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2021考研英語(yǔ)：小作文寫作的精析指導(dǎo)
一、投訴信、抱怨信
You bought a vacuum cleaner from a reputable electrical shop the other week but found that there were some problems with it. Write a letter to the director of the sales department in the shop to tell：
1）What the problems with vacuum cleaner are，
2）the trouble it caused with you，
3）What you would like them to do about it
Dear Director of the Sales Department, | 稱呼：寫作關(guān)系不親密的個(gè)人 |
| I am Li Ming, an ordinary consumer of your shop. I venture to write you a letter about the problems caused by the Vacuum Cleaner of Model XYZ I bought from your shop. | 第一句是寫信人自我介紹。 第二句表明寫信緣由：投訴 (積累： I venture to do …) |
| The focus of the complaint is the poor quality of the vacuum. For one thing, the vacuum doesn’t work effectively to pick up dirt on either bare floor or carpets. For another, the power shuts off by itself when the vacuum has been running for several minutes and then comes back after 30 to 60 seconds. Honestly speaking, I am not making fuss over this purchase. But, it is not convenient for me to do cleaning work with it and when I went back to the department of home appliance, I was told that I couldn’t exchange because the vacuum was on sale. | 第一句總括投訴的核心內(nèi)容。 （主系表結(jié)構(gòu)） 第二、三句分述了所購(gòu)吸塵器的問題。從兩方面細(xì)化了投訴內(nèi)容。 （積累：For one thing…; for anther…. Either… or… Shut off 第四、五句客觀了陳述了投訴的原因。 （積累：honestly speaking; make fuss over; It is not convenient for … to do ... ） |
| All in all, there is still much room for improvement. Before I take any further action, I do hope you can provide me a new vacuum or refund my money. Thank you for your time and kind consideration. | 第一、二句提出寫信人的批評(píng)，表達(dá)本人的愿望，并敦促對(duì)方采取行動(dòng)。 (積累：all in all; Take action; Provide sb. Sth.) 信件的常用結(jié)尾。 |
| Yours sincerely, Li Ming | 信件結(jié)尾和署名 |
二、感謝信
After being involved in an accident， you were looked after by another person. Write a special letter to express your thanks
Dear Xiaoqiang, | 稱呼：寫作關(guān)系親密的個(gè)人 |
| I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude. I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi. | 第一句表明寫作目的，是本文的中心句。 第二句講述感謝信的由來，即交代寫作背景。 (積累： refer to; the other day; knock off) |
If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid, I fear that the consequences might have been much more serious. Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome. | 第一句是本段主題句。從寫信人主觀上表述了深刻的感謝。 （積累：與過去事實(shí)相反的虛擬語(yǔ)氣had+過去分詞 ，would/could/might/should +have +過去分詞） 第二句通過旁觀者的評(píng)論，客觀表述了收信人給寫信人帶來的積極影響。 （積累：強(qiáng)調(diào)句式It is…that..; lead to ） |
| Although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach. If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place. | 第一句是對(duì)收信人的反面映襯，即背景交代。 (積累：people in mounting numbers; practice what they preach) 第二句是本段的主旨句。通過自己的期望，再一次高度贊揚(yáng)了收信人。 （積累：與現(xiàn)在事實(shí)相反的虛擬語(yǔ)氣：動(dòng)詞過去式，would/could/might/should+動(dòng)詞原形） |
| Yours sincerely, Li Ming | 信件結(jié)尾和署名 |