想必很多同學(xué)對(duì)個(gè)人陳述還不夠了解,但是去美國留學(xué)是一定需要準(zhǔn)備個(gè)人陳述的,是很重要的申請(qǐng)材料哦。今天出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)小編為大家整理了美國留學(xué)個(gè)人陳述書寫指南的相關(guān)內(nèi)容,趕緊來看看吧。
美國留學(xué)個(gè)人陳述要寫哪些內(nèi)容?
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文書的最開始當(dāng)然是要交代自己的背景啦!
要讓admission看一眼就知道你遞交申請(qǐng)的原因是啥,簡單直接的表達(dá)會(huì)讓你的application在多如牛毛的personal statement里成為一股清流,還省去大學(xué)招生辦不少過濾廢話的時(shí)間!
短短的一段或兩段里,小伙伴們應(yīng)重點(diǎn)解決以下兩個(gè)問題:
為什么申請(qǐng)這個(gè)科系:何時(shí)開始對(duì)這個(gè)科目感興趣?你是否有逐漸加深對(duì)這個(gè)科目的了解?
你如何保持對(duì)這個(gè)科目的興趣?你對(duì)這個(gè)科目的興趣是否影響了你的未來甚至職業(yè)規(guī)劃?你為什么想要在大學(xué)階段選修這門科目?為什么選擇來美國求學(xué):過去有無接觸英式教育?如有,何時(shí)開始、為什么、是否對(duì)你的大學(xué)申請(qǐng)選擇有直接影響?如無,為什么選擇美國大學(xué)本科?
個(gè)人努力:
然后,就是小伙伴們向大學(xué)證明自己真的輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè)、茶飯不思、懸梁刺股、炒雞炒雞想讀這個(gè)系的好時(shí)候啦!
我:報(bào)告大學(xué),我才不是思想的巨人,行動(dòng)的矮子呢!我可腳踏實(shí)地啦!
大學(xué):那就證明一波唄。每年辣么多人申請(qǐng),我干嘛非要招你?
我:那當(dāng)然是因?yàn)椤獙W(xué)術(shù)篇:上學(xué)期間你是如何儲(chǔ)備相關(guān)知識(shí)的=你選擇的A-Level(alevel)科目對(duì)你理解這個(gè)科目有什么作用?
課余你是如何儲(chǔ)備相關(guān)知識(shí)的=讀過的書、看過的電影、聽過的講座、follow過的節(jié)目?
平常有沒有多看書多讀報(bào)?
近期你申請(qǐng)科目的領(lǐng)域里有沒有發(fā)生什么大事件?你是否讀過相關(guān)的報(bào)道分析?這些事件如何啟發(fā)了你?
經(jīng)歷篇:(在你到目前的所有經(jīng)歷里找和報(bào)的科系關(guān)聯(lián)度最高噠?。┠闶欠駞⒓舆^任何活動(dòng)或競(jìng)賽?這些活動(dòng)與你申請(qǐng)的學(xué)科有無直接關(guān)系?如有,你收獲了什么?如無,這個(gè)活動(dòng)對(duì)你有什么特殊意義/對(duì)你起到了怎樣的幫助值得你寫進(jìn)文書?
你是否有過任何工作或社會(huì)活動(dòng)經(jīng)驗(yàn)(包括班干部、學(xué)校圖書管理員啥的)?是有償或志愿?如有償,你工作的目的與對(duì)這個(gè)科目的興趣有關(guān)嗎?如無償,你認(rèn)為自己從中獲得最大的收獲是什么?是否有任何個(gè)人興趣愛好或特殊才能?這些特長對(duì)自己/未來對(duì)大學(xué)有什么幫助?
國際生:你認(rèn)為自己有足夠的英語水平應(yīng)對(duì)美國的大學(xué)課程嗎?你過去有完成過任何純英教學(xué)的課程嗎?有無任何證據(jù)能顯示你具備良好的適應(yīng)與交流能力(在美國高中參加辯論隊(duì)會(huì)是個(gè)炒雞好的例子?。??
附加信息:
還有一些關(guān)于自己的額外信息,同學(xué)們千萬記得提供哦!
deferredentry:有g(shù)ap year的計(jì)劃嗎?如有,打算利用這一年完成什么事情?(記得要證明自己并沒有荒廢青春哦)已經(jīng)過了gapyear?過去一年都做了什么事情/為自己的大學(xué)生活做了什么準(zhǔn)備?
AS成績不太理想是否有任何非人為不可控因素的干擾?是否有任何證據(jù)能說服大學(xué)你的A2預(yù)估成績妥妥的?
