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專業(yè)：計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)
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評(píng)分：五星
When a friend asked me： “Why do you like computer science?” I found myself unable to give an answer. However， from that moment on， I tried to understand what makes computer science so attractive for me.
評(píng)：個(gè)人陳述第一段很關(guān)鍵，決定了招生官對(duì)你的第一印象。申請(qǐng)者以問句入文，并形成全文的中心問題——計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)為什么吸引我。
My passion for computer science started in the 9th grade， when I started studying it as part of the intensive informatics curriculum in my high school. What struck me at first was the immense processing power that I had at my disposal by means of the computer， but it took a while for me to discover that this power was insufficient for trivial algorithms. This made me want to know more， so I bought “Introduction to Algorithms” by Thomas H. Cormen. This book presented me with a completely new world， the world of algorithms. In addition to this， I learned a lot of new aspects of this field and I practically decided that computer science is what I wanted to do further on. That‘s how it all started.
評(píng)：承接第一段，申請(qǐng)者通過回憶小學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)來解答這個(gè)問題，講述如何與計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)結(jié)緣，比較自然。
In the academic year 2006-2007， I participated in an excellence course on the subject of computer science. This made me gain experience， on one hand in informatics， and on the other hand in social relations. I learned to be more creative， to listen to other people’s opinions and I developed my communication abilities， along with improving my skills in programming. Moreover， I participated in many national contests where I faced new challenges and where I learned more about this field. In 2007， I received first place at the National Informatics Olympiad bynet， which gave me the opportunity to take part at the national informatics team selection. In the same year I also won second place at the National Contest “Grigore Moisil”。
評(píng)：進(jìn)一步，申請(qǐng)者談了自己在計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)上的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，展示了自身的學(xué)術(shù)成績(jī)，并舉了在國(guó)家信息學(xué)奧林匹亞競(jìng)賽等賽事中獲得了第一、二名的例子。一兩個(gè)例子恰到好處表現(xiàn)了學(xué)術(shù)能力，塑造了自信好學(xué)的個(gè)人形象。
One of my best experiences worth mentioning took place during May-August 2008， when I worked as a volunteer at the SNAC Romania association. Along with a graphics designer and a logopedist， I developed educational software for children with disabilities (dyslalia， dyslexia， late speaking)， the programming aspect being realized entirely by me. The software was made entirely in C++， using the SDL library (http://libsdl.org)， and consisted of over 15000 lines of code. This experience helped me understand how a project must be managed， how to respect deadlines and how to improve my computer science abilities.