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根據(jù)中文提示和英文書信內(nèi)容，寫一封意思連貫，符合邏輯，不少于 60 詞的回信，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入所完成的回信內(nèi)。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫劉京，是美國中學(xué)生托尼的筆友，你收到了他的來信。請給托尼寫一封回信，回答他的問題，介紹北京良好的公交服務(wù)，并淡談你的感受。
Hi! Liu Jing，
My grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he has heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himself.He says the bus service in Beijing is very good now，and people can go anywhere by bus.Is he right? Can you tell me something more about it?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours，
Tony
Hi! Tony，
I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing._______
If you have more questions，please ask me.
Yours，
Liu Jing
名師解析
1.試題解讀
這則書面表達(dá)要求考生寫一則回信，內(nèi)容涉及北京良好的公交服務(wù)。公交服務(wù)與考生日常生活息息相關(guān)，故該寫作任務(wù)所涉及的寫作內(nèi)容具體，只要平時(shí)稍作留意應(yīng)會有所了解。動手寫作時(shí)能詳細(xì)加以表達(dá)。但寫作要求中不僅涉及介紹，還涉及談?wù)摳惺?，故考生?yīng)注意表達(dá)內(nèi)容全面，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，所表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)盡量有自己的獨(dú)特性，這樣才能在數(shù)篇中考作文中脫穎而出。
2.寫作信息要點(diǎn)
① 回信的基本客套語;
② 介紹北京良好的公交服務(wù);
③ 談?wù)撟约簩Ρ本┕环?wù)的看法。
3.可用素材
(1) 詞匯：
bus service，excellent，seat，environment，wait for a bus，tickets，cheap，good manners，take，bus lines，spend
(2) 句式：
① It's right that your grandpa says that the bus service in Beijing is very good now.
② It's true that the bus service in Beijing is very good now.
③ There is no trouble for your grandpa to go anywhere in Beijing.
④ There are bus lines all over.
⑤ I believe your grandpa will enjoy our good bus service here.
4.注意事項(xiàng)
(1) 寫回信應(yīng)對來信中所提及的問題有針對性地進(jìn)行回答，不可避重就輕;
(2) 注意正確使用信件的格式;
(3) 介紹北京良好的公交服務(wù)應(yīng)為本文的重點(diǎn)寫作內(nèi)容;
(4) 注意避免表達(dá)的語言平淡化。
滿分文展示 1
Dear Tony，
I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing.
(①What your grandpa say is right.)The bus service in Beijing is now really very good.(②As a matter of fact，buses play an important role in our daily life.)(③It's very convenient to travel everywhere because there are bus lines all over，even to villages.)There are bus stops here and there，so you needn't wait for a long time.What's more，the tickets are very cheap.(④The drivers are not only good at driving but also kind to passengers.)
I really enjoy taking a bus here.(⑤It's so comfortable here.)
If you have more questions，please ask me.
Yours，
Liu Jing
旁批
① What your grandpa says 在句中為一個(gè)主語從句，屬于語法高級結(jié)構(gòu)。
② As a matter of fact 在句中起過渡作用，后面的 play an important role 表示“充當(dāng)重要角色”，是一個(gè)高級詞匯。
③ 這是一個(gè)主從復(fù)合句，其中 it's convenient to do 句型表示“做某事是方便的”。屬于高級表達(dá)方式。
④ 該句中使用了 not only... but also... 結(jié)構(gòu)，該結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，使表達(dá)尤為簡潔明了。
⑤ 此處是一個(gè) so... that... 引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句，表明了作者的觀點(diǎn)和態(tài)度。 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文
Dear Tony，
I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing.
Your grandpa is right.The bus service in Beijing is really good now.There are bus lines all over.Buses can even take you to a small village.Besides，special seats are offered on buses.People do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap.
I like taking a bus because I think it's comfortable and also good for the environment.So it's a good choice for your grandpa to travel by bus in Beijing. If you have more questions，please ask me.
Yours，
Liu Jing
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