留學申請必須要出示完整的申請材料,大家要準備的材料中,要展示出自己的能力和優(yōu)勢,從而更好的完成自己的申請。今天就由出國留學網的小編帶來新西蘭留學申請書寫作要求及范文。
寫作內容
1、主題相關
留學文書寫作所選的材料必須是與你留學的動機、選擇的專業(yè)領域或者選擇的學校等有重要關聯。即為什么選擇這個專業(yè),為什么選擇這個學校,哪些事情讓你產生留學的想法,哪些事情促使你選擇這個專業(yè)領域進行深造等,這些要盡量在文書中間接體現出來。
2、個性化
在選擇留學文書材料的時候,要思考一個問題:你是一個什么樣的人,你具備什么性格特征和品質,想想那些能體現你的這些特征的生活經歷,哪些是與眾不同的,而不是蕓蕓眾生的事例,Make you difference on and off campus!在篩選時務必選擇這些能體現出自己個性的材料,當然,所選的事例不一定非要具備震撼世界的公益性,有很大的影響力,不是每個人都有機會做這些事情的。所選的事例可以很小,但是對你或對他人卻很有意義。
3、突出重點,主線明確
在出國留學文書寫作時,清楚有力地表達你的求學動機,和學習學術能力。在國內有一種錯誤的觀點,PS要“煽情”才能有效果。有的留學申請人就通過描述不相干活動展示“獨特”的性格,或是學術上感覺沒有什么可寫的,就寫自己考試時克服了重重困難,如何考取了好成績!這是根本不著邊際的寫法,會讓新西蘭留學學校的錄取者發(fā)掘不到你的特點。要符合去新西蘭留學條件,就要知道,PS是要在很短的時間內,清楚地用幾百字告訴招生教授你是入學(獎學金)非常合格的人選,盲目“煽情”完全不需要。
4、符合西方思維習慣
文化的差異導致東西方在什么是美德和優(yōu)缺點的看法上不盡相同。在以往的經歷中發(fā)現,有些留學申請人表達出來的“優(yōu)點”實際上在西方看來是缺點,反映申請人對學術問題毫無主見;而有些申請人認為不好的東西恰恰是西方人所欣賞的,認為這些能表現出申請人布滿個性。所以申請人要了解如何以西方的思維方式取舍你的申請素材,把有益的亮點有選擇性地挑選出來,在適當地篇幅里展示出來。
5、適當表達學術深度
這個被排序到最后是有原因的。例如商科申請的特殊性,如果申請者盲目地闡述或評價一些理論觀點,而這與很多錄取委員會中來自該領域的資深老手并不在一個認識層面上,很有可能弄巧成拙或者達不到自己預期的目標。所以建議申請者謹慎使用。
范文
I am a student, graduated from BaoYang middle school, Nanning, GuangXi autonomous region, in 2006. I am still studying in high school now, because I was not enrolled by the ideal university last year. Recently, I have a dream to study abroad. Then I search online and find that it is more convenient and suitable for me to go to New Zealand for study.
First, New Zealand is a multicultural country, which has the most advanced education in the world. Second, the tuition is lower than other countries’, which I think is mo
re reasonable for me. Finally, the climate of New Zealand is similar with the climate of the South of China. Considering above reasons, I told my parents my plan on going to New Zealand for study, and my parent agreed with me.
As a girl, I like preschool education since I was young. Nowadays, Chinese parents, who want their children to get better education, pay more attention to preschool education. If I study specialized curriculums on preschool education, I will go back China and work hard on preschool education after leaving college.
My plan is as follows: first, I plan to study English in language institute for about a half year in New Zealand. Then, I will study specialized curriculums on preschool education.
I believe I have the ability of study abroad, because I have finished all high school curriculums. Besides, my parents both have job and have rich income, so they will support me to finish my study. After finishing my study, I will return to my homeland and work on preschool education, so as to realize my life value.

