴,如例13的a);要學會用名詞結構來表達意思,如例13的b)
例6
a)Thestyleoflivinghasbecomemoreandmorepopularandacceptedbymoreand
moreyoungpeople.
b)Thestyleoflivinghasfounditsgrowingpopularityandacceptanceamongyoungpeople.
a)Itistimeforustoreviseeducationalsystemandthenprovideittooursociety.
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b)Itistimeforustoprovideoursocietyarevisededucationalsystem.
a)IfwearewatchingtoomuchTV,ourreadingabilitywillbeseriouslyaffected.
b)HeavyexposuretoTVwillexertannegativeeffectonourreadingability.
a)Ifwedon’trecognizetheseriousproblemofgrowingpopulation,wewillmakea
bigmistake.
b)Failuretorecognizetheseriousnessofgrowingpopulationw
預祝您雅思作文更上一層樓,感謝您閱讀《新東方老師談句型的靈活運用》一文.