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2012上海高考考試的作文題目：
描述你在學(xué)校的一次午餐，具體要求如下：
詳細(xì)描述用餐的情況
簡要表述你對這次午餐的感受
這是一篇簡單卻需要挖掘的文章，因為如果只是描述用餐情況，顯然缺乏深度，夸夸其談，流于表面。學(xué)生拿到這樣的題目需要仔細(xì)考慮用餐背后的東西。比較容易想到的話題是食物浪費、用餐衛(wèi)生、餐桌禮儀等。在創(chuàng)作范文中，筆者另辟蹊徑，通過大多數(shù)同齡人用餐時的匆忙來襯托“我”的悠然自得，凸顯出在緊張的高中學(xué)生生涯中，作者能夠留有一片心靈凈土，通過飲食來調(diào)節(jié)情緒，更好地面對挑戰(zhàn)，表現(xiàn)出樂觀的人生態(tài)度。此文結(jié)構(gòu)簡單，文筆清新，語言精準(zhǔn)，并運用了高中階段常見的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，不失為一個很好的作文模板，供學(xué)生借鑒。
范文：
The instant the bell indicating the end of the last class rang, out of the classroom poured all students but one。
Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry to make a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroom for homework. I arrived at the canteen when a massive queue had formed.Waiting for my turn patiently, I smelled the aroma of the appetizing food. Greasy as some dishes might be, the wide range of food prepared by the school was superior in nutritional value to that found elsewhere.
The typical schedule of a highschooler is extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch break is a rare time when overworked students can wind down and enjoy the pleasure provided by the flavorful food. I make it a point to pampermy taste buds by savoring every little bit of taste in food.What I usually like to do over lunch is have a mindless conversation with a couple of students who have also learnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. We rounded off our lunch with a dessert, refreshed and satisfied.
Come to think of it, it is not the food but my attitude towards life that affords me pleasure and empowers me in facing up to various challenges.(219words)
一、語法解構(gòu)
現(xiàn)在分詞作定語 the bell indicating the end of the last class rang
倒裝句
(1)out of the classroom pouredall students but one
(2)Greasy as some dishes might be
不定式 I was in no hurry to make a run for the school canteen
狀語從句 I arrived at the canteen when a massive queue had formed。
現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語 Waiting formy turnpatiently,
過去分詞作狀語 the widde range of food prepared by the school was superior
代詞用法
(1)the wide range of foodprepared by the schoolwas superior in nutritional value to that found elsewhere.
(2)enjoy the pleasure provided by the flavorful food
并列句 The typical schedule of a highschooler is extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch break is a rare time
定語從句
(1)thus lunch break is a raretime when overworked students can wind down
(2) a couple of students who have also learnt to smell the roses
主語從句 What I usually like to doover lunch is have a mindless conversation
過去分詞作主語補足語 We rounded off our lunch with a dessert, refreshed and satisfied
強(qiáng)調(diào)句 it is not the food but my attitude towards life that affords me pleasure
二、詞匯解構(gòu)
pour out沖出
rush through草草了事
amassive queue 排長龍
greasy油膩的
aroma香味
extraordinarily 特別地
hectic忙碌
flavorful美味的
wind down休息、放松
pampermy taste buds寵愛我的味蕾
smell the roses [習(xí)語]享受生活
bone-breaking 累人的
empower 給人動力
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