高考英語卷滿分作文

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    第一節(jié) 情景作文(20分)
    假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華為響應(yīng)綠化祖國的號(hào)召, 你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹。請(qǐng)根據(jù)一下四幅圖的先后順序, 介紹指數(shù)活動(dòng)的全過程, 給某英文雜志的"綠色行動(dòng)"專欄寫一篇以"Green Action in Our Class"為題的英文稿件。
    注意: 字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60。
    提示詞: 郊區(qū) suburbs
    

    April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it's our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
    【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
    本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文,與環(huán)保結(jié)合,立意較好。文章思路清晰,要點(diǎn)連貫,在語言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎,同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達(dá)。
    第二節(jié) 開放作文(15分)
    根據(jù)下面提示, 寫一篇短文, 字?jǐn)?shù)不少于50.
    In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
    

    What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it's a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don't need to copy others' ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.
    【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
    本文是開放性作文,要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容,發(fā)散表達(dá)??忌攸c(diǎn)要看出這個(gè)人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國人,要體會(huì)到西式刀叉對(duì)中式食物的矛盾性。行文結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰,同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。
    
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