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2021年考研英語：備考作文的拓展解析
兩篇看起來大同小異的大作文，為什么一篇老師打了19分，而另一篇只給了15分?
知道這四分之差意味著什么?意味著閱讀錯(cuò)了兩道題(2道題*2分)，意味著完型錯(cuò)了八道題(8道題*0.5分)
而復(fù)習(xí)這些題你又需要花費(fèi)多少時(shí)間才能提高這個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)呢?
每一分都很重要，聽專家的，快速提升主觀題成績，讓成功來的更容易些。
考研英語全程班或聯(lián)報(bào)班的學(xué)員都有機(jī)會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)新東方名師姜麗蓉考前高分必讀班，包括作文班、翻譯班。詳解考研英語主觀題答題模式，讓你迅速攻克主觀題，提高成績。
下面是本次作文批改的題目以及考研教研員對學(xué)員的作文批改范例，是從學(xué)員作文中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的1、詞匯錯(cuò)誤2、語法錯(cuò)誤3、句式錯(cuò)誤4、主題立意5、篇章結(jié)構(gòu) 等方面進(jìn)行的批改。
2008年考研英語寫作真題
Directions:
Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments。
第二篇：
Directions:
You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your rommate always has friends visiting。
Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons。
老師給的批改如下：
Collaboration
Collaboration is of the utmost importance to be human beings.Everybody not only needs chacrect [e1] individual character ,but also demands collaboration 。
As is described in the picture , Though two man who both lost legs that right and left, [e2] they are running to cooperate [e3] each other. Collaboration help[e4] them step out of difficulties. Cooperation is used in our lifves[e5] in generrally .Such as: [e6] business ’[e7] team work ,study partner ,interest group,discution[e8] group, band and so on.They are[e9] all club together。
Help[e10] each other can improve efficiency . For istance[e11] , team work is used in vast majority factorty[e12] in moden life.We always to[e13] see that a process of sweater ,one group disposal[e14] wool, an other team make string, other peoples[e15] change the string to sweater 。(此句錯(cuò)誤較多，沒有掌握一個(gè)。。一個(gè)。。另一個(gè)的表達(dá)法，應(yīng)為one …another…another)A sweater is made by some people or groups not only (by)one. We is bring around the tabel by foreman, (不理解你這句話的意思)dishes are appeared on table by waiter or waitress , cate is cooked by kitchener, cash is pay[e16] on counter in restaurant.we finished have [e17] dinner in their help[e18] each other .So many things of result[e19] need effort of no-one[e20] .Collaboration is important in life.
To sum up,we should keep collaboration in general .It can help us filish[e21] many things that we can not do it by one.I was convinced cooperation can improve work productiveness in meliorate[e22] life, Help our society will be better palce for us to live in。(此句有誤，應(yīng)改為helping our society to be better place for us to live in。)
點(diǎn)評：你將文章分為了四段，首段對合作進(jìn)行了闡述，在第二段時(shí)才對漫畫進(jìn)行描述，一般來說，這種寫法也是沒有大問題的。但為了保險(xiǎn)起見，我們通常將文章分為三段首中尾最好，首先將漫畫的內(nèi)容描述清楚，然后討論漫畫中體現(xiàn)的合作精神，最后聯(lián)系實(shí)際進(jìn)一步深化主題。
你這篇文章中出現(xiàn)了較多的語法錯(cuò)誤，請你在接下來的寫作中引起高度重視，因?yàn)橄駟螐?fù)數(shù)這種錯(cuò)誤在閱卷老師看來就是你英語能力差的體現(xiàn)，是不可饒恕的，一旦發(fā)現(xiàn)容易給老師留下壞的印象，分?jǐn)?shù)會(huì)受影響。
你對漫畫深層次含義的討論還算清楚，舉了實(shí)例，但語言偏于貧乏，只能算是勉強(qiáng)交差，不能給閱卷老師眼前一亮的好印象，因?yàn)橥ㄆ聛砦覜]有看到主題句的亮點(diǎn)，沒有句式的變化。我們在文章中最好能有一到兩句長句，能使我們的文章更加生動(dòng)、鮮活。