國際學(xué)生這一條真不是歧視。但我們要用自己棒棒噠的英語表述證明自己一點(diǎn)都不比本地學(xué)生弱!分分鐘寫作水平還高過美國同學(xué)好嗎!
美國留學(xué)個(gè)人陳述寫作要避免出現(xiàn)以下幾種情況。
1、內(nèi)容空洞
對(duì)于PS一定要結(jié)合實(shí)例來寫,用例子來展示自己的能力,對(duì)所申專業(yè)的熱愛等。而很多申請(qǐng)人寫出來的美國大學(xué)文書PS,很多是陳述自己有哪方面的能力,對(duì)專業(yè)很有興趣,有學(xué)習(xí)的能力,動(dòng)手能力強(qiáng),把這些個(gè)人特點(diǎn)放到文章中,卻沒有下文,來支持上面的論點(diǎn),毫無說服力。
一篇好的美國留學(xué)申請(qǐng)文書PS是用例子來充實(shí)的,申請(qǐng)人的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)和能力也是通過例子向讀者展示的,而不是簡單的列舉出來。
2、主次不分,沒有邏輯
很多申請(qǐng)人寫出來的美國大學(xué)文書PS,讓人看了之后分不清主次,不知道作者主要想表達(dá)什么意思,也看不出來作者有什么能吸引人的地方。
3、啰嗦,語言不夠簡練
美國碩士留學(xué)申請(qǐng)中,很多同學(xué)寫的美國留學(xué)申請(qǐng)文書PS語言都不夠簡練,認(rèn)為寫的多效果好,而事實(shí)遠(yuǎn)非如此。
適當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用感嘆句或語氣詞容易讓讀者形成共鳴,但在一篇美國大學(xué)文書PS中,反復(fù)出現(xiàn)這樣的句子,尤其是相似的句子就顯得矯情了,更不能打動(dòng)讀者。
美國留學(xué)個(gè)人陳述范文。
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE
’For Knowledge Itself Is Power’. This is one of my favorite precepts and at this point in my life when I am about to complete my graduation and my future spreads in front of me like a dream, this adage has never influenced my life more than this before.
Knowledge and proper training are essential to succeed in today's highly competitive world. The best place where I can achieve this is in the United States of America - the undisputed leader in developing new products and processes. Not only is America the birthplace of my chosen field of study, it has also nurtured it for it's full growth and continuous development. To achieve my goals, I want to pursue a Master's program in Computer Science. It is the ideal way for me to gain the knowledge and skills to stand tall as a computer professional.
During my undergraduate studies, I acquired a comprehensive knowledge of computer hardware in all its complexity. I also learnt of diverse software and their applications. The highly dedicated teaching staff of my college taught me the various concepts involved in the field of computer engineering. Some of the subjects I studied were computer graphics, computer methodology and algorithms, logic circuits, principles of communication engineering, C programming, object oriented programming as well as programming using different tools.
I take a keen interest in Networking and Database Management Systems. As a part of my final year curriculum, I am working on a project with one of the India's finest web-site designing companies - MicroGiga Info. Sys. Ltd. The aim of the project is to create a web-site. The web-site, called "Jobs4All", aims to provide the user with a job depending upon his qualifications. Various database concepts', programming scripts and the maintenance of a server are some of the features included in our web-site. Some of the products and tools used are ASP scripts, Java scripts, Microsoft Access '97, Personal Web Server, etc. I am also interested in System Programming. For this very reason, I have selected Compiler Construction as the elective subject for my final year.
There is truly no end to learning, as this has become a world where a constant addition to abilities is the key to growth in a dynamic world. I am fortunate to belong to a family that places a high value of education. I have been given all the encouragement and facility to develop my talents and interests. I have completed several courses in public speaking and leadership training. Sports, music and reading also fill my life. I was also one of the organizer's for the Open Software competition in TECHNOMANIA '98, which is an inter-college festival annually, organized annually by my college. I am also an active participant in various events held in other institutes.
I seek to fulfill my goals in an environment that encourages creativity and motivation. I feel confident that the staff and facilities in your institute will provide me with such an environment. I am well aware of the demands of studying in the more competitive American environment. I am certain that I am mentally and physically competent to succeed at your school. I am basically a hard working and a sincere person. My enthusiasm and urge to excel will help me to make the best use of every learning opportunity.
In conclusion I would like to say that the knowledge gained from 4 years of engineering has provided me with a solid foundation. This will certainly help me in my desire to specialize in my chosen field. My country India has a thriving software industry. I aim to study abroad and return with the skill and competence to find my mark and be a vital part of this booming, futuristic industry. I assure you of my sincerity, dedication and hard work